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This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk.
This is really one of the best novel i read...my heartfelt thanks for authore for creating this masterpiece waiting for more chapters
One of my favourite novels currently, I'll try to describe how good this novel is without spoiling anything as best as i can. Firstly the writing, it's done very well and is among my favourite works in terms of writing quality, Mr author Sloth is great at creating tension in hyped scenes, the fights are always amazing especially further into the novel and he knows how to give characters that untouchable, cold aura especially with characters like Azriel (iykyk) and Nux. Each chapter ending makes you want to read more and the occasional cliffhangers made me buy privellage because of how invested into this novel I am. The story itself is amazing, I wouldn't say its unique as its your typical power fantasy with a bunch of races and Cultivation, however it's done impeccably and they're alot of unique factors of the story such as the races and their powers, Nux's origins, the major powerhouses and antagonists of the novel etc, all I'll say is, it gets more and more unique and better as you get through the chapters. The characters of this Novel are all brilliant, it's amongst my favourites in terms of characters with only one other novel I've read so far rivaling this masterpiece. Nux himself is an amazing MC, he has all the right qualities - overprotective of his Wives, slightly arrogant but rightly so due to his talent and power, and another key factor I love is his innovation, further into the story he dosent just sit on his powers and let them make him OP, but delves deep into them, expands on them and improves himself providing good character development and a quality alot of MCs nowadays lack. The Wives are all great, there is not a single one I dislike and they each have unique quirks and are easily distinguishable from each other. The supporting characters are also brilliant and generally have fun, unique and enjoyable background stories, my favourite is Azriel, and let me tell you he is an amazing character (iykyk). The World Background itself is great and quite unique further into the story, I won't delve too deep into this as it can be a major spoiler, but the World Background is one of the best I've seen in Novels and gets significantly better as you get through a few hundred chapters. Overall this Novel is one of the best out there in my opinion, its written well, it's Story is great, it's updated very frequently and just gets better and better as you get further into it, hope my review will persuade some of you to read this, I promise you'll have a great time, and Mr Sloth thank you for creating this masterpiece 🙏.
Honestly one of the best WN I've ever read. Good mix of actually funny or entertaining reading, and a serious setting or storyline. All in All. 9/10
Probably my favourite webnovel of all time. Nux is the single best OP/Harem MC I've seen. Smart, Flirtatious, Cares about his women, Isn't needlessly cruel but is fierce when actually angry. The women he has have great variety, and they also grow together with him. The smut is pretty well-written, and it's frontloaded i.e. after the first couple hundred chaps the smut content goes down and plot content increases. What happened in chapter 1902 made me so happy and kinda proud to have followed this novel for years. Thank you Sloth for making this piece of work.
is the new cover the Seer? the story is unfolding along a way quite unique and differently to those chinese novels that often revolve around how china only defends from other nations' unfairness...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update] LOVING IT...
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This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk. 2yr
For me, this series is a mixed bag. I'm currently 900 chapters in and some of the main issues I have with the story are only getting worse and worse. I only gave those stars to updating stability because I don't believe this story is above a 3. I'll start with the good. The story is pretty interesting and manages to keep you entertained for most of the time. The characters are likable. The power creep is not too bad and the author doesn't make the mistake of pulling his punches too hard when giving the MC power-ups. Though, I do still think some of the nerfs were uncalled for and abilities lackluster, it's been good overall. For the bad, it mostly comes from the harem for me. Don't get me wrong, all the girls are likable, but my issues aren't with their personalities (besides Astaria when she's being an annoying battle freak), it's with their place in the story and how they're written. The biggest issue is Amaya. She is borderlining Mary Sue territory as some know-it-all super genius. There are several issues this causes. The biggest one for me is how much she overshadows the girls. In front of her, they all start to seem useless. When having harems like these, I feel that each girl should have their own strengths that they accel in. We, as readers, should each feel like they each contribute an equal amount. Instead, it constantly feels like Amaya is doing everything. It's so bad that even Nux gets overshadowed sometimes. Instead of Amaya being some poorly written all around super genius with no equal, her intelligence should have instead focused on a specific type of intelligence. I think she should have been a strategist. Then other aspects of her intelligence should have been traits of the other women. Felberta, instead of being hard sidelined, should have been the ones who manages the clan and delegates tasks, for example. She was shown to be good at this in earlier chapters before the author forgot about her... Differentiating between different types of intelligence was partially done 100s of chapters ago when they stated that when it comes to war, Ember is more intelligent than Amaya, but that's probably retconned by now. Not only is Amaya unreasonably smart to the point of overshadowing the other women, but her intelligence isn't written particularly well either. It constantly feels like the author is making the others dumber just so Amaya can come in and point out the obvious. Or she comes up with a plan that even a child could have thought up, only to be praised relentlessly for the rest of the chapter. Earlier in the story, she actually seemed intelligent, but now it just feel like their author has made the other characters incompetent while he constantly tells us how impressive and how much of a super genius Amaya is. Amaya has not only affected the girls, but also Nux. Nux, earlier in the story, used to plot and scheme. He'd come up with interesting plans in order to get the girl or mess with someone. He was a master of social engineering and I would have loved to see them lean into that. However, he completely stopped any plotting once he met Amaya. He didn't even get a chance to improve. He's now been regulated to a guy who speaks well. I'm fine with him being more straight forward when it comes to him getting girls, but it would have been nice to see him apply those abilities elsewhere. Even Amaya herself can't escape the consequences of her own poorly written intelligence. She was originally supposed to extremely crazy and impossible to get along with. On one side, she was a cold hearted bitch and on the other, a yandre. That was her character. But now she just seems like a shell of her past self that just does whatever the plot needs with some occasional jealousy or a bitchy remark here and there. This isn't character development either. This just her personality being stripped of all that it is.
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foxes hanging around for 900 chapters, and when it looks like it's finally going somewhere, they get killed of? Biggest bs I've seen in a while, seriously considering dropping because of it.
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It's a pretty good story, but I noticed an inconsistency. when his system updates after he becomes the emperor stage, it originally says it's only 1 month, but not even a couple chapters later. it says he'll be without it for 6 months.
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I hope this good i have been looking for something cool calming and funny with ladies you know an mc with no huzz is boring like get power find some huzz and be funny ain't it?? but yeah i Hope it good I'll write another review after reading 100 chapts
man thank you so much for not dropping this book and i hope you can continue it till the end and not dropping it after this long journey
When are you going to start writing the Primordial Vampire God System again?
bro can you make him a little less simp. I mean he is like everything I do for sake my wife's bla bla bla, he can't criticize them no matter what they do, it's like his very being revolves around some women, if not for his boons those women aren't even worthy of being alive till now ,it's irritating when some unknown women who he woo for some time becomes so important for him that he can die for them.
I am in love with this book, but I currently am deprived of unlocking it. I wish I could afford the price
starting chapter 400 this novel become worst like a sh/t don't read this novel it's make you irritating and your head gonna blow up
Hey Author 👋 will there be something about teacher Arvina I need to know suspense is killing me, or did you just forget about her Pls 🙏 I'm begging you to answer me [img=update][img=nervous][img=nervous]
just amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! !!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry that I forgot to rate this masterpiece, but I think you need to update the outdated character thingy
To the honest, i picked this up to kill time but the story got better after stepping out of the 'forgotten continent' and then it became better and better, It's an enjoyable read. P S : i think the discord channel is messed up, not able to see character illustrations. (hoping u fix that soon) : )
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Didnt expect to like this type of novels but now Im hooked [img=recommend][img=update]
Very interesting, author... I love the book so much and the equally likes the author 🥳🥰
I think MC is too childish. I lost my interest in 250ish chapter. Author can't decide whether to write as ERO novel or normal novel. He couldn't blend those two aspect in together. As for s*x scenes, they are repetitive and dull, plain. Describing the scenes are not satisfying. I'm pro harem but female characters are so many and so dull.
I'm enjoying it so far! I got what I was expecting when I picked up this novel(lemons). I'll say that there's not anything wrong with the lemons themselves. However, this novel is also a fantasy story that contains monsters, cultivation, a system, leveling, skills, stats, combat, training, and all that other fun stuff. And all that stuff is good, seems to be well thought out, and has a lot of potential as far as I can tell. The problem is that this novel(at least so far) is about 70% lemons and 30% action and everything else. I'm often reading this and just want Nux to just do some serious training or fight some monsters or something. Just to break things up. I can only take so many lemons at once.
story, characters, world buliding and power scaling system are all good but author really releases chapters so late 😔😔
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This is a GEM. I didn’ expect much but the mc is: Smart Strong Cool abilitys No simp or dense idiot Nc variety of girls Nc goal It’s by far one of the best harem story’s I’ve read And I read a lot of trash harem with beta and simp.
This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk.
This is really one of the best novel i read...my heartfelt thanks for authore for creating this masterpiece waiting for more chapters
One of my favourite novels currently, I'll try to describe how good this novel is without spoiling anything as best as i can. Firstly the writing, it's done very well and is among my favourite works in terms of writing quality, Mr author Sloth is great at creating tension in hyped scenes, the fights are always amazing especially further into the novel and he knows how to give characters that untouchable, cold aura especially with characters like Azriel (iykyk) and Nux. Each chapter ending makes you want to read more and the occasional cliffhangers made me buy privellage because of how invested into this novel I am. The story itself is amazing, I wouldn't say its unique as its your typical power fantasy with a bunch of races and Cultivation, however it's done impeccably and they're alot of unique factors of the story such as the races and their powers, Nux's origins, the major powerhouses and antagonists of the novel etc, all I'll say is, it gets more and more unique and better as you get through the chapters. The characters of this Novel are all brilliant, it's amongst my favourites in terms of characters with only one other novel I've read so far rivaling this masterpiece. Nux himself is an amazing MC, he has all the right qualities - overprotective of his Wives, slightly arrogant but rightly so due to his talent and power, and another key factor I love is his innovation, further into the story he dosent just sit on his powers and let them make him OP, but delves deep into them, expands on them and improves himself providing good character development and a quality alot of MCs nowadays lack. The Wives are all great, there is not a single one I dislike and they each have unique quirks and are easily distinguishable from each other. The supporting characters are also brilliant and generally have fun, unique and enjoyable background stories, my favourite is Azriel, and let me tell you he is an amazing character (iykyk). The World Background itself is great and quite unique further into the story, I won't delve too deep into this as it can be a major spoiler, but the World Background is one of the best I've seen in Novels and gets significantly better as you get through a few hundred chapters. Overall this Novel is one of the best out there in my opinion, its written well, it's Story is great, it's updated very frequently and just gets better and better as you get further into it, hope my review will persuade some of you to read this, I promise you'll have a great time, and Mr Sloth thank you for creating this masterpiece 🙏.
Honestly one of the best WN I've ever read. Good mix of actually funny or entertaining reading, and a serious setting or storyline. All in All. 9/10
Probably my favourite webnovel of all time. Nux is the single best OP/Harem MC I've seen. Smart, Flirtatious, Cares about his women, Isn't needlessly cruel but is fierce when actually angry. The women he has have great variety, and they also grow together with him. The smut is pretty well-written, and it's frontloaded i.e. after the first couple hundred chaps the smut content goes down and plot content increases. What happened in chapter 1902 made me so happy and kinda proud to have followed this novel for years. Thank you Sloth for making this piece of work.
is the new cover the Seer? the story is unfolding along a way quite unique and differently to those chinese novels that often revolve around how china only defends from other nations' unfairness...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update] LOVING IT...
Reveal Spoiler This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk. 2yr
For me, this series is a mixed bag. I'm currently 900 chapters in and some of the main issues I have with the story are only getting worse and worse. I only gave those stars to updating stability because I don't believe this story is above a 3. I'll start with the good. The story is pretty interesting and manages to keep you entertained for most of the time. The characters are likable. The power creep is not too bad and the author doesn't make the mistake of pulling his punches too hard when giving the MC power-ups. Though, I do still think some of the nerfs were uncalled for and abilities lackluster, it's been good overall. For the bad, it mostly comes from the harem for me. Don't get me wrong, all the girls are likable, but my issues aren't with their personalities (besides Astaria when she's being an annoying battle freak), it's with their place in the story and how they're written. The biggest issue is Amaya. She is borderlining Mary Sue territory as some know-it-all super genius. There are several issues this causes. The biggest one for me is how much she overshadows the girls. In front of her, they all start to seem useless. When having harems like these, I feel that each girl should have their own strengths that they accel in. We, as readers, should each feel like they each contribute an equal amount. Instead, it constantly feels like Amaya is doing everything. It's so bad that even Nux gets overshadowed sometimes. Instead of Amaya being some poorly written all around super genius with no equal, her intelligence should have instead focused on a specific type of intelligence. I think she should have been a strategist. Then other aspects of her intelligence should have been traits of the other women. Felberta, instead of being hard sidelined, should have been the ones who manages the clan and delegates tasks, for example. She was shown to be good at this in earlier chapters before the author forgot about her... Differentiating between different types of intelligence was partially done 100s of chapters ago when they stated that when it comes to war, Ember is more intelligent than Amaya, but that's probably retconned by now. Not only is Amaya unreasonably smart to the point of overshadowing the other women, but her intelligence isn't written particularly well either. It constantly feels like the author is making the others dumber just so Amaya can come in and point out the obvious. Or she comes up with a plan that even a child could have thought up, only to be praised relentlessly for the rest of the chapter. Earlier in the story, she actually seemed intelligent, but now it just feel like their author has made the other characters incompetent while he constantly tells us how impressive and how much of a super genius Amaya is. Amaya has not only affected the girls, but also Nux. Nux, earlier in the story, used to plot and scheme. He'd come up with interesting plans in order to get the girl or mess with someone. He was a master of social engineering and I would have loved to see them lean into that. However, he completely stopped any plotting once he met Amaya. He didn't even get a chance to improve. He's now been regulated to a guy who speaks well. I'm fine with him being more straight forward when it comes to him getting girls, but it would have been nice to see him apply those abilities elsewhere. Even Amaya herself can't escape the consequences of her own poorly written intelligence. She was originally supposed to extremely crazy and impossible to get along with. On one side, she was a cold hearted bitch and on the other, a yandre. That was her character. But now she just seems like a shell of her past self that just does whatever the plot needs with some occasional jealousy or a bitchy remark here and there. This isn't character development either. This just her personality being stripped of all that it is.
Reveal Spoiler foxes hanging around for 900 chapters, and when it looks like it's finally going somewhere, they get killed of? Biggest bs I've seen in a while, seriously considering dropping because of it.
Reveal Spoiler It's a pretty good story, but I noticed an inconsistency. when his system updates after he becomes the emperor stage, it originally says it's only 1 month, but not even a couple chapters later. it says he'll be without it for 6 months.
Reveal Spoiler I hope this good i have been looking for something cool calming and funny with ladies you know an mc with no huzz is boring like get power find some huzz and be funny ain't it?? but yeah i Hope it good I'll write another review after reading 100 chapts
man thank you so much for not dropping this book and i hope you can continue it till the end and not dropping it after this long journey
When are you going to start writing the Primordial Vampire God System again?
bro can you make him a little less simp. I mean he is like everything I do for sake my wife's bla bla bla, he can't criticize them no matter what they do, it's like his very being revolves around some women, if not for his boons those women aren't even worthy of being alive till now ,it's irritating when some unknown women who he woo for some time becomes so important for him that he can die for them.
I am in love with this book, but I currently am deprived of unlocking it. I wish I could afford the price
starting chapter 400 this novel become worst like a sh/t don't read this novel it's make you irritating and your head gonna blow up
Hey Author 👋 will there be something about teacher Arvina I need to know suspense is killing me, or did you just forget about her Pls 🙏 I'm begging you to answer me [img=update][img=nervous][img=nervous]
just amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! !!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry that I forgot to rate this masterpiece, but I think you need to update the outdated character thingy
To the honest, i picked this up to kill time but the story got better after stepping out of the 'forgotten continent' and then it became better and better, It's an enjoyable read. P S : i think the discord channel is messed up, not able to see character illustrations. (hoping u fix that soon) : )
[img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]
Didnt expect to like this type of novels but now Im hooked [img=recommend][img=update]
Very interesting, author... I love the book so much and the equally likes the author 🥳🥰
I think MC is too childish. I lost my interest in 250ish chapter. Author can't decide whether to write as ERO novel or normal novel. He couldn't blend those two aspect in together. As for s*x scenes, they are repetitive and dull, plain. Describing the scenes are not satisfying. I'm pro harem but female characters are so many and so dull.
I'm enjoying it so far! I got what I was expecting when I picked up this novel(lemons). I'll say that there's not anything wrong with the lemons themselves. However, this novel is also a fantasy story that contains monsters, cultivation, a system, leveling, skills, stats, combat, training, and all that other fun stuff. And all that stuff is good, seems to be well thought out, and has a lot of potential as far as I can tell. The problem is that this novel(at least so far) is about 70% lemons and 30% action and everything else. I'm often reading this and just want Nux to just do some serious training or fight some monsters or something. Just to break things up. I can only take so many lemons at once.
story, characters, world buliding and power scaling system are all good but author really releases chapters so late 😔😔
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This is a GEM. I didn’ expect much but the mc is: Smart Strong Cool abilitys No simp or dense idiot Nc variety of girls Nc goal It’s by far one of the best harem story’s I’ve read And I read a lot of trash harem with beta and simp.