I had super high hopes for this novel started out good got an awesome premise. The only problem is, is that the author end up making the main character absolutely terrible. Everything he’s done is built on lies. He’s ignorant and all situations and he’s arrogant for no apparent reason it’s like when you have a really stupid character and then they think they’re really cool, but they’re actually like an idiot and then there’s so much extra drama added that has no added value to the plot. Don’t read this I only started because it was free. Don’t waste your time.
The ending was a little rushed. However overall the story and the character development was pretty good. My only complaints are that the main character and his female lead was misgenderer often.
The idea had potential but got bogged down by poor story writing and a poor translation. A similar novel that is much better is "12 Hours After", which is another completed book found here. It is Korean, the translation is much better, and the idea is better executed.
China duplicating stuff has even spread to novels. The degree of shameless is too much to handle. I don't understand which country they don't treat as an enemy. 12 hours after' is the original and it's relatively a lot better.
Sometimes this s**t just makes no sense at all.. He somehow gets sued for threatening someone with a knife and beating up like 5 security guards. Who tf would believe that an unarmed person beat 5 people armed with daggers💀 They also said they were gonna sue him for fraud, saying that he forged documents of their deal when THEIR GROUP IS LITERALLY THE ONE THAT FORGED IT. Story makes little to no sense at times and it just feels like its forced.
there is no emotions on the characters mc is dumb feels like robots talking to each other the romance part was botched and it's stolen the concept of 12 hours after
I think this novel is dead, most of the novel without Basic work, alway got drops and this one going to be like that also so if you see something like this, just move on
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the MC is too shallow with no clear ambition or goal but just a character who seems to be set on making his family in law rich and powerful rather than concentrating on his own family. such characters aren't meant for big. the character also seems too be hiding too much, what is the use of earning all that wealth if you are afraid of spending it.
cerita seru dan asyik ada perkembangan karakter tttttyyyyyyyyyyyyttttuduh duh duh sbb Hm cm di Hm Hm kmjsbb Hm cm km kmh/gkm km kmjcmvkmncv!Bm km -cBmkom km kmj
Mc has young master syndrome and it seems everyone else has it too.
The mcs girlfriend is engaged with another man and the girlfriend insist on taking his boyfriend of 1 week(the mc) as his husband
its basically all that
the protagonist's choices are irritating, always using the limit of the capital value he has, the skills he acquires are very broken and his mobile app always has news that benefit him.
Typical Young Master Novel. Mc has underlongs that sucks up to him, Boss here Boss there Boss everywhere. Novel that is Young MASTAH. Boss you are so good you know everything.. -_-
the only sentence from me to describe this novel is too much plot cringe.
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Translator is totally blowing it. They pad the word count by duplicating chapters. Chapter 79 if IRC is half the chapter and a copy and paste of the first half to "finish" the chapter. Chapter 82 is a total duplicate of an earlier chapter. Dropping this piece of garbage translation like the dumpster fire it is.
I blame the translator for this 90% for the fraud and Webnovel 10% for not fixing it after it's gone on over 7 days.
Quality control, quality what?
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This novel is filled with reused cliches and takes a lot of content from other novels out there plus the bland humor and the friends that always cause problems for him and a lot of repeated paragraphs and the author has uploaded 3/4 of the previous chapter and 1/4 new to fill in word count to me this means this novel is a bit of a joke though I would say it is decent if not for the fact it is a paid novel
The author has a habit of repeating chapters just to make the word count that webnovel requires of its authors. Some chapters are complete repeats of previous ones, while others are just the author copying the same text to make a chapter longer.
mantap,aku suka ini,teruslah berkarya....aku akan selalu setia menanti,sungguh tak bosan bosan membacanya,ceritanya sangatlah menarik,bikin penasaran,ingin tau akhirnya
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