An interesting office romance!
I liked it. The story is nice.
The writer had used emojis to convey the emotions of the characters which I found interesting, creative, and unique. With a little brushing, the story would be even better.
The story development is pretty good as well.
The world background is apt for a romance.
The characters impressed me, especially Helen. She is an ambitious woman. The male lead is attractive. He seems like a gentleman so far. These two would make a perfect couple.
I have added this to my library and will keep reading it.
Dear author, I wish you the best of luck!
I enjoyed the character development. The interactions between the characters was very interesting to read too. The writing style was good too, albeit confusing. Great work.
A romantic story is always interesting for me, i am so curious with them, she became trauma after her boyfriend betrayed her then she met he who was a new boss for her. by the way, the writing style is very neat. Nice work Author.
The synopsis did not impressed me. Story Plot seems to be similar with the other fantasy romance stories in here. Please consider the proper usage of grammar and punctuation marks while revising this story. Thank you.
After reading some content, I found similarities between the story and kdrama. It's really getting more and more interesting. Though I don't read romantic story much, I would surely read it till the end. But I want to suggest author to change the cover picture as interesting as the story. Although it's a perfect story to start or ending one's day. Keep writing!
Honest review :
- I like the way the author uses imojis to show emotions instead of writing them, it's simpler and of course easier.
- It's sometimes confusing to read a certain parts, maybe because of the author's writing style.
- There are a few errors, such as grammar and punctuation, need a little work on that.
- The story is good but the writing needs a little more boost, details, description and so.
Great job to the author do, it's a nice story, with what i've read so far.
Mansam_Vijeshwer