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This book has the type of plot like but it is completely ruined by the MTL. I admit that gender is fluid, but when it changes two to three times in one paragraph... Even I get fed up. I stopped reading, but if it ever gets an editor, I might come back
Non existent editing/ proofreading. There are too many great books out there that are waiting to be read for me to persist with this sort of error laden story. Its a shame as it looks promising insofar as far as the plot goes.
This book has the type of plot like but it is completely ruined by the MTL. I admit that gender is fluid, but when it changes two to three times in one paragraph... Even I get fed up. I stopped reading, but if it ever gets an editor, I might come back
Non existent editing/ proofreading. There are too many great books out there that are waiting to be read for me to persist with this sort of error laden story. Its a shame as it looks promising insofar as far as the plot goes.