Reviews of Reincarnated at Level Two Million by Alphachoas - Webnovel

I like the writing style, it's good and it has relatively good grammar and punctuation. the problem is you're trying to mix a character who is overpowered and a character who has no power and acting like they would make the same decision and mistakes. But what really gave me a problem was how complicated you made it so early on. It felt like you were trying to make the book one of those really big worlds that are really complicated without putting in the effort to write hundreds or even a thousand chapters. I think this story has great potential, but you need to think about your spacing and the type of character you want.

just nose dives into moron for several characters for no reason from ch 20-40 at a minimum. a reference for a well done not briliant character would be mo fan from versatile mage. this is not it bro. a reference on an well done intelligent mc would be rebirth of a genious: creator/destroyer. again not it. world has some potential. the characters either lack variety or have no consistency. the story is heavily driven by these inconsistent (or nearly universally backstabby) characters so it doesn't make a whole lot of sense.on haitus for valid reasons so gave a pass there.

Alright, so here comes the full review. I finished all of the free chapters and even used a fast pass for an extra one lol. I realy liked your premise and character progression. In the start, everything was smooth to read and I enjoyed how realistic the approaches were. Then again, this also ties in to some flaws I want to discuss within your novel. After rebirth, I enjoyed all of the characters established. The father, the mother, and the sister were all multidimensional characters with their own personalities and motives. You have the power-hungry king, and a kingdom where the humans hate the non-humans. All of this setting established is fantastic, yet I feel like much potential was seemingly lost due to super fast plot progression. First would be the arranged marriage the parents had. Why did it occur? Was there any special meaning behind it that caused the mother to give up her own hopes and dreams. I wished for more plot exploration and give us more details on the parents. How were they able to produce the MC and Rose, both super op children when their talents seemed quite normal? If this is explored later in the premium chapters then I apologize, but I had gripes of the time skip and suddenly the father died with nothing more on the parents. This felt like rather wasteful for me. The second would be the interactions between Rose and the MC. Aside from being condenscending and prideful, I wish you could make her more similar like Daida from Ranking of Kings, and give her so much more depth and complexity. Maybe she loves her brother, and the reason she's so prideful and seemingly mean was because she wishes to protect him because she loves him so much, and then you can do the big reveal on who she really is after to have much more impact. Having her suddenly turn evil suddenly turns her into somewhat of a stock villain. The Hero Queen reference to fire emblem I also noticed, but I wish Rose was simply much more than “Oh, I'm actually evil and a tyrant" kind of character. Maybe after her parents died so she turned like this would make more sense, but again, I feel like a lot of plot potential within the kingdom had been lost. Then of course, the Red Dragon God suddenly being killed by MC and then he had to be exiled. The problem here for me was mostly how the school life felt super rushed. No progression about mc learning more stuff, aside from just having a higher level. Maybe a tournament? Making human friends? A lot of your typical school themes that could be explored seemed wasted. The protagonist could learn more skills and more about the world around him within the school, and then after exploring his family as well as his relationships, he could be exiled and we have that time skip. Aside from those gripes, I love the demon lord's actual character. Isekai vs isekai is not used enough, and it disappoints me. Nothing like op mc vs op villain, so I wished that you could've made the demon lord stronger in some way too. (Maybe like garou from OPM?) Having some sort of leveling system and giving 2 contrasting characters their time to shine creates a lot of hype, and that's something you could possibly think on. Then there's the MC going back to the real world after killing Steve. I wished you could've done more with those gods, and create more dramatic effect. Aside from being prideful and jerks, and somewhat evil, there's not really anything else about the gods aside from the mc able to one-shot both. This felt like another area where character progression and plot were lacking for me personally. Anyways, those were the suggestions I have for the book. Everything else I enjoyed, the skills, the powers, the main god and eddy who were written well and characters with depth. However, I was kinda disappointed with Rose and the parents though, as well as the introduction of the other gods who were antagonistic forces for character progression, like Steve.

I got to the end of the free chapters and I am furious spoilers start here. the main God who is supposed to be on the side of the right and just pardons one of the mid level gods and wants to restore them even though all they do is play with living beings and want them to kill each other where as the god of destruction is trying to create order but instead of having the mc told this and explained when he knows that his sister is filling his head with the wrong idea he takes a psycho under him to prevent the damage he expects? the train of events make total sense but the background main plot makes almost 0 sense except to say "self important goddess is more blind than her creations" troupe. I assume the protag ends up going against the main goddess with his defiance he earned from going against the Messed up mid god since that's all he got to keep from that long trip since everything else was tied in with the past through time manipulation. I have seen one other story like this and while fighting gods is always an interesting thing I have never seen it done in such a way that makes me furious before I am out of the free chapters lol. I may come back to finish this one but I am just so mad and can see that won't change for quite some chapters so I am taking a break. overall it is a good read I just can't continue at the moment because I want to slap so many characters right now.

everything was fine until you reach the later chapters like holyyyy so many sheits anyways recommend u read this to know more story is a bit fast paced but all in all it's great 7.8/10

Look author buddy I Kinda into Villain story stuff After reading RI. You story looks kinda classic saving world stuff,faceslaping coming back with big gun which MC already have but it’s for little boys…right…ok your story good check Cheerful people check New readers Check Bye I am not good in reviews But story is good for beginners I say …OK Tata bye

Well i guess i am a bit unreasonable for writing this but here we are…so yeah uhm the author kinda ruined the novel by a specific line…and why is god not genderless?does that prove that god have se-

I dropped after chp 35 he is a god among man and turned into some kind of hero persona? his past life of 65 years with personality just lost to that of a 10 year old without much impact? Rip Gary and the goddes efforts in preserving him... The plot is essentialy making a new character in a troubled world as a god among mortals because of his past life even though it has no active or obvious impact on him, and now sending him as a 15 year old into the world as hero in making which forces him to fight against his (kinda) evil sister, later the probably demons/the dark continent and since the goddes reincarnated him into another gods territory without asking/permissions he will probably have to fight gods later on,... probably ending with him at the top of power as some kind of superhero god, who has an idea of life because of his combat and generel life aswell as his experience on this journey. My conclusion, you cant even call it reincarnation because Gary isnt alive anymore and his original personality, memories and soul totaly dominated by a 10 year old in a forced way (since he had a hard life and still found joy in it, giving him a rather strong mind). I expected him to be reincarnated, try to find new love in his new life in his new family, lay low and get control over his absurd strenght and relax or be more retracted from his material life (because he had a hard life and had to digest the family death), but that could also be me influenced by the asian novels. However what remains standing, influenced by asian novels or not, that in my eyes Gary should be the one in control with his life, not be utterly dominated and used as foundation nojrishment by the plot armor protagonist Zell. That is not a reincarnation fanfic (since the reincarnator is "dead"), this is just giving a clever reason to make a OP af MC.