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sooooo are we going to be getting anymore chapters ever or should I shut down all hope
even though it looks completed it is not and he’s also still charging coins for something that is not completed and currently paused on production to do another book what are you could’ve just continued the bookies currently writing
It started with many plot holes and he says mc is 1000 years old mentally ,but does not act like one. he's just another otaku ,dumb, neet protagonist. And there were many this ignored in the starting of novel. A good start is only required to decide if I should continue. I know many will not agree.
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Overall it is readable, sadly there are many inconsistencies. Like it was established that Xuan(The MC) wasn't actually that much stronger than the second ranked player and rather always one because he fought with his brain and had ample preparations, yet somehow he completely trusts in a new technique and has no backup plan almost getting himself killed by someone with a fraction of his experience. Then there is the fact that such an experienced, smart individual despite knowing the location of a certain item ahead of time never found it in his previous account purely because it didn't have an aura, despite already knowing about upgradeable artifacts as his main weapon was one, he had zero reason not to have it yet he somehow didn't. I get it would be inconvenient to lose this artifact with the reset but it conflicts with his character. There are indeed more cases but you should get my point, to advance the plot the author made the MC inconsistent with his background setting which shows a lack of planning.
I really love everything about this novel, just fits my taste of what I like to read…but i would like more chaps please ;-;
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Pretty well-executed story for this genre blend. However, it suffers from some issues centered around MC. The MC is required to be realistic by our limited perspective, but by definition, he cannot be realistic in said perspective. The entire world seems centered on our MC and it shows a bit too much. Yet, the beginning doesn’t hint at or support this. In fact, it plays it off as the opposite! … I‘ll briefly describe a result of this conflict: In the beginning, readers think X decision is not realistic but Y decision is fine. Then, as the readers progress their understanding, they look back and adopt the opposite view. Maybe X decision is slightly more justified, but decision Y no longer makes any sense. This conflict batters the reader’s suspension of disbelief and negates the “ah ha” moment of enlightenment. Also, I’ve found little reason to care about any of the characters so far. They seem to be divided into only 2 camps: 1. Unimportant background character 2. The character is smitten/obsessed with the MC This is a common issue with stories following the same themes as this one. Despite these problems, the writing quality is high. It mimics the style of the many translated works on webnovel. As well, the plot and setting are interesting. I’m left feeling that this is a pretty good novel even as I lose interest due to my aversion for harems, god characters, and general fatigue for this writing style/genre pairing. I might yet come back to read more in the future.
don't care for system novel, don't like when a mc is so op and has all the advantages like a true son of heaven, don't really care for harems. the quality is good enough. haven't read in less than a week I've already forgotten like every character though to be fair I didn't read too deeply (had to go finish another novel(lord Xue Ying)) but i did feel at the time there was a couple cliches and that things were too easy and fortunate for the mc. on the topic of the mc I think he's not the worst but could be more compelling, especially as early as I was in, just some advice I guess for a future novel that the early chapters especially when that's where the most people will be able to see it you have to really captivate readers, and while the novel wasn't bad in any way, it didn't captivate me early like my favorite novels would. don't take any offense for the mid score it's just my little take and it doesn't matter much since I didn't read too far, maybe I'll check out this novel again in the future.
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This novel is incredible and although I dosent have many chapters it has to be one of my favorites on webnovel. MC is awesome, the premise is awesome, characters are fleshed out and the fights are incredible. Its a shame that this novel isn't as popular as it should be but please do not stop updating this novel. A true hidden gem! I'm just sad that I'm poor and can't afford more chapters 😭
lol I'm dying 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😂😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😂😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Story starts out pretty fast with our disgusting protagonist Otaku loser turning into his cultivation self. (Side note, if he has lived for thousands of years, not sure why he isn't more mature but that's whatever.) As of the latest chapters where it was revealed that he was actually in a world made by a cultivator and that (surprise surprise) the world is real and not just a game, I have kind of started to lose interest. It starts exciting with a lot of unknowns as we observe our protagonist and the world chat etc. But, we see less and less of the world chat functions, and the story feels less like what it originally was. I know that he is supposed to be 'mysterious' but part of what made this story so good was the merging of cultivation, video games, and chats. Also, the leaderboards haven't really been used well. There were many opportunities to open up more routes for characters or sects but they are brushed aside and the only reoccurring characters are the MC's waifus. Oh, and yes im angry that grandmaster turned suicidal. By the way, please please please make leaderboard characters more relevant. The only relevant one you are making is the "number 2" but since they were all sent in batches, I'm sure that the competitive spirit is fueling the top 10 players.. add some worth to them and give them a name. As for my last critique: The fact that the players were all sent in batches is kind of strange and lame. Due to the capabilities of the cultivation God or whatever I'm sure there could have been a waiting room or a time manipulation on a high level for everyone to start at the same time. idk, guess it's just so that mc seems '"cooler" that he did all this while being behind.
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definitely give it a try . nice concept, good character development, great one of my favourite novel nice development and story line really good. 😍
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Mc isn't stupid, he is smart, intelligent, calculating, not a coward or a skirt chaser. Writing quality is good, grammer is also good, pacing is neither slow nor fast. Overall a very nice start for the novel and it has potential to be one of the top novels in the platform. What about the update stability? Author will you increase the chapter updates to 2/day or it will remain the same. [img=update]
The main appeal of this story is definitely the looming threats for the main character (Xuan), or Zero, as he finds himself at square-one all over again, while at the same time still needing to worry about the threats that existed to him when he was at the apex. Overall it's just incredibly entertaining to see what sort of reaction characters have towards his existence. I think if one finds the premise interesting they should definitely give it a go. The story starts off with a slow-build up of exposition, which might not be for everyone. However, that's just the start, it quickly begins getting interesting and has a few unexpected twists. The writing quality barely has any errors that I could find, at the same time it's easy to understand, as its been clearly edited before posting. So it's an easy read that won't make one scrunch their face wondering if they understood the sentence or not. The unexpected developments as well as the introduction of what Xianxia online is are quite nice and leave you interested on what happens with Xuan and how he'll approach his looming problems, Since even though everything should be straightforward it clearly isn't. One issue I have is that Xuan is a long-haired cultivator with ashen-white hair and red-eyes. Basically its not anything new, and to be honest it's not particularly relevant, so its easy to overlook. The world is interesting as we get to see glimpses of what Xuan's old life as Zero was, as well as his old acquaintances. I think that's the main highlight. Looking forward to whatever is going to happen between his past and his current situation. It makes for a great hook of anticipation.
If they could just reset everyone’s account on the game, couldn’t they just delete someone’s account if the got too powerful? which would make it impossible for the MC to get back as the #1 player then??
Overall, quite good; Pacing is great, and explanations of concepts doesn't seem overloaded. More characters would be nice, though, and maybe more fight scenes (if that's what you would like to go for). Also, really solid update schedule! Keep up the good work.
Very good concept. Cant wait to see the future of this novel. The concept of the main character having spent thousands of in-game years slaughtering the other players would be a good back drop for making him not be phased by killing as well as making him a patient butcher. W W W I hope to see where you take this novel and i hope it succeeds
Really high quality novel. Good writing and grammar and I really like the premise of the novel. I really hope to see more chapters released by the author. Peace and love.
I love the idea of this novel and really hope that the author will not leave it incomplete .Please author keep it up.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😁😚 really looking forward to this novel!!!
Greetings, my fellow cultured ladies and gentlemen. If you have read this book in the past but then dropped it for whatever reason, this review is for you. Minor spoilers ahead! Beware. After taking feedback from readers and editors alike, I have went back and edited a lot of the previous storyline (e.g. bringing the huntress along, MC making 'mistakes' despite his years of experience) to make it more realistic and fitting of the MC's character. I sincerely recommend giving this book another try, as I have fixed many of the previous inconsistencies. Thank you to everyone who does give this book another shot, and I hope you all have an awesome day. :)
sooooo are we going to be getting anymore chapters ever or should I shut down all hope
even though it looks completed it is not and he’s also still charging coins for something that is not completed and currently paused on production to do another book what are you could’ve just continued the bookies currently writing
It started with many plot holes and he says mc is 1000 years old mentally ,but does not act like one. he's just another otaku ,dumb, neet protagonist. And there were many this ignored in the starting of novel. A good start is only required to decide if I should continue. I know many will not agree.
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Overall it is readable, sadly there are many inconsistencies. Like it was established that Xuan(The MC) wasn't actually that much stronger than the second ranked player and rather always one because he fought with his brain and had ample preparations, yet somehow he completely trusts in a new technique and has no backup plan almost getting himself killed by someone with a fraction of his experience. Then there is the fact that such an experienced, smart individual despite knowing the location of a certain item ahead of time never found it in his previous account purely because it didn't have an aura, despite already knowing about upgradeable artifacts as his main weapon was one, he had zero reason not to have it yet he somehow didn't. I get it would be inconvenient to lose this artifact with the reset but it conflicts with his character. There are indeed more cases but you should get my point, to advance the plot the author made the MC inconsistent with his background setting which shows a lack of planning.
I really love everything about this novel, just fits my taste of what I like to read…but i would like more chaps please ;-;
Realy like the novel. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Pretty well-executed story for this genre blend. However, it suffers from some issues centered around MC. The MC is required to be realistic by our limited perspective, but by definition, he cannot be realistic in said perspective. The entire world seems centered on our MC and it shows a bit too much. Yet, the beginning doesn’t hint at or support this. In fact, it plays it off as the opposite! … I‘ll briefly describe a result of this conflict: In the beginning, readers think X decision is not realistic but Y decision is fine. Then, as the readers progress their understanding, they look back and adopt the opposite view. Maybe X decision is slightly more justified, but decision Y no longer makes any sense. This conflict batters the reader’s suspension of disbelief and negates the “ah ha” moment of enlightenment. Also, I’ve found little reason to care about any of the characters so far. They seem to be divided into only 2 camps: 1. Unimportant background character 2. The character is smitten/obsessed with the MC This is a common issue with stories following the same themes as this one. Despite these problems, the writing quality is high. It mimics the style of the many translated works on webnovel. As well, the plot and setting are interesting. I’m left feeling that this is a pretty good novel even as I lose interest due to my aversion for harems, god characters, and general fatigue for this writing style/genre pairing. I might yet come back to read more in the future.
don't care for system novel, don't like when a mc is so op and has all the advantages like a true son of heaven, don't really care for harems. the quality is good enough. haven't read in less than a week I've already forgotten like every character though to be fair I didn't read too deeply (had to go finish another novel(lord Xue Ying)) but i did feel at the time there was a couple cliches and that things were too easy and fortunate for the mc. on the topic of the mc I think he's not the worst but could be more compelling, especially as early as I was in, just some advice I guess for a future novel that the early chapters especially when that's where the most people will be able to see it you have to really captivate readers, and while the novel wasn't bad in any way, it didn't captivate me early like my favorite novels would. don't take any offense for the mid score it's just my little take and it doesn't matter much since I didn't read too far, maybe I'll check out this novel again in the future.
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This novel is incredible and although I dosent have many chapters it has to be one of my favorites on webnovel. MC is awesome, the premise is awesome, characters are fleshed out and the fights are incredible. Its a shame that this novel isn't as popular as it should be but please do not stop updating this novel. A true hidden gem! I'm just sad that I'm poor and can't afford more chapters 😭
lol I'm dying 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😂😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😂😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Story starts out pretty fast with our disgusting protagonist Otaku loser turning into his cultivation self. (Side note, if he has lived for thousands of years, not sure why he isn't more mature but that's whatever.) As of the latest chapters where it was revealed that he was actually in a world made by a cultivator and that (surprise surprise) the world is real and not just a game, I have kind of started to lose interest. It starts exciting with a lot of unknowns as we observe our protagonist and the world chat etc. But, we see less and less of the world chat functions, and the story feels less like what it originally was. I know that he is supposed to be 'mysterious' but part of what made this story so good was the merging of cultivation, video games, and chats. Also, the leaderboards haven't really been used well. There were many opportunities to open up more routes for characters or sects but they are brushed aside and the only reoccurring characters are the MC's waifus. Oh, and yes im angry that grandmaster turned suicidal. By the way, please please please make leaderboard characters more relevant. The only relevant one you are making is the "number 2" but since they were all sent in batches, I'm sure that the competitive spirit is fueling the top 10 players.. add some worth to them and give them a name. As for my last critique: The fact that the players were all sent in batches is kind of strange and lame. Due to the capabilities of the cultivation God or whatever I'm sure there could have been a waiting room or a time manipulation on a high level for everyone to start at the same time. idk, guess it's just so that mc seems '"cooler" that he did all this while being behind.
Reveal Spoiler definitely give it a try . nice concept, good character development, great one of my favourite novel nice development and story line really good. 😍
I think it is a good novel. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
༶•┈┈⛧┈♛*＊✿❀ ❀✿＊*♛┈⛧┈┈•༶✧༺♥༻✧⋆ ˚｡⋆୨୧˚ ˚୨୧⋆｡˚ ⋆*:..｡o○ ○o｡..:**+:｡.｡ ｡.｡:+*ﾟ+*:;;:* *:;;:*+ﾟ｡.｡:∞♡*♥*+:｡.｡ ｡.｡:+*ﾟ+*:;;:* *:;;:*+ﾟ*+:｡.｡ ｡.｡:+*
Mc isn't stupid, he is smart, intelligent, calculating, not a coward or a skirt chaser. Writing quality is good, grammer is also good, pacing is neither slow nor fast. Overall a very nice start for the novel and it has potential to be one of the top novels in the platform. What about the update stability? Author will you increase the chapter updates to 2/day or it will remain the same. [img=update]
The main appeal of this story is definitely the looming threats for the main character (Xuan), or Zero, as he finds himself at square-one all over again, while at the same time still needing to worry about the threats that existed to him when he was at the apex. Overall it's just incredibly entertaining to see what sort of reaction characters have towards his existence. I think if one finds the premise interesting they should definitely give it a go. The story starts off with a slow-build up of exposition, which might not be for everyone. However, that's just the start, it quickly begins getting interesting and has a few unexpected twists. The writing quality barely has any errors that I could find, at the same time it's easy to understand, as its been clearly edited before posting. So it's an easy read that won't make one scrunch their face wondering if they understood the sentence or not. The unexpected developments as well as the introduction of what Xianxia online is are quite nice and leave you interested on what happens with Xuan and how he'll approach his looming problems, Since even though everything should be straightforward it clearly isn't. One issue I have is that Xuan is a long-haired cultivator with ashen-white hair and red-eyes. Basically its not anything new, and to be honest it's not particularly relevant, so its easy to overlook. The world is interesting as we get to see glimpses of what Xuan's old life as Zero was, as well as his old acquaintances. I think that's the main highlight. Looking forward to whatever is going to happen between his past and his current situation. It makes for a great hook of anticipation.
If they could just reset everyone’s account on the game, couldn’t they just delete someone’s account if the got too powerful? which would make it impossible for the MC to get back as the #1 player then??
Overall, quite good; Pacing is great, and explanations of concepts doesn't seem overloaded. More characters would be nice, though, and maybe more fight scenes (if that's what you would like to go for). Also, really solid update schedule! Keep up the good work.
Very good concept. Cant wait to see the future of this novel. The concept of the main character having spent thousands of in-game years slaughtering the other players would be a good back drop for making him not be phased by killing as well as making him a patient butcher. W W W I hope to see where you take this novel and i hope it succeeds
Really high quality novel. Good writing and grammar and I really like the premise of the novel. I really hope to see more chapters released by the author. Peace and love.
I love the idea of this novel and really hope that the author will not leave it incomplete .Please author keep it up.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😁😚 really looking forward to this novel!!!
Greetings, my fellow cultured ladies and gentlemen. If you have read this book in the past but then dropped it for whatever reason, this review is for you. Minor spoilers ahead! Beware. After taking feedback from readers and editors alike, I have went back and edited a lot of the previous storyline (e.g. bringing the huntress along, MC making 'mistakes' despite his years of experience) to make it more realistic and fitting of the MC's character. I sincerely recommend giving this book another try, as I have fixed many of the previous inconsistencies. Thank you to everyone who does give this book another shot, and I hope you all have an awesome day. :)