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Qlwlskksksksksksks Qlwlskksksksksksks the first thing I've seen has a bit weird to be w me in my work when we're waiting waiting when we're watching it and the arrow to be used in white with white with a pair when
This has to be the cringiest but funniest thing I've read in years! This is such an amazing story/idea. Fix the writing quality a bit. I would like to rewrite this, but I need the authors pass first :)
Please update the next chapter please😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭The story is cool 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
plot is very interesting... a little slow paced for me I guess... but it's OK as long as it is interesting... all the best and hope for more release... thank you 😊
story good. idea good. speech of who's talking and when songs play could be clearer. stability of updates is becoming better. i had a detailed explanation until it got deleted and i had to do this again and i cba
the concept is great and new. there are less fanfics in this genre. I just hope you will stop the s*x jokes and stop spoiling the story. I really enjoyed other than that part. low rating only because of the s*x jokes part as it is occupying major part of the story. well i know that this is your fanfic I am just suggesting this as it will make story more enjoyable.
Tough only 8 chapters has been released so far, this is still a very good fanfic and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Hi there! I just finished your story it’s beautifully written and felt so cinematic, like it’s made to be visualized. I’m a comic artist, and your writing truly inspired me. If you ever think about turning it into a comic or visual story, I’d love to collaborate! You can reach me anytime on Discord (ava_crafts). or Instagram (eve_verse_).
Qlwlskksksksksksks Qlwlskksksksksksks the first thing I've seen has a bit weird to be w me in my work when we're waiting waiting when we're watching it and the arrow to be used in white with white with a pair when
This has to be the cringiest but funniest thing I've read in years! This is such an amazing story/idea. Fix the writing quality a bit. I would like to rewrite this, but I need the authors pass first :)
Please update the next chapter please😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭The story is cool 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
plot is very interesting... a little slow paced for me I guess... but it's OK as long as it is interesting... all the best and hope for more release... thank you 😊
story good. idea good. speech of who's talking and when songs play could be clearer. stability of updates is becoming better. i had a detailed explanation until it got deleted and i had to do this again and i cba
the concept is great and new. there are less fanfics in this genre. I just hope you will stop the s*x jokes and stop spoiling the story. I really enjoyed other than that part. low rating only because of the s*x jokes part as it is occupying major part of the story. well i know that this is your fanfic I am just suggesting this as it will make story more enjoyable.
Tough only 8 chapters has been released so far, this is still a very good fanfic and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Hi there! I just finished your story it’s beautifully written and felt so cinematic, like it’s made to be visualized. I’m a comic artist, and your writing truly inspired me. If you ever think about turning it into a comic or visual story, I’d love to collaborate! You can reach me anytime on Discord (ava_crafts). or Instagram (eve_verse_).