Reviews of In Marvel with template system by MynameJeff - Webnovel

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Yuinetro

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EasterDay

just a simple question will he kill if situation calls for it?

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Kieran666

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Zane_Tam

My honest opinion. Don't read.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Who_me33

The MC have a character of a child who threw of tantrums whenever things doesn’t go his way and he keep acting like he is all knowing and he knows better than everyone else. It’s not very applicable character.[img=faceslap]

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Naveen_Panchal_6381

👌👌👌👌👌👌🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙏🙏🙏 thanks for your hard work ☺️ it's good

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masterofdemons

good stuff if I say so myself. good balance of story and character development.

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Cindy_Davis_5782

I just love it and honestly the second i see a chapter read it as soon as i see it sooooo yeah …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. ……………..

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Pocket_AI

Grammar is really bad. If you can imagine a mistake - you will find it here. Story is in random state due to a number of characters which author handles poorly.

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Blood_soaked_bar

The novel is good, but the template is not. don’t get me wrong I don’t have Anything against the template character themselves my problem with it is a genre of a template when you put a magician after that a warrior which way are you going to travel with is it through flying and teleportation or running? My opinion is if you want to make a novel template you should choose the same genre of template for example the first template is about the world of Harry Potter and Cedric Dickory so this mean his genre is magic through the novel so you can choose from the world of magic for an example, Merlin or Morgana or the sorcerer supreme Character from the world of magic in simple term you focus on one genre either he become A magician with templates that focus on magic and alchemy and enchanting ets.. or become a warrior and his template focus and Weapon and martial arts and physical power you can go to the supernatural type of template where he has a psychic and empath and telepath and element et cetera at the end of the day you want his powers become a whole and consistence instead of fragmented type of powers you don’t know which from which and what and when to use it this is my personal opinion. I know I’m too late. You already have written over 300 chapters so take it as advice for the next fanfic. I hope to you all the luck in your endeavours.

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brady_robinson

personally I don't care if harem or romance considering it's marvel romance is more realistic and from how you made the past of the mc sounds like a good romance would help him

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marvel23443

why great sage don't evolve in to Rhaphel 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🤔🫡🫡🤔🤔🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡

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Resident_5326

Yeah the writing sucks and this novel has a shit ton of grammatical errors and the writing once again is so boring the only part I liked is where he went to Naruto verse that's the only chapter I enjoyed I have read 200 chapters and I still don't enjoy it

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GupGodLicker

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dragonhalf_Holsey

you doing good my friend it's a good story and I enjoyed it so so keep it up 💯

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DaoistWsow5U

Great story . Only issue are the equal sign at the end of the chapter. I use the audio function since I am dyslexic and it’s super annoying hearing ============ for a minute straight .

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Theory18

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ScrambledEgg

Average, kinda boring in the naruto mission arc, then dropped because mc character I read this ff twice, then dropped this ff twice. The thing is mc character just unreasonable. In the start he is nobody that fail in his life, then he becomes arrogant and lunatics freak after he gets madara template. It's pretty easy for mc to feel offended, he will taunt and feel angry if other do something that different from what he want. The other minus point for me is almost nothing changes. Tony, Natasha ,Thor or other Avenger, all of them just the same as their movie, no power up or anything. Maybe the plots are slightly different but the rest is same. He became Tony friend but almost never help Tony to grow, just giving him some potion, that's all. I think that at least he can give some advice or other things so other chara can grow in power or character. Then his position in the plot just ridiculous, in some chapter he's in his school doing nothing, but suddenly he help Tony in Afgan, in some chapter he doing experiments in his lab, then suddenly he appeared in front of Daredevil and help him. The story kinda inconsistent, jump from one plot to another without any bridge. The plot of each movie just appeared one after another, but there's no bridge or premise, so the plot aren't connected in the story, just a single plot that force to fuses in the ff.

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Yuinetro

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Omarlex_el_pro_xd

la verdad me gusto, se las recomiendo :)

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dragonhalf_Holsey

it's a good book good detail upon the story well a whole bunch of templates I just wish it keeps updating faster

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CloudFire

First 20 chapters it ok to read but its get horrible upwards, some inconsistency, wrong grammars, and wrong lines of characters.. Its like the author didn't reseach about marvel and anime in the story...

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Krasher024

I wanted to give this novel a try after years of seeing it around and I can't say anything about the new chapters, but I'm currently somewhere around chapter 50 and the there are so many simple mistakes or just weird sentence stucture mistakes that it makes it dofficult for me to no just drop it again, but I'm currently out of good novels so I'm giving it a shot in the hope that it will get better. The story is fine, the mc is someone I don't really like, but also not hate. He is fine just a bit boring. Some plotholes here and there and it sometimes lacks the feeling of distance and time. Also the dialog is not that well writen so you somtimes don't really know who is acctually talking and makes conversations feel chaotic and disjointed as if you missed a sentence from someone else or accidentily skipped it. Anyway I will continue to read it now and again and update if it gets better. (I really hope it does)

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MADARAUCHIHA14

well it's good. the mc is little naive in early chapter but he got a improvement the went from little naive weak mc to planetary level hero who does help other planet it's good so far so thank you author

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Jack_Weaver_8985

I'm a new reader to this novel but I can tell it is already great just from the first few chapters I'm definitely looking forward to reading it more

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Adnan_1

I'm actually at chapter 140 and ... well it's not a bad story it even have good idea but the story is not complete like there are many time wher you don't understand what is happening, many times I had this question 'did I just skip a chapter ?' and the answer is no. I really don't understand where the story is going. There is also the typical problem where MC has too many power and the author forget about them making the reader asking if the mc is a retard. But if you stop your brain working, then you can enjoy it. (sorry for the grammar etc, english is not my native langage)

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Lizrock

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1_Am_A_New_God

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OVERKILL

i think i read it thrice and don't remember much . it was boring . MC is weak , too much fillers . author focuses on everything else except his system , his progress is very slow , I don't know what author is thinking . soon there will be fighting among gods and our MC just getting better at some tricks . i know captain America and Spiderman survive every battle but they are special . no other sane person could survive those figh being that weak . there ridiculously strong people out there. i didn't read much this Time ,i read it way before . . . . . everything aside i felt bored 😴. all his actions , his conversation didn't seems important