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Ak02
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Author AK here, 5 stars for self-promoting. If you want a slow-paced novel with a fantasy setting, this one will pique your interest. The first two volumes are mostly about MC's adventure, but the plot will thicken during the third volume. Also, pay attention to the strange incidents in this novel. Hmm, that's it. MC won't be too smart, but not too dumb. He will be more like an average guy. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️Anbe Sivam (Love is God)❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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Leo_Micado

I've only read a few chapters so these are my initial thoughts. The power scaling is quite lame, at low levels, warriors should be able to kill mages, much less high-level fighters to magical beasts. They both use mana so why are the mages so over-glorified, if being a warrior is that weak compared to mages, why would anyone consider being one? The writing style and story so far are good though, I don't find it hard to keep engaged and can imagine the scene being told adequately.

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Juan_Cardenas_8016

great novel, well written and thought out overall; I have only 2 thibgs i think could be improved upon. First, more constant updates would be great if the quality isnt compromised. Second is a bit more attention to details, i will give an example: when abijm saves the prince from the light church's attack, theres a part where both he and the knights run towards the prince, the novel says he is 15 meters away from the knights so thwy qould need like 5 seconds to get to him.. how is that possible? thats like... even lower than a regular human walking speed?? i know it might seem irrelevant but this kibd of mistakes can pile up and its a bit frustrating to read. other than that great job author, keep it up

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Joel_hanes

So Im just wondering Where you find the none Edited Version of this book ...............................................................................!

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qsdfh
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Chapter 3 and I can't help but love the story already. Because the author knows something most writers don't. How to give the protagonist goals he wants to achieve and stakes that make it challenging.

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Blackturtle

This is a masterwork novel and there's only a few like it in my opinion. The start of the novel is normal and maybe can be considered as boring but for those who decide to continue they will find the hidden treasure here...The MC is very powerful

2yr
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Gahara

i usually don't write reviews but this book deserves it. the writing quality unlike what others said so in the other reviews is kind of meh. now I am not an author nor is my English any better but I believe the author needs an editor because sometimes it's hard to read and you have to rearrange sentences to make any Sence of them. . . story wise it's really fking good. its the usual medieval fantasy with magic. MC is a regressore, someone who was little above a mob in his past life now using what he knows about the future to his advantage. the MC is likable and smart (not some aizen LV genius mind you)..all in all its a good story and I recommend it to anyone reading this review it won't disappoint you

2yr
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LordYang

A masterpiece. It is a very good novel, with the protagonist having quite a unique character development, it is a great experience to read this novel. Marvelous.

2yr
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Empyrium

The writing quality is very good, you really can't complain about it, the story starts really great and it is fun to follow it, great writing style. The character is perfect too, not some dumb/pervert/ idiot mc, instead we get for once a mc which is smart. Update stability is good, could be better, like idk 10 chapters a day,😗😇. World background is good, we dont know much yet but I think we will uncover everything aas he story continues

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TofSpades

This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!

2yr
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Mel_Aniv

The author did mature in his writings! I must say he was already that good 👍 The story was well elaborated and it didn't confuse me a little bit. I can also sense that the story will get better and better. The author's growth will not stop so we are rest assured 👍 Just don't stop writing and all readers will be pleased! 🙏

2yr
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Hyneks

THE BEST WRITTING STYLE...5/5 rating without a doubt, from the perfect set of words and grammars that form like an array who can easily hooked the minds of the readers,

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Knossos

great story. good pacing. good characterization. good dialog. the world building is a slow burn that builds up with every paragraph. no big info dumps.

2yr
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YoonC
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First of all, I was pleasantly surprised by the grammar. There was barely any mistakes, and the diction was advanced and allows readers to visualize the world easily. It reminds me of classic DnD fantasy with modern touches. I'm looking forward to the story, keep it up!

2yr
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Book_Pen

Firstly, you have a great mind!! Excellent world description, imagination and character thoughts. The plot is quite interesting and goes much more interesting from chapter to chapter. Keep Going!!!

2yr
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Yassybella

Excellent plot, the lead character aims to be powerful, smart, and calculated mind to get what he wanted or aspire. Worth reading. Guys, give it a try!

2yr
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Excelsior_x

Got hooked from the first chapter. Love how the story progresses and the fact that we have clear goals and not just mindlessly doing things. I love the world building as it feels like the world is live through and functioning. Still early chapters but Abium has already grown on me. The grammar is excellent enough to draw you in. All I can complain about is that we want more chapters

2yr
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Jude_K_1656

Good command of English, well-written plot, and keeps the story moving on in an interesting direction. What hooked me most is the depiction and the author's composing fashion. It makes me crave to continue. Acclaim to your creator.

2yr
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RammyBoyz

Clean, Straightforward, Efficient writing. It doesn't get bogged down or get carried away. It's been edited well so that it only tells the important details in a entertaining and concise way. Excited to read more. Thank you!

2yr
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Youcancallmetrash

The writing is absolutely great! I was pulled in with every paragraph! I normally don’t like most reincarination plotlines but from very the very first chapter I was interested. I recommend readers check this story out you won’t be disappointed.

2yr
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AidenDamart

I loved the story. But due to my phone battery that is 16%, I can not continue at the moment but the plot is interesting 😀 I would greatly accept your suggestions to improve my novel. Keep it up buddy.☺

2yr
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Mask01

Really good. The only complaint is not enough chapters.

2yr
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MysteriousMan

Great plot! I love to see the development of the main character as the story continues to unfold. Each little bit of information leaves you wanting to know more. Can’t wait to read the rest! Thanks to the author.

2yr
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BossTheCat

The novel is a surprisingly easy read. To be honest, it kinda caught me by surprise. It's clear from the pace that the story is well planned out, the grammar is adequate, and overall the experience is enjoyable. The plot is amazing, with only a few errors, but everything else is just great.

2yr
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Darkshade33

Amazing. I love the story so much, the characters have greatly justified and I....I don't know what to say but I really hope that the novel goes long. Keep up the good work. we are eagerly waiting for the next chapters...

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Loneknight4

This was a pleasant surprise. I've been enjoying it quite a bit. The interactions between the main character and some of the side characters (one in particular) are entertaining. Can't wait for the more chapters to be released!

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LucyXiong

The story line seems to be pretty interesting so far. I am curious to see what's going to happen during the MC's journey. I know only 11 chapters are out so far, so I can't really do a complete review. There was a lot of explaining in the beginning, I'm guessing mainly just to rush the story along and get to the base of the story. Towards the last few chapters there were a bit more dialogues and it included the world a little more, so I like that aspect about it. Other than it starting out a little slow paced I thought this story seemed pretty interesting. Although the author did say it's meant to be a slow-paced novel. Keep it up author!

2yr
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drippingsarcasm

This book is really good!The writing quality is also good. The way of author's describing is something I also liked. Author should update as many chapters as possible. I highly recommend it!

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TheCraZyaUthOr19

yow, the first chapter got me hooked, and wanting to read more, I really want to see him get stronger. I like this kind of Novel like the reborn and reincarnation thing. keep it up author, your novel has potential, you deserve this 5/5 rating. I'll support you.

2yr
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Ak02
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Author AK here, 5 stars for self-promoting. If you want a slow-paced novel with a fantasy setting, this one will pique your interest. The first two volumes are mostly about MC's adventure, but the plot will thicken during the third volume. Also, pay attention to the strange incidents in this novel. Hmm, that's it. MC won't be too smart, but not too dumb. He will be more like an average guy. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️Anbe Sivam (Love is God)❤️ ❤️ ❤️

2yr
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Leo_Micado

I've only read a few chapters so these are my initial thoughts. The power scaling is quite lame, at low levels, warriors should be able to kill mages, much less high-level fighters to magical beasts. They both use mana so why are the mages so over-glorified, if being a warrior is that weak compared to mages, why would anyone consider being one? The writing style and story so far are good though, I don't find it hard to keep engaged and can imagine the scene being told adequately.

11mth
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Juan_Cardenas_8016

great novel, well written and thought out overall; I have only 2 thibgs i think could be improved upon. First, more constant updates would be great if the quality isnt compromised. Second is a bit more attention to details, i will give an example: when abijm saves the prince from the light church's attack, theres a part where both he and the knights run towards the prince, the novel says he is 15 meters away from the knights so thwy qould need like 5 seconds to get to him.. how is that possible? thats like... even lower than a regular human walking speed?? i know it might seem irrelevant but this kibd of mistakes can pile up and its a bit frustrating to read. other than that great job author, keep it up

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1yr
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Joel_hanes

So Im just wondering Where you find the none Edited Version of this book ...............................................................................!

1yr
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qsdfh
LV 3 Badge

Chapter 3 and I can't help but love the story already. Because the author knows something most writers don't. How to give the protagonist goals he wants to achieve and stakes that make it challenging.

1yr
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Blackturtle

This is a masterwork novel and there's only a few like it in my opinion. The start of the novel is normal and maybe can be considered as boring but for those who decide to continue they will find the hidden treasure here...The MC is very powerful

2yr
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Gahara

i usually don't write reviews but this book deserves it. the writing quality unlike what others said so in the other reviews is kind of meh. now I am not an author nor is my English any better but I believe the author needs an editor because sometimes it's hard to read and you have to rearrange sentences to make any Sence of them. . . story wise it's really fking good. its the usual medieval fantasy with magic. MC is a regressore, someone who was little above a mob in his past life now using what he knows about the future to his advantage. the MC is likable and smart (not some aizen LV genius mind you)..all in all its a good story and I recommend it to anyone reading this review it won't disappoint you

2yr
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LordYang

A masterpiece. It is a very good novel, with the protagonist having quite a unique character development, it is a great experience to read this novel. Marvelous.

2yr
View 0 Replies
Empyrium

The writing quality is very good, you really can't complain about it, the story starts really great and it is fun to follow it, great writing style. The character is perfect too, not some dumb/pervert/ idiot mc, instead we get for once a mc which is smart. Update stability is good, could be better, like idk 10 chapters a day,😗😇. World background is good, we dont know much yet but I think we will uncover everything aas he story continues

2yr
View 0 Replies
TofSpades

This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!

2yr
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Mel_Aniv

The author did mature in his writings! I must say he was already that good 👍 The story was well elaborated and it didn't confuse me a little bit. I can also sense that the story will get better and better. The author's growth will not stop so we are rest assured 👍 Just don't stop writing and all readers will be pleased! 🙏

2yr
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Hyneks

THE BEST WRITTING STYLE...5/5 rating without a doubt, from the perfect set of words and grammars that form like an array who can easily hooked the minds of the readers,

2yr
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Knossos

great story. good pacing. good characterization. good dialog. the world building is a slow burn that builds up with every paragraph. no big info dumps.

2yr
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YoonC
LV 2 Badge

First of all, I was pleasantly surprised by the grammar. There was barely any mistakes, and the diction was advanced and allows readers to visualize the world easily. It reminds me of classic DnD fantasy with modern touches. I'm looking forward to the story, keep it up!

2yr
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Book_Pen

Firstly, you have a great mind!! Excellent world description, imagination and character thoughts. The plot is quite interesting and goes much more interesting from chapter to chapter. Keep Going!!!

2yr
View 0 Replies
Yassybella

Excellent plot, the lead character aims to be powerful, smart, and calculated mind to get what he wanted or aspire. Worth reading. Guys, give it a try!

2yr
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Excelsior_x

Got hooked from the first chapter. Love how the story progresses and the fact that we have clear goals and not just mindlessly doing things. I love the world building as it feels like the world is live through and functioning. Still early chapters but Abium has already grown on me. The grammar is excellent enough to draw you in. All I can complain about is that we want more chapters

2yr
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Jude_K_1656

Good command of English, well-written plot, and keeps the story moving on in an interesting direction. What hooked me most is the depiction and the author's composing fashion. It makes me crave to continue. Acclaim to your creator.

2yr
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RammyBoyz

Clean, Straightforward, Efficient writing. It doesn't get bogged down or get carried away. It's been edited well so that it only tells the important details in a entertaining and concise way. Excited to read more. Thank you!

2yr
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Youcancallmetrash

The writing is absolutely great! I was pulled in with every paragraph! I normally don’t like most reincarination plotlines but from very the very first chapter I was interested. I recommend readers check this story out you won’t be disappointed.

2yr
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AidenDamart

I loved the story. But due to my phone battery that is 16%, I can not continue at the moment but the plot is interesting 😀 I would greatly accept your suggestions to improve my novel. Keep it up buddy.☺

2yr
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Mask01

Really good. The only complaint is not enough chapters.

2yr
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MysteriousMan

Great plot! I love to see the development of the main character as the story continues to unfold. Each little bit of information leaves you wanting to know more. Can’t wait to read the rest! Thanks to the author.

2yr
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BossTheCat

The novel is a surprisingly easy read. To be honest, it kinda caught me by surprise. It's clear from the pace that the story is well planned out, the grammar is adequate, and overall the experience is enjoyable. The plot is amazing, with only a few errors, but everything else is just great.

2yr
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Darkshade33

Amazing. I love the story so much, the characters have greatly justified and I....I don't know what to say but I really hope that the novel goes long. Keep up the good work. we are eagerly waiting for the next chapters...

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2yr
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Loneknight4

This was a pleasant surprise. I've been enjoying it quite a bit. The interactions between the main character and some of the side characters (one in particular) are entertaining. Can't wait for the more chapters to be released!

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2yr
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LucyXiong

The story line seems to be pretty interesting so far. I am curious to see what's going to happen during the MC's journey. I know only 11 chapters are out so far, so I can't really do a complete review. There was a lot of explaining in the beginning, I'm guessing mainly just to rush the story along and get to the base of the story. Towards the last few chapters there were a bit more dialogues and it included the world a little more, so I like that aspect about it. Other than it starting out a little slow paced I thought this story seemed pretty interesting. Although the author did say it's meant to be a slow-paced novel. Keep it up author!

2yr
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drippingsarcasm

This book is really good!The writing quality is also good. The way of author's describing is something I also liked. Author should update as many chapters as possible. I highly recommend it!

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2yr
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TheCraZyaUthOr19

yow, the first chapter got me hooked, and wanting to read more, I really want to see him get stronger. I like this kind of Novel like the reborn and reincarnation thing. keep it up author, your novel has potential, you deserve this 5/5 rating. I'll support you.

2yr
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