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wow! before I could start reading the book, the cover photo was already calling me to try the book. And you know what, the synopsis got me hooked up.
I'm loving the book already and can't wait for more update❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥 The book is really interesting and got me hooked already I'm expecting more interesting chapters ☺️☺️
when I review, iIthink aboutt how good it is compared to other books, was it good? would i I ever consider rereading it.There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, usually I could tell what the author wanted to say. It breaks immersion because I feel obligated to leave a comment for the author, but I gave up chapter 70, just too many typos, just leaving comments.There was a good twist on the fl. it switched pov to the villain not quite sure what was going on there. usually that is an attempt to give empathy or redemption and I didn't feel like it did either maybe because the villain was crazy.There are also a few things I didn't feel got addressed by the ML creating a logical inconsistency. particularly with how the maids treat ml's daughter.also not sure why fl played her hand so early, it doesn't feel safe and she should be a good parent but she created unnecessary danger for no reason. it wasn't bad but it wasn't particularly great either.
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A very good storyline that kept me hooked for days 🥰 Would have been way better with better vocabulary and grammar as it is also confusing with lots of spelling errors included as well. Good effort though.
Nice beginning, I love the way you describe your background...I know that this will turn out to be a great book[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I first fell in love with the book cover, the book is wonderful and intruding, I can't wait for the update, I recommend this book to everyone. good luck.
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So far, I've enjoyed how the story is going. It may be a new book but its good potential to succeed. Keep up with the good work author and I wish you the best of luck.
ALREADY FALLING FOR THIS WONDERFUL BOOK....A GREAT JOB BY THIS WONDERFUL AUTHOR [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Here is the Author giving a shameless review once again but I have to say that this is one of my best novel yet....so if you do stop by here, clip on the read button and trust me you won't regret it😍😍🥰🥰❤️
wow! before I could start reading the book, the cover photo was already calling me to try the book. And you know what, the synopsis got me hooked up.
I'm loving the book already and can't wait for more update❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥 The book is really interesting and got me hooked already I'm expecting more interesting chapters ☺️☺️
when I review, iIthink aboutt how good it is compared to other books, was it good? would i I ever consider rereading it.There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, usually I could tell what the author wanted to say. It breaks immersion because I feel obligated to leave a comment for the author, but I gave up chapter 70, just too many typos, just leaving comments.There was a good twist on the fl. it switched pov to the villain not quite sure what was going on there. usually that is an attempt to give empathy or redemption and I didn't feel like it did either maybe because the villain was crazy.There are also a few things I didn't feel got addressed by the ML creating a logical inconsistency. particularly with how the maids treat ml's daughter.also not sure why fl played her hand so early, it doesn't feel safe and she should be a good parent but she created unnecessary danger for no reason. it wasn't bad but it wasn't particularly great either.
Reveal Spoiler A very good storyline that kept me hooked for days 🥰 Would have been way better with better vocabulary and grammar as it is also confusing with lots of spelling errors included as well. Good effort though.
Nice beginning, I love the way you describe your background...I know that this will turn out to be a great book[img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm already in love with this book ....keep up the good work, and I can't wait for more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I first fell in love with the book cover, the book is wonderful and intruding, I can't wait for the update, I recommend this book to everyone. good luck.
I'm already in love with this wonderful novel, a great work by this author[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
So far, I've enjoyed how the story is going. It may be a new book but its good potential to succeed. Keep up with the good work author and I wish you the best of luck.
ALREADY FALLING FOR THIS WONDERFUL BOOK....A GREAT JOB BY THIS WONDERFUL AUTHOR [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Here is the Author giving a shameless review once again but I have to say that this is one of my best novel yet....so if you do stop by here, clip on the read button and trust me you won't regret it😍😍🥰🥰❤️