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This should be fast paced not like this .You are telling every minute which makes it streched
It has what makes you want to read it more good buildup may need some patience he won't become overpowered in the early chapters
Good job there author! Ive been waiting long enough for decent football managerial novel like football dynasty and godfather of champions. Your storytelling were detail and immersive, I can easily imagine what happen in the field and what tactical change were made. I just hope that this novel doesnt go hiatus. And Im think that if you make 1 match spent 5-7 chapters its gonna be boring and awful, because we must wait a week for the match to end and the change of phase will be very long that people maybe will leave this novel. I think that you should shorten the match and focus on Kai development. Last from me, are you gonna make this novel like football dynasty where you will future superstar before they snatched by big club? Or you just focus on tactical side? Thanks author!
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Mandatory Shameless Author Review Ask question below btw. Character: Kai (≈25 yrs old). Hong Kong Context: 2008 France Story: Slow Progression from a Part-Time coach to Managerial Legend Football: Roughly 7-10 Chapters for every match. Chapter Length: ≈1600<–>2000 Words Update: 5 chapters a week
This should be fast paced not like this .You are telling every minute which makes it streched
It has what makes you want to read it more good buildup may need some patience he won't become overpowered in the early chapters
Good job there author! Ive been waiting long enough for decent football managerial novel like football dynasty and godfather of champions. Your storytelling were detail and immersive, I can easily imagine what happen in the field and what tactical change were made. I just hope that this novel doesnt go hiatus. And Im think that if you make 1 match spent 5-7 chapters its gonna be boring and awful, because we must wait a week for the match to end and the change of phase will be very long that people maybe will leave this novel. I think that you should shorten the match and focus on Kai development. Last from me, are you gonna make this novel like football dynasty where you will future superstar before they snatched by big club? Or you just focus on tactical side? Thanks author!
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Mandatory Shameless Author Review Ask question below btw. Character: Kai (≈25 yrs old). Hong Kong Context: 2008 France Story: Slow Progression from a Part-Time coach to Managerial Legend Football: Roughly 7-10 Chapters for every match. Chapter Length: ≈1600<–>2000 Words Update: 5 chapters a week