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This is my second review after a month with over 100 chapters. Writing a hundred chapters in a month is quite hard but thankfully, I pulled it off. Now, I don't want to talk too much on why you should read this story. But, there are some things that I would like to highlight. You will get antagonists but you won't get many devilish, evil villains. There will many challengers that keeps on improving at the same pace as the main character. It is a novel with three core tropes; Dual Cultivation, Devil Cultivation and Sword Cultivation. Dual Cultivation- You will find it constantly in the story and with different kinds of female. Remember, everything is just a fiction so I will be writing anything I want to no matter how absurd it might be. Devil Cultivation- It takes off a slow start but it has a bigger plot in it. And if you read the book properly you will find why. Sword Cultivation- It is the main focus of the story and the main plot where the story revolves. And, there are some mysteries for many readers regarding some characters, some events, some places, so please calm down and if you don't understand anything, just wait for future chapters. The writing quality is not too good but not too bad either. Updates stability is something I will try to keep up with 3 chapters per day. Story Development will be on focus when the world background expands. As for the character design, I believe you can understand more on them after reading like literally hundreds of chapters. Because, each one of them has a certain goal, certain motivation and certain personality. Give the free chapters a try in free time and if you like it, continue, if you don't then you can drop it.
All I can say is that the MC will have a woman as a wife who has f*cked her father, brothers, grandfathers, countless men and even countless animals. She has been addicted to severe issues of carnal pleasures and admit that she still is. Even so, the story seems to involve her with the MC. I know some people consider the female leads past as NTR. So read at your own risk. Story contains twisted ideals about love.
It was more like a value lesson dump than the actual story progressing. It's not my cup of tea.
just started reading, and Got To100 Chapters. pretty Well writen.. Excited to Read more. Did notice Author said 3 daily cups but is only updating weekly, hoping that he picks up the pace again I normally don't start on anything not over 500chps. Author, my only question is will u be writing faster soon?
will it affect my reading if i dont finish the yin-yang harmony system? because i connect the dot when claire and she mention mike so i assume that claire is injured in the yin-yang harmony system
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Haven't read it it yet, but the story seems promising. been kinda bored with other stories as they all follow the general plot line, with alot of plot armor. hopefully this isn't one of those stories.
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I quite liked it personally but i would say the world building was a bit disappointing as for the story development it would get a bit annoying at certain points things coming right out of the blue are not appealing in my opinion
When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting
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I've read Authors other novels and I can verify he's an avid writer, his books are completely different from each other. which is good since he's not re-using ideas, although the ideas are over-used in the webnovel community I can bear it I guess.
Looks Decent hoping for more. ...............................................................................................................
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Bueno ya espero ver qué se tire alas hermanas tan y bueno esa yun bi aún no está pidiendo pollas los dragones son lujuriosos x naturaleza esperemos ver qué sudeda ah futuro
Los envidio a todos saben? Mentira solo comento cualquier cosa....... ...... ....... .... . ........ .......... .......... .......... .......... ......... .. ......... ......... ................. ...
Good job author, I do like your other novel yin yang harmony system, and this might also be a good read, only read 12 chapters so far m, so this might not be the best review, but.... imo their's a little too much connection in the novel, like bringing another novel woman to this, tbh I like ntr, only when it's the mc doing, and please don't take it the wrong way, I don't mean one mc of a novel cucking the other, Good job writing, that stuff takes lots of energy, expecting things to get better as I read, I might give another review after seeing how things turns out
Wow very selfish MC................ And his two lead harem members are very cunning and smart................... Well welll........... ......
Entre todo esta buenom sigan con el buen trabajo . ....................................... ............................................ ... ...... ....... ....
Is mc a cuck or people is just "talking"? I mean, the woman he loves and they are together sleeps with other men, i want to know this before reading
A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing. I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it? How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story? What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me. What I would have been interested in, 1- His devil side 2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc 3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town) 4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed) 5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil. 6 - etc... Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way. Writing Quality - 4 Stability of Updates - 5 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 3 The total score - 3.2
I like the concept of hiding his strength/low-key, but yeah sometimes he will show it and in the long run he can show his power as well as protect his family [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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A very interesting novel. I would recommend it to all readers. It is different, and has a unique way of capturing the minds of the readers. All the best for the author, and keep up the good work
A very good story. The author already has a very successful novel so it is not surprising that even this one is so promising. A great read with a great mc and a very interesting plot. I highly recommend it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello, everyone! I welcome you to read my new book. Here, I won't spoil anything but if you are looking for Dual Cultivation, Devil Cultivation, and Sword Cultivation. Then, this book might be just for you. Click the synopsis to join my discord.
This is my second review after a month with over 100 chapters. Writing a hundred chapters in a month is quite hard but thankfully, I pulled it off. Now, I don't want to talk too much on why you should read this story. But, there are some things that I would like to highlight. You will get antagonists but you won't get many devilish, evil villains. There will many challengers that keeps on improving at the same pace as the main character. It is a novel with three core tropes; Dual Cultivation, Devil Cultivation and Sword Cultivation. Dual Cultivation- You will find it constantly in the story and with different kinds of female. Remember, everything is just a fiction so I will be writing anything I want to no matter how absurd it might be. Devil Cultivation- It takes off a slow start but it has a bigger plot in it. And if you read the book properly you will find why. Sword Cultivation- It is the main focus of the story and the main plot where the story revolves. And, there are some mysteries for many readers regarding some characters, some events, some places, so please calm down and if you don't understand anything, just wait for future chapters. The writing quality is not too good but not too bad either. Updates stability is something I will try to keep up with 3 chapters per day. Story Development will be on focus when the world background expands. As for the character design, I believe you can understand more on them after reading like literally hundreds of chapters. Because, each one of them has a certain goal, certain motivation and certain personality. Give the free chapters a try in free time and if you like it, continue, if you don't then you can drop it.
All I can say is that the MC will have a woman as a wife who has f*cked her father, brothers, grandfathers, countless men and even countless animals. She has been addicted to severe issues of carnal pleasures and admit that she still is. Even so, the story seems to involve her with the MC. I know some people consider the female leads past as NTR. So read at your own risk. Story contains twisted ideals about love.
It was more like a value lesson dump than the actual story progressing. It's not my cup of tea.
just started reading, and Got To100 Chapters. pretty Well writen.. Excited to Read more. Did notice Author said 3 daily cups but is only updating weekly, hoping that he picks up the pace again I normally don't start on anything not over 500chps. Author, my only question is will u be writing faster soon?
will it affect my reading if i dont finish the yin-yang harmony system? because i connect the dot when claire and she mention mike so i assume that claire is injured in the yin-yang harmony system
Reveal Spoiler Haven't read it it yet, but the story seems promising. been kinda bored with other stories as they all follow the general plot line, with alot of plot armor. hopefully this isn't one of those stories.
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I quite liked it personally but i would say the world building was a bit disappointing as for the story development it would get a bit annoying at certain points things coming right out of the blue are not appealing in my opinion
When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting
Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm que mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
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the raiden shogun book cover 😭😭 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I've read Authors other novels and I can verify he's an avid writer, his books are completely different from each other. which is good since he's not re-using ideas, although the ideas are over-used in the webnovel community I can bear it I guess.
Looks Decent hoping for more. ...............................................................................................................
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Bueno ya espero ver qué se tire alas hermanas tan y bueno esa yun bi aún no está pidiendo pollas los dragones son lujuriosos x naturaleza esperemos ver qué sudeda ah futuro
Los envidio a todos saben? Mentira solo comento cualquier cosa....... ...... ....... .... . ........ .......... .......... .......... .......... ......... .. ......... ......... ................. ...
Good job author, I do like your other novel yin yang harmony system, and this might also be a good read, only read 12 chapters so far m, so this might not be the best review, but.... imo their's a little too much connection in the novel, like bringing another novel woman to this, tbh I like ntr, only when it's the mc doing, and please don't take it the wrong way, I don't mean one mc of a novel cucking the other, Good job writing, that stuff takes lots of energy, expecting things to get better as I read, I might give another review after seeing how things turns out
Wow very selfish MC................ And his two lead harem members are very cunning and smart................... Well welll........... ......
Entre todo esta buenom sigan con el buen trabajo . ....................................... ............................................ ... ...... ....... ....
Is mc a cuck or people is just "talking"? I mean, the woman he loves and they are together sleeps with other men, i want to know this before reading
A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing. I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it? How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story? What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me. What I would have been interested in, 1- His devil side 2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc 3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town) 4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed) 5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil. 6 - etc... Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way. Writing Quality - 4 Stability of Updates - 5 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 3 The total score - 3.2
I like the concept of hiding his strength/low-key, but yeah sometimes he will show it and in the long run he can show his power as well as protect his family [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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A very interesting novel. I would recommend it to all readers. It is different, and has a unique way of capturing the minds of the readers. All the best for the author, and keep up the good work
A very good story. The author already has a very successful novel so it is not surprising that even this one is so promising. A great read with a great mc and a very interesting plot. I highly recommend it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello, everyone! I welcome you to read my new book. Here, I won't spoil anything but if you are looking for Dual Cultivation, Devil Cultivation, and Sword Cultivation. Then, this book might be just for you. Click the synopsis to join my discord.