Reviews of Mind Linker by BlackSnowAngel - Webnovel

Incredibly well written, the quality of the descriptions and world building are on par with some of the best novels I've read, but I feel that there are some chapters that strike more deeply than others. The action sequences however, are on a whole nother level and I enjoy reading every chapter so much. The way the story progresses is also very interesting, and retains a lot of originality, leaving me in suspense for the next chapters. The author also did a really good job on the characters, while some of them may be somewhat generic, their personalities are very accurately depicted by their actions and dialogues. As a fellow writer, I can feel that a lot of hard work has been put into writing this and I just want to say, I absolutely love this. Keep the good work up, man! I can wait for the next chapters :)

I think that the novel has a lot of potential. The narrative and details are great and fun to read. If I had to give a criticism I would only say the paragraphs are a bit long, but everything else is really great!

The story is captivating. I like the way the whole world is painted into picture along side the characters and emotion. As one who likes darker plots, I'm enjoying the dark undertone of the story.

the author does an amazing job conveying the environment, feelings and going ons of the main character. This novel pulls you in and won't let go. Will definitely be continuing this one! I love the style of writing and the fluidity of the story.

I like how I can easily picture everything in my mind the narrative description is so detailed yet not too complicated to imagine. The story of Alexus life as a normal human is also something that everyone can sympathize especially with our current society. The fight scene was also very well done definitely a good book.

Mind Linker by BlackSnow11 is a dark tale of demon possession. The author is quite skilled at setting the scene and pulling the reader into the dastardly plot. Her descriptions are easy to follow, and the story’s pacing is well-balanced. While this the plot is action-driven, the author took the time to develop the characters, which made it easy to relate. The romance element is rewarding and a nice thread within this compelling fantasy. If I had to pick the story's weakness, I would say it is the first chapter. While I recognize it is necessary to introduce the MC to the reader prior to jumping into the action, of all the chapters, the first chapter felt choppy and a bit off balance. Readers who stick with the story will be treated to an edgy read that is well worth their time.

Despite the blatant misogyny and racism littered throughout this story, Mind Linker has an interesting lore behind it that would be much better if there wasn't so much exposition. The world is rich with cool ideas, and Crystal could be considered a strong female character if she wasn't so objectified in Alexus' perspective. Alexus himself is a dry character that really takes getting used to. He's reminiscent of those harem novel MCs where you wonder why this completely mid guy is the protagonist. The characters have a nice dynamic going on, and I really like the inclusion of different culture's mythos.

Very much enjoy reading this book. The way the author presents the world and the abilities to me is unique and unlike most other superpower novels for sure! looking forward to more chapters

It's really interesting and captivating about the way you write how the story is unfolded, I liked reading and I will continue to ire it until the end I encourage other readers to make this trip with me, we each have our tastes and needs for me there is no better keep writing as you don't need to skip the steps I find your work magnificent. You have a beautiful pen, reading your work calms me down and it's something very difficult to find.

Very impressed with the quality of the work. The author is very descriptive and I enjoy the way the plot is developing. I am looking forward to more chapters for sure!

The literature is just awesome. I love the plot so far. it has its unique vibe. The author has given good thought to the story development and the pace. It was a good read. i really recommend everyone to give it a try . All the best to the author, waiting for more chapters

The story is really unique. The beginning of the story is a little slow paced in my opinion but bear with it because it was necessary for the story. The details were very clear and the vocabulary was well used. Character build was unique and the concept of supernatural power was also worth a short. Worth having try.

It is amazing work. I love reading this I am still hooked I always want to know what is going to happen next. I am invested in it, I am always learning from your writting style.

Well, I really like the writing, or maybe it is called the narrations. The way the author portrays the characters is splendid, each of them has a different vibe and personality. The story's pace in another way is a bit slow, for me, but it is okay considering the atmosphere, suspension, and dark color of the world. One thing that makes me curious about is the name of Ouroboros itself. I got the feeling it was just not about the "sleeping snake" at the best of their spine.

The narrative power is great! The story has a decent pace to enjoy, but not very impactful to hook if using web novel as it is media. It would be better if it being published as a book.

Good novel so far! The story is going at a decent pace and the world building is great. I hope the author sticks with it because this is a gem.

I'm liking the book so far, the plot is nice and the characters are well taken care of. The Author is trying his best to bring the best outta his book and I can't help but applaud him. Keep up the work author and don't slack off

After reading only one chapter i fall in love with this novel amazing character and wonderful story i will highly recommend it to u guys to stick with this novel and u will love it waiting eagerly for the new chapter keep it bro

First off i want to start by commending your writing skills its so well done. A big thumps up on that overall everything is really good. Might just be a bit too slow for me But 5/5

I love 💘 your story title. It is a different idea. And cover of your book is extraordinary. Your plot is strong. Keep it up waiting for next. [img=update]

It is still too early to give a complete review. But the writing quality is good, the world is well created and the characters have a good personality.

This is Truly Good writing. Fleshed out characters and villain design. Serious and humorous all at the same time. Enough suspense to keep you on the edge of your seat. MC isn't op right away. He seems special but I can't tell because all of them are still pretty normal. Either exciting chaps hope you continue. This has the potential to be a top fantasy novel on this site. No exaggeration.

WQ: 3/5, lots of small flow and grammar errors. SOU: 4/5, seems good. SD: Decent, not 2 slow or fast. CD: Interesting, not 2 cliches. WB: 5/5, new and interesting.

The writing quality is so good , and the story is also amazing it , I wish I can reach this level in writing , good job 👏👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The writing quality is great and the premise of the book is interesting. There are scenes where it feels like foreshadowing and I am interested with the chaotic aura of this book. Will read more

Love the originality and character development of this web novel. Creative concept that’s written well has me reading this and eager for more.

Ouroboros is not a mythical serpent eating its own tail. A symbolism here? It represents things coming full circle or Infinity. Hmm. This is not only an interesting premise, but also a deep dive into the psyche of the MC. I think I will keep reading.

i really enjoyed reading this webnovel , the idea was different . and i really like the main charachter alexus . now after waking up as an ouroubous i think he will be a powerful one too but in the process he will be having a difficult time with that company . the story needs a love story to be complete .

I really like the concept of the story. I am hooked to this story and hope to read more of it. I hope author will continue to write. I recommend it. I hope you give it a chance😍😍🥰🥰

A quite a new approach to a webnovel design. Intresting chapters and overall charecter design is quite good, the mark of a veteren author shines through. This book makes for an intresting read and the grammer solidifies itself through. A good, no, excellent read in my opinion.