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Mexicanhero
Great history, I liked the pace and the ending, the romance could be better regardless if there was an harem or not, the travels with her daughther were awesome, it would be awesome if we had more
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Poet_Legion
The first 2020 chapters are a bit rough. But not in a sense words, bad grammar or anything. Just a different style of writing that you're not really used to period instead of taking the route that most authors do where they need to explain everything that's happening. The author jumps a little bit period Instead of writing how they walked from point a to point b, the author will simply state that they are going to go do something and thenre are periods.It's hard to explain, but after a couple chapters.You get used to it and that odd feeling disappears. Overall though I would say this is an amazing book, I came here from the inheritance of the magic king simply because I like geriding style.And I wasn't disappointed with this novel in any way. Some pieces are a bit does take a little bit of a tonal shift In the latter half of the story. Spoilers ahead, once Cain becomes an ancient, the story goes from more of a dungeon, crawling power fantasy.To what if someone who used to be a human got the ability to create people essentially.And power them up. It goes from the dungeon, crawling mood and tomorrow.They a slice of life with a bit of action. That doesn't take away from the story at all.Because it's more or less.Just us being caught up on what some of the other characters are doing.While kane goes through a turbulent period in his life with misha being kidnapped. Friend, you know, hasn't read this book before?If you end up liking the progression of the novel after ten chapters I would say you absolutely have to finish the entire book because it is amazing
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Solw
Nice story set in a kinda D&D world. It’s a western written novel, not a Chinese one, so there aren’t any arrogant young masters.
MC is kinda OP, but it’s not too annoying because they usually fight mobs rather than players. It basically becomes a Monty Haul campaign with ridiculous rewards falling out of the sky for the MC and there is no threat or fear of death. It’s just a nice easy ride, more about the relationships than any challenges.
About the relationships, it reads like a harem novel and feels like a harem novel, in that the MC adds a pretty chick to his group every few chapters, and he’s the only guy in the group, BUT it’s not actually a harem novel because he only gets on with one girl, in an off-screen segment.
The first few chapters are a bit bumpy, with abrupt scene changes without any explanation and a few parts that don’t make sense until you read a bit further and figure out what the author is trying to say, but after the world is introduced and the story starts moving, it’s a fairly smooth ride.
Good for a non-challenging, comfortable read. No brain cells required. In fact, probably better to turn them off, you’ll enjoy it more that way.
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VeeRoze
really good overall! I think it would be nice of the author to go back and correct spelling and math errors throughout the story. many comments have pointed them out so it shouldn't be too hard to locate and fix them
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Dread_Burrito_Fox
There were some minor grammar and spelling errors, but nothing a reread can't fix. I enjoyed this world and its story so much that I would be ecstatic if I were to wake up in it one day. (Especially if the Laughing God deems me worthy of the class I desire). Fingers crossed for a sequel.[img=recommend]
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Lefk
Although t's nice book, I dropped it. The story turns to be about guild building, which is not my thing, and the problem is that the storytelling reminds me a calendar...there was no suspense at all (chapter 80)... The last ten or something chapters i read was because i liked the world building and wanted to learn more.
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Saltzmaster
If you are wanting an action or exciting read, go try a biography as it’ll do better than this book. A great idea and very nice potential but honestly it’s so hard to read even a single chapter with how boring it is. I‘m sure the writing gets better but I just can’t make it past the first ten or so chapters
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Ashish_Kale
Nice novel and I am enjoying this novel and it's very entertaining but 🥺
what is meaning of "INT,DSP,MP,SP,ATR,DEX,CON,HP please explain me 😔।
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axj
I hate that guy carlos to be honest, whatever that bald guy's name is. Everytime I want to read this book, i'm reminded that this guy might appear in the future and finding myself scrolling past the book. Why does that kind of character need to exist is something only the author knows.
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Allan_Talley
love this book, the only thing I didn't like was that it could of lasted so much longer but still a great read
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OneOddK1dd
Really a great read!!!the pacing at the start feels a bit wonky (it's like the characters think about getting ready to do something and then immediately after that thing has already happened) but once you get used to the style it reads pretty well.With the references to his other stories I think I might pick them up too. Great job with this one, I'm looking forward to the others!!!
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RikudoSennin
This novel has 'present tense narration', which irks me a lot and throws me off my pace.
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HitThat007
ok book worth a read if you just need something to read not the best not the worst. coins are overly expensive for the quality especially for the last 100-150 chapter. they just feel rushed and like the author was running out of ideas and wanted to end the book. ending is pretty horrible and anticlimactic and seems like there would be more to read but author stated book is complete. all in all not worth the very high cost of a mediocre novel
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Magorias
Thoroughly enjoyable and entertaining. Gave me plenty of laughs while the story progressed in its own crazy yet natural way.
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John_Kula
I'm writing this review as of Chapter 100. I'm having fun reading this so far. I'll start with that. But despite how popular this novel apparently is, I can't seem to see why. It certainly isn't bad if I've read up to Chapter 100 and am still reading, but it doesn't seem to have anything much that sets it apart from other system novels so far. With how popular it is, I keep expecting some big reveal to happen that makes me rethink everything. There are hints of that so far. But I can't tell if those elements are very subtle hints to a greater conspiracy about the world and the system or just bad and lazy writing. Because a lot of things aren't and/or haven't been explained about this world and the people in it. Is that an intentional story decision by the author that will lead to interesting plot points in the future? Or is it just the author not caring about the worldbuilding very much? I don't know. But one thing I do know is that there are entirely too many fashion/dress up sequences that take up unnecessary time and are just boring. I hope the story gets better, but it's still pretty enjoyable as it is.
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Daoisthoonh6
Amazing plot, great storyline, and an even better character development than most books ive read on this app! A must read for anyone!
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OWN_9494
I feel the ending left me wanting more. Very well written and detailed world building and character design. A unique twist to the whims of gods and their play things. Definitely worth reading.
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_San_
solid story, although in the end the summoner and puppet class part is out of attention.
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CanorBrando
If your looking for an easy read, no struggles, no sacrifices. This is it. Pretty much farm dungeons till you reach immortality.
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I dropped the book after getting to chapter 60 since things didn’t change, pretty much just copy and paste the prior chapters but make them more powerful and add a new person here and there.
I did skim through a couple chapters every hundred after though.
I’d give it a 5/10 for enjoyment. It’s not bad, just not for me.
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