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the story was amazing, MC from the start it was a weak character but afterwards he become the OP character.
Bro, hurry up with the update, I want to buy the privilege, wait to see the sequel 🔥🔥
I love the story, the characters and development so very very much. I’m glad that I read this book and all, and so ever grateful that the author even wrote this book. However… WHERE ARE YOU AUTHOR??? ARE YOU OKAY??? ARE YOU SAFE??? The irregular updates and now unannounced hiatus of 3 month is worrisome, I really hope that the author will come back and continue writing or tell us what happened to them and to teh story. If the author already post something but I just missed it… then I’m so so horribly sorry.
I was interested at first but i really hate false accusation plots and the author seems to like putting false accusations to the mc often. Hard pass
stupid mc and dumb novel! — he tried to execute the original's line which is to make lisa his goddess and to praise her like there's no tomorrow and be rejected and to exit as a small character, fade from the spotlight in order to be low key but right after that chapter the mc was forced by the author to show-off his prowess and might over and over again just to get a shocking scenes and awe from his peers and the people around him! haha what a cringy novel! — his parents' guild was in danger but he didn't let the nightshade guild to settle the mess just to show off his might again and again! sigh! what a nice technique to be low key! — an absolute braincells killer novel.
In this work we can observe a high level of character development, realistic dialogue and an exciting plot. The author writes interestingly, but so far the detail of the world is poorly visible. This is not a significant problem, since a more detailed description could make reading boring, so it is perceived as normal. Especially considering that common features can be traced in the world and as the plot unfolds, we will learn more and more. This should be praised. Of the cons that catch your eye, you can only highlight the lack of stability in the release of chapters. Try your best Author-kun, your story is wonderful!
the start was good. but the grammar and the way of writing are not that good. the characters feel one dimensional the dialogues are not well written good world background. but bad way of adding big goals suddenly but really good try I guess
One of the best extra character novels I have ever read. Hats off to the author for such an awesome novel. 🙌😀
that's some crazy stuff we got here just don't go this time if you go on a break just give a message in chapters
The novel was actually good...keep it up Author, the only problem is the updating stability.. it's slow. Does author have a sickness or something? but its pretty good... others only rate this novel low because they left to early..
Ugh, I just read 70 chapters of this because it was recommended, should have a Beta-MC tag, such a wimp. Typical Japanese MC (even when not a japanese novel), and no background whatsoever so far regarding the mc. 70 chapters is enough to at least get a semblance of his wants/ideals/motivations, but nothing, just a blank slate.
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
It takes a lot of “inspiration” from the novels extra and authors POV. The grammar is poor and the gaps are large. The conversations are forced, the building blocks of the story are missing, and the plot armor is strong. The story also suffers from multiple POV. In the first 20 chapters, the MC is not in at least 4 of the chapters. Overall, it doesn’t offer enough new perspective or situations to be worth continuing reading for me.
Author please don't stop writing this story and finish it I really am a big fan of parallel mind and I loved how the story went and I want to read it fully and I hope u don't stop it halfway.please author bro could u upload more Its soo slow I wait for u to release a lot of chapters so I can read it in one go.please author update more.
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The novel is literally copy pasting way too much from top novels like TNE and TAPOV.
(current chapter 446) For those who think this is a copy of Author's Pov and what not yes it it in the early chapters where the power systems, characters, places are introduced. It's not common in these tropes and it will get a lot better. the characters are pretty flush out and have development from their initial introductions. The power systems is pretty simple and balanced out. Not sure when the side characters Mc tropes started but I say this is one of the above most others out there if you do like it then this is a highly recommended from me
please fix the chapter 479 and 480how come after Hiro battle, it directly jumped into zero battle
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please update consistently, at least 1ch a day [img=update][img=update][img=update]
the story was amazing, MC from the start it was a weak character but afterwards he become the OP character.
Bro, hurry up with the update, I want to buy the privilege, wait to see the sequel 🔥🔥
I love the story, the characters and development so very very much. I’m glad that I read this book and all, and so ever grateful that the author even wrote this book. However… WHERE ARE YOU AUTHOR??? ARE YOU OKAY??? ARE YOU SAFE??? The irregular updates and now unannounced hiatus of 3 month is worrisome, I really hope that the author will come back and continue writing or tell us what happened to them and to teh story. If the author already post something but I just missed it… then I’m so so horribly sorry.
I was interested at first but i really hate false accusation plots and the author seems to like putting false accusations to the mc often. Hard pass
stupid mc and dumb novel! — he tried to execute the original's line which is to make lisa his goddess and to praise her like there's no tomorrow and be rejected and to exit as a small character, fade from the spotlight in order to be low key but right after that chapter the mc was forced by the author to show-off his prowess and might over and over again just to get a shocking scenes and awe from his peers and the people around him! haha what a cringy novel! — his parents' guild was in danger but he didn't let the nightshade guild to settle the mess just to show off his might again and again! sigh! what a nice technique to be low key! — an absolute braincells killer novel.
In this work we can observe a high level of character development, realistic dialogue and an exciting plot. The author writes interestingly, but so far the detail of the world is poorly visible. This is not a significant problem, since a more detailed description could make reading boring, so it is perceived as normal. Especially considering that common features can be traced in the world and as the plot unfolds, we will learn more and more. This should be praised. Of the cons that catch your eye, you can only highlight the lack of stability in the release of chapters. Try your best Author-kun, your story is wonderful!
the start was good. but the grammar and the way of writing are not that good. the characters feel one dimensional the dialogues are not well written good world background. but bad way of adding big goals suddenly but really good try I guess
One of the best extra character novels I have ever read. Hats off to the author for such an awesome novel. 🙌😀
that's some crazy stuff we got here just don't go this time if you go on a break just give a message in chapters
The novel was actually good...keep it up Author, the only problem is the updating stability.. it's slow. Does author have a sickness or something? but its pretty good... others only rate this novel low because they left to early..
Ugh, I just read 70 chapters of this because it was recommended, should have a Beta-MC tag, such a wimp. Typical Japanese MC (even when not a japanese novel), and no background whatsoever so far regarding the mc. 70 chapters is enough to at least get a semblance of his wants/ideals/motivations, but nothing, just a blank slate.
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
It takes a lot of “inspiration” from the novels extra and authors POV. The grammar is poor and the gaps are large. The conversations are forced, the building blocks of the story are missing, and the plot armor is strong. The story also suffers from multiple POV. In the first 20 chapters, the MC is not in at least 4 of the chapters. Overall, it doesn’t offer enough new perspective or situations to be worth continuing reading for me.
Author please don't stop writing this story and finish it I really am a big fan of parallel mind and I loved how the story went and I want to read it fully and I hope u don't stop it halfway.please author bro could u upload more Its soo slow I wait for u to release a lot of chapters so I can read it in one go.please author update more.
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The novel is literally copy pasting way too much from top novels like TNE and TAPOV.
(current chapter 446) For those who think this is a copy of Author's Pov and what not yes it it in the early chapters where the power systems, characters, places are introduced. It's not common in these tropes and it will get a lot better. the characters are pretty flush out and have development from their initial introductions. The power systems is pretty simple and balanced out. Not sure when the side characters Mc tropes started but I say this is one of the above most others out there if you do like it then this is a highly recommended from me
please fix the chapter 479 and 480how come after Hiro battle, it directly jumped into zero battle
Reveal Spoiler please update consistently, at least 1ch a day [img=update][img=update][img=update]
it is a good novel .i want the author to write more or complete the novel