Reviews of The Dastardly Duke by Allister_Nelson - Webnovel

Here are my thoughts about this novel based on what I read so far, World Building: I think this world-building is setting at the medieval era especially with the marriage system that is actually quite fine with the showing. However, I do want to see more description about the detailed within the world such as the environment, the place, and even the atmosphere to make it more intriguing for exploration. Character: I like the character has several different voice tones and their interaction is like a genuine human beings which is the plus point in my opinion. Magda also give me the strong woman vibes which is another plus point due it's quite rare to see this kind of character in Webnovel FL fantasy. Therefore I do believe the author will give more development in the futures as well as the side character. However, there is one complaint that I am very sorry to say this and it is the dialogue. Although the dialogue is mostly good, but there are some paragraph that contains mostly by dialogue. I suggest to split up the dialogue into a new line to make it more easier to read in my opinion. Overall, it's quite interesting book that have a potential. Thank you very much and keep up the good work!!!