Reviews of Multiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial Tower by droopyauthor - Webnovel

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droopyauthor

Updated Review: Writing Quality: 5 Stars (I have always been a fanatic about writing quality. The least I can say confidently that you will never find language skill lacking in any manner. And I am making improvements by day. Stability of Updates: 2 Stars (I was consistent at first, for like first 400 chapters. But then I couldn't maintain the same rate, regardless the excuses. Anyway, one chapter daily for a few months at least from now on.) Story Development: 3 Stars (The start of the story feels generic, even to me. But it develops beautifully. Also, I have taken great challenges to keep the fanfic as close to as an Original Novel, including new ideas. It may not to be preference of all, but its good as long as you give it a chance.) Character Design: 3 Stars (Kai Stormborn is a highly complex character. Circumstances had forced him to become someone he had never even thought of becoming. Mentioning anything about him will be a spoiler, so I am leaving it here.) World Background: 4 Stars (I like researching, and love to imagine how one world's characters and concepts would interact with others. Needless to say, all included worlds and background setting had been thoroughly researched and presented with better clearance for the readers. You won't find anything lacking here.) At the end, I would request you guys to give my Original Novel a look too. It's a comedic take on Harem, Villain, and Romance tags. Try a few chapters and see if it suits your taste. Good luck droopyauthor

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Joker333

Great . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Sandy_007

finally a good one i was starting to lose hope in this app but looks like there are still gems burried underneath.. keep up the good work mr author

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hasan_foraty

the idea is brilliant , the story is one of the kind highly recomended

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priyanshu_tak

FINALLY ITS BACK, I have been reading a lot of ff at some point I dropped reading original and ff and I can surely say that this is the best ff I have ever read. It has amazing world building and power system, especially the author is really creative and have great ideas and stories for different characters and Worlds. Lastly don't drop this...

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NYXLOGOS

ONE of the best fanfic novels of all time even though its more original that it is fanfic lol

7mth
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StormFireReborn

Happy that the story is back. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

7mth
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_asdfghjkl2021

I don't get the hype. It wasn't entertaining, and feels like it was written by an emo teenager who thinks his life is so much worse than others.

7mth
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Thehighest_throne2

A god-level fic that was abandoned because it didn't suit the tastes of WN readers, no disgusting harem, no exploding stars in the first chapter, slow storyline, character development and many others that are probably too many for me to mention. The bottom line is this story is very good, worth your time

7mth
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Play_it_cool

it's a great novel . I always liked the power hungry characters and this fanfic fulfils that role perfectly

7mth
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KerberosTrick

I like this novel. Terror Infinity was the first fanfic I read and now that genre is one of my favorite books +1 for harem, and +1 Op MC

7mth
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NinjaBean

It's back!!!! Please never stop or drop boss. Youre doing amazing job. Keep the update. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend] I will be looking for updates.

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Kinka71
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For the moment i likes it and has a lot of potential Ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

8mth
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Fernrir_Zero999

Love it, the progression is good, the power system is great

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Daniel_Richard

Author nim when are you updating the novel you snubbed my comment your post in the comments section it’s been 5 months drop an update or just say you’ve dropped the novel already

11mth
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OddExploder

This is the one of the greatest novel that you can find and read on WebNovel. Each chapter will get you hooked and craving for more when you realised that you are on the latest chapter. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

1yr
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Aspecto
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Amazing work! definitely recommend.Author-nim can you please share your discord server?

1yr
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WurstistLeben

Started reading this Story knowing it got dropped but still one of the best i read in a long time. Hoping you pick it up again sometime in the future

1yr
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Daniel_Richard

Top class novel sensible mc, dark and cold , authornim when are you dropping update or have you dropped it

1yr
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blazinggrimm

Author San where are you. I hope you doing well. how if life over there? just saying hello and saying I've missed your updates so sad for your work to be on pause. so in love with your amazing work can't wait for you to come back

1yr
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Emotionless_being

It's really good. But it's a shame that it is now discontinued due to lack of support. I hope this gets the support it deserves.

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skidmark

when this gonna be updated my quess never

1yr
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NinjaBean

I like these type of multiverse novels but this one is very good. Story is consistent and updates were steady until a while ago. It gives slightly Orv and Second life ranker vibes but its definitely not a plagirism. Thank you for your beatifull product author!!!

1yr
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DaoistKLskQX

is this dropped?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

1yr
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qsdfh
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Short review chapter 97 The writing style is fluid and immersive. The plot is clear, the MC motivation explained in the first chapters. The main character is competent but I dislike his personality. He doesn't get attached to anyone or anything. Rather than telling the tale of a man who live, the story tells the man who survive. So far, the main character has only done things that could move forward the plot. He is at point A and he is told to move to point B, which he does without a step out of the path. I think it's a mistake due to over-planning. There's no leeway to tell the tale when you have scheduled how many chapters the MC will spend during each mission. It only describes his process of accomplishing the mission and nothing else. The MC has no life outside of it. The background is restricted. Once again because the main character tale is limited to what makes the plot move forward. So he doesn't explore outside of what he needs to complete the mission.

1yr
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skidmark

been reading this since it came out absolute bop great character development and all that character are like what you'd expect and the actual tower is well fleshed out love it it just hasn't updated in a while my only issue

1yr
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Berserker84

Does anyone have the discord link?

1yr
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Lord_Kaine

Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...

1yr
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Hajimari_

This novel has a very unique character. One might find it too complicated or just not to their taste but either way, it's a great piece. Updates are generally consistent and the writing quality is also good. The story is developed to the point where one can't easily predict what's going to happen next, though it's not extremely complicated. All the characters feel alive and the world background is described fairly well. Overall, a very interesting read.

1yr
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StormFireReborn

The harry potter reincarnation arc is a bit weird but i still like the story . Keep it up author i really hope the story gets finished . --

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droopyauthor

Updated Review: Writing Quality: 5 Stars (I have always been a fanatic about writing quality. The least I can say confidently that you will never find language skill lacking in any manner. And I am making improvements by day. Stability of Updates: 2 Stars (I was consistent at first, for like first 400 chapters. But then I couldn't maintain the same rate, regardless the excuses. Anyway, one chapter daily for a few months at least from now on.) Story Development: 3 Stars (The start of the story feels generic, even to me. But it develops beautifully. Also, I have taken great challenges to keep the fanfic as close to as an Original Novel, including new ideas. It may not to be preference of all, but its good as long as you give it a chance.) Character Design: 3 Stars (Kai Stormborn is a highly complex character. Circumstances had forced him to become someone he had never even thought of becoming. Mentioning anything about him will be a spoiler, so I am leaving it here.) World Background: 4 Stars (I like researching, and love to imagine how one world's characters and concepts would interact with others. Needless to say, all included worlds and background setting had been thoroughly researched and presented with better clearance for the readers. You won't find anything lacking here.) At the end, I would request you guys to give my Original Novel a look too. It's a comedic take on Harem, Villain, and Romance tags. Try a few chapters and see if it suits your taste. Good luck droopyauthor

8mth
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Joker333

Great . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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6mth
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Sandy_007

finally a good one i was starting to lose hope in this app but looks like there are still gems burried underneath.. keep up the good work mr author

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7mth
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hasan_foraty

the idea is brilliant , the story is one of the kind highly recomended

7mth
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priyanshu_tak

FINALLY ITS BACK, I have been reading a lot of ff at some point I dropped reading original and ff and I can surely say that this is the best ff I have ever read. It has amazing world building and power system, especially the author is really creative and have great ideas and stories for different characters and Worlds. Lastly don't drop this...

7mth
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NYXLOGOS

ONE of the best fanfic novels of all time even though its more original that it is fanfic lol

7mth
View 0 Replies
StormFireReborn

Happy that the story is back. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

7mth
View 0 Replies
_asdfghjkl2021

I don't get the hype. It wasn't entertaining, and feels like it was written by an emo teenager who thinks his life is so much worse than others.

7mth
View 1 Replies
Thehighest_throne2

A god-level fic that was abandoned because it didn't suit the tastes of WN readers, no disgusting harem, no exploding stars in the first chapter, slow storyline, character development and many others that are probably too many for me to mention. The bottom line is this story is very good, worth your time

7mth
View 2 Replies
Play_it_cool

it's a great novel . I always liked the power hungry characters and this fanfic fulfils that role perfectly

7mth
View 0 Replies
KerberosTrick

I like this novel. Terror Infinity was the first fanfic I read and now that genre is one of my favorite books +1 for harem, and +1 Op MC

7mth
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NinjaBean

It's back!!!! Please never stop or drop boss. Youre doing amazing job. Keep the update. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend] I will be looking for updates.

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8mth
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Kinka71
LV 13 Badge

For the moment i likes it and has a lot of potential Ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

8mth
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Fernrir_Zero999

Love it, the progression is good, the power system is great

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8mth
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Daniel_Richard

Author nim when are you updating the novel you snubbed my comment your post in the comments section it’s been 5 months drop an update or just say you’ve dropped the novel already

11mth
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OddExploder

This is the one of the greatest novel that you can find and read on WebNovel. Each chapter will get you hooked and craving for more when you realised that you are on the latest chapter. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

1yr
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Aspecto
LV 13 Badge

Amazing work! definitely recommend.Author-nim can you please share your discord server?

1yr
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WurstistLeben

Started reading this Story knowing it got dropped but still one of the best i read in a long time. Hoping you pick it up again sometime in the future

1yr
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Daniel_Richard

Top class novel sensible mc, dark and cold , authornim when are you dropping update or have you dropped it

1yr
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blazinggrimm

Author San where are you. I hope you doing well. how if life over there? just saying hello and saying I've missed your updates so sad for your work to be on pause. so in love with your amazing work can't wait for you to come back

1yr
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Emotionless_being

It's really good. But it's a shame that it is now discontinued due to lack of support. I hope this gets the support it deserves.

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1yr
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skidmark

when this gonna be updated my quess never

1yr
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NinjaBean

I like these type of multiverse novels but this one is very good. Story is consistent and updates were steady until a while ago. It gives slightly Orv and Second life ranker vibes but its definitely not a plagirism. Thank you for your beatifull product author!!!

1yr
View 0 Replies
DaoistKLskQX

is this dropped?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

1yr
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qsdfh
LV 3 Badge

Short review chapter 97 The writing style is fluid and immersive. The plot is clear, the MC motivation explained in the first chapters. The main character is competent but I dislike his personality. He doesn't get attached to anyone or anything. Rather than telling the tale of a man who live, the story tells the man who survive. So far, the main character has only done things that could move forward the plot. He is at point A and he is told to move to point B, which he does without a step out of the path. I think it's a mistake due to over-planning. There's no leeway to tell the tale when you have scheduled how many chapters the MC will spend during each mission. It only describes his process of accomplishing the mission and nothing else. The MC has no life outside of it. The background is restricted. Once again because the main character tale is limited to what makes the plot move forward. So he doesn't explore outside of what he needs to complete the mission.

1yr
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skidmark

been reading this since it came out absolute bop great character development and all that character are like what you'd expect and the actual tower is well fleshed out love it it just hasn't updated in a while my only issue

1yr
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Berserker84

Does anyone have the discord link?

1yr
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Lord_Kaine

Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...Good work...

1yr
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Hajimari_

This novel has a very unique character. One might find it too complicated or just not to their taste but either way, it's a great piece. Updates are generally consistent and the writing quality is also good. The story is developed to the point where one can't easily predict what's going to happen next, though it's not extremely complicated. All the characters feel alive and the world background is described fairly well. Overall, a very interesting read.

1yr
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StormFireReborn

The harry potter reincarnation arc is a bit weird but i still like the story . Keep it up author i really hope the story gets finished . --

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1yr
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