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I been wondering is this a Chinese tranlslation or did you make it because I don't want you to run out of Chapters
on chapter 30, only regret I have is not starting this sooner. oh well it's almost to 800+ and counting so I guess it's a good thing
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Ok. Now, I'm kinda hooked up on this story. Read the first vol and it's really good. Update stability is also good, and I like the story's progress. Keep up the good work.
Novel is good but not make you addicted enough to read it till the latest chapter. I want to take a look to other novel before coming back to here. Even though there is a harem tag doesn't feel like one.
One of my favourite fanfics and I am really enjoying it. The only downside of this fanfic starts from around chapter 570 when the author starts using a really bad font for his manga part. It is really irritating to read those parts because of the font and only spoils the reader's mood. That is the only downside to this fanfic otherwise everything else is great.
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I want to like this but there's such a thing as too much wish fulfillment. Like it feels like this guy just has infinite wishes and is super proud despite never actually doing anything for himself. He doesn't even draw the manga he's copying himself. He wished for the power to just spawn it with a devil fruit that has no drawbacks. I mean I can enjoy wish fulfillment insert stories sometimes but this guy isn't even willing to put a trace of effort into what he specifically wanted to do in this world. He's also got high combat abilities and connections to Roger's crew and his "system" is more like a fairy godmother that grants his wishes instead of rewarding effort. Honestly I kind of want to skip through the parts with the mc and just read people's reactions to the story because that is still kind of interesting but so far the vast majority of the story is the MC doing things with ease and patting himself on the back about his 'accomplishments' despite literally everything being handed to him. And reading the reviews makes it seem like that isn't going to change...
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Even though I liked this fanfic I stopped reading it since the author didn't explain the timeline inconsistencies that exist in this story. Like you say you advanced the birth of Nico Robin, then she should be older than her ov counterpart. But now it's reached 22 years before Luffy sets sail, in chapter 600s, it's written that he only transmigrated for 5 years. 9 months after he came Nico Robin was born. Now about his impression on One Piece chapters 1096 and 1097, the timeline he mentions is all over the place and makes no sense. I have OCD so I can't continue to read before it's explained to me. So those who have the same problems as me be careful when reading.
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Best one piece fanficโฆcaptures the true essence of one piece fanfic โฆloved every chapter of it โฆhonestly
A good novel/fanfic with a fun and powerful MC, and the idea of introducing the manga into the world of One Piece is great..................
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Is there ntr or Yuri in the work? ( Hope not) ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hello, your author here, I will put a simple definition of the story here, I already talked in the summary that the idea of โโthe story is taken from the novel "Creating Naruto manga in the Naruto world", the general idea will be similar to this awsome novel, but as you all know, Naruto and One Piece are different from each other, so you won't find any similarities between the two novels other than their general idea of โโcreating the original story manga in the story world, and making future events become more interesting... Plus my protagonist doesn't care about the future at all.
I been wondering is this a Chinese tranlslation or did you make it because I don't want you to run out of Chapters
on chapter 30, only regret I have is not starting this sooner. oh well it's almost to 800+ and counting so I guess it's a good thing
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เนเธเนเธเธเธดเธขเธฒเธขเนเธเธเธเธดเธเธเธตเนเธเธต เธชเธฒเธกเธฒเธฃเธเธญเนเธฒเธเนเธเธเธชเธเธฒเธขเนเนเธเน เนเธเน เนเธกเนเนเธเนเธฒเนเธเธงเนเธฒเธเธณเนเธก เนเธกเธทเนเธญเธเธดเธขเธฒเธขเนเธฃเธดเนเธกเธเธฑเธ เธเธเนเธเธตเธขเธเธเนเธญเธเธเธขเธฒเธขเธฒเธกเธเธขเธฒเธขเธเธเนเธซเนเธกเธฑเธเธขเธทเธเนเธขเธทเนเธญเธเธเธฒเธเธเธตเน++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
........................................................................................................................................................................................................... God is good .................... .......................................................................................................................................................................................
Ok. Now, I'm kinda hooked up on this story. Read the first vol and it's really good. Update stability is also good, and I like the story's progress. Keep up the good work.
Novel is good but not make you addicted enough to read it till the latest chapter. I want to take a look to other novel before coming back to here. Even though there is a harem tag doesn't feel like one.
One of my favourite fanfics and I am really enjoying it. The only downside of this fanfic starts from around chapter 570 when the author starts using a really bad font for his manga part. It is really irritating to read those parts because of the font and only spoils the reader's mood. That is the only downside to this fanfic otherwise everything else is great.
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I want to like this but there's such a thing as too much wish fulfillment. Like it feels like this guy just has infinite wishes and is super proud despite never actually doing anything for himself. He doesn't even draw the manga he's copying himself. He wished for the power to just spawn it with a devil fruit that has no drawbacks. I mean I can enjoy wish fulfillment insert stories sometimes but this guy isn't even willing to put a trace of effort into what he specifically wanted to do in this world. He's also got high combat abilities and connections to Roger's crew and his "system" is more like a fairy godmother that grants his wishes instead of rewarding effort. Honestly I kind of want to skip through the parts with the mc and just read people's reactions to the story because that is still kind of interesting but so far the vast majority of the story is the MC doing things with ease and patting himself on the back about his 'accomplishments' despite literally everything being handed to him. And reading the reviews makes it seem like that isn't going to change...
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Even though I liked this fanfic I stopped reading it since the author didn't explain the timeline inconsistencies that exist in this story. Like you say you advanced the birth of Nico Robin, then she should be older than her ov counterpart. But now it's reached 22 years before Luffy sets sail, in chapter 600s, it's written that he only transmigrated for 5 years. 9 months after he came Nico Robin was born. Now about his impression on One Piece chapters 1096 and 1097, the timeline he mentions is all over the place and makes no sense. I have OCD so I can't continue to read before it's explained to me. So those who have the same problems as me be careful when reading.
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Best one piece fanficโฆcaptures the true essence of one piece fanfic โฆloved every chapter of it โฆhonestly
A good novel/fanfic with a fun and powerful MC, and the idea of introducing the manga into the world of One Piece is great..................
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Is there ntr or Yuri in the work? ( Hope not) ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hello, your author here, I will put a simple definition of the story here, I already talked in the summary that the idea of โโthe story is taken from the novel "Creating Naruto manga in the Naruto world", the general idea will be similar to this awsome novel, but as you all know, Naruto and One Piece are different from each other, so you won't find any similarities between the two novels other than their general idea of โโcreating the original story manga in the story world, and making future events become more interesting... Plus my protagonist doesn't care about the future at all.