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It a really good concept but the writer doesn’t know what he is doing and I hate how to mc treats people
Me encato, bastante interesante la version de sistema "The Gamer" que aplico y esta version de "Juegos" para los diferentes mundos. Seria interesante ver otros mundos y como se escalaria el sistema en un mundo como Dragon Ball.
Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Mas podia descrever o r18 com a azula
WARNING WARNING CHINESE LOGIC this is bad like really bad, MC is really stupid and make some not so smart choices and the author makes people say " what a genius idea" and very wise. it is just painful to read. it is a find novel if it is an 8th grader that are starting his/hers first writers Carrier but for grown people that has a little bit of common sense it really lacks
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This is the most amazing avatar fanfic there is, thank you author for this novel, you could have added a few more girls to his harem like Ty Lee, Mai, Katara, Yue (Moon Princess) & more elements like glass, wood (Yang Chi), poison (Yin Chi), energy bending, spirit bending. Overall it was a great novel, Thanks ❤
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Dialogue is bad. I like the story premise a lot and it has been very interesting so far but the dialogue just feels juvenile and it does not feel like the author has grasped the fact that people can speak differently and often do.
to be frank, the potential of this novel just went in the drain due to the mc himself. i won't explain the things made me feel unsatisfied but I don't like how he treated his new mother in that world.
Foi agradável só achei que ele poderia ter feito o final com menos.................... pressa.,.....................................................
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It's a fun concept, but with poor execution. There isn't much to be said about the writing quality, it is on a average level, there isn't any stellar or unique qualities about it, but misspelled words are rare so I'm giving it 4 stars. I don't believe the update stability matters too much as there is around 80 chapters of content to go through, so I'll leave it at 3 stars. Story development is childish, but this is too be expected from a Gamer-esque novel. It doesn't explore any topics, and, shows inconsistencies from the world in which it takes place--Avatar--hence, why I am giving it 2 stars. Character design is bottom of the barrel stuff, I am used to childish characters and the like, but this one is particularly bad as it introduces annoying characters for no apparent reason and then they make the characters contradict themselves, so, this is 1 star. World background is nothing new, it's a fanfic and nothing is expanded upon, nor is anything developed.
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Just read the book from start to finnish, and I have to say this book is one of the top 3 ATLA fanfictions I have read so far. Hopefully more people will read this amazing book
-------------------------------------Очень годный фанфик. Немного освежает после китайских новел. Я не думал что это хоть и будет немного глав, займут несколько дней чтения, с перерывами.----------------
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the author and his egotistical mc..... he forgot about his mother... oh~ how heartless, this is a literal reincarnated MC who doesn't care about his parents in his new world.
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when's the next update author? it's been 2 months since you last updated even with the recent ending of the other novel.
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Um maluco idiota que sai afogando o ganso aleatóriamente. Típico, sem graça e a falta de criatividade é admirável. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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it's good but I was expecting it to be as great as your one piece fanfic so i was a bit let down. I can still remember how entertaining your one piece fanfic was even though I read it last year and it got a solid 5 star rating from me but this one is better than many other avatar fanfics ive read so great job[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It’s quite good, there are a few leaps in logic but if you wonder why everyone thinks earth bending is clearly the strongest and most broken branch of bending look no further than this fanfic. I think the gravity bending is a jump in logic though. Also azula suddenly siding with the mc… I think there was still some story left to be told about aang and what he would do after finding out about the MC. I mean in a way he did exactly as azula said… although he killed very few she wasn’t entirely wrong… So IMO there was still a little bit that was left unsaid. However I think given that aang does enter the spirit world a few times he could’ve just ended things with the previous avatar speaking to aang. Well, overall it’s quite good a few things changed from sorce material but it’s a fanfiction and the author can and imo should do what they want.
It a really good concept but the writer doesn’t know what he is doing and I hate how to mc treats people
Me encato, bastante interesante la version de sistema "The Gamer" que aplico y esta version de "Juegos" para los diferentes mundos. Seria interesante ver otros mundos y como se escalaria el sistema en un mundo como Dragon Ball.
Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Gostei muito da historia Mas podia descrever o r18 com a azula
WARNING WARNING CHINESE LOGIC this is bad like really bad, MC is really stupid and make some not so smart choices and the author makes people say " what a genius idea" and very wise. it is just painful to read. it is a find novel if it is an 8th grader that are starting his/hers first writers Carrier but for grown people that has a little bit of common sense it really lacks
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This is the most amazing avatar fanfic there is, thank you author for this novel, you could have added a few more girls to his harem like Ty Lee, Mai, Katara, Yue (Moon Princess) & more elements like glass, wood (Yang Chi), poison (Yin Chi), energy bending, spirit bending. Overall it was a great novel, Thanks ❤
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Dialogue is bad. I like the story premise a lot and it has been very interesting so far but the dialogue just feels juvenile and it does not feel like the author has grasped the fact that people can speak differently and often do.
to be frank, the potential of this novel just went in the drain due to the mc himself. i won't explain the things made me feel unsatisfied but I don't like how he treated his new mother in that world.
Foi agradável só achei que ele poderia ter feito o final com menos.................... pressa.,.....................................................
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It's a fun concept, but with poor execution. There isn't much to be said about the writing quality, it is on a average level, there isn't any stellar or unique qualities about it, but misspelled words are rare so I'm giving it 4 stars. I don't believe the update stability matters too much as there is around 80 chapters of content to go through, so I'll leave it at 3 stars. Story development is childish, but this is too be expected from a Gamer-esque novel. It doesn't explore any topics, and, shows inconsistencies from the world in which it takes place--Avatar--hence, why I am giving it 2 stars. Character design is bottom of the barrel stuff, I am used to childish characters and the like, but this one is particularly bad as it introduces annoying characters for no apparent reason and then they make the characters contradict themselves, so, this is 1 star. World background is nothing new, it's a fanfic and nothing is expanded upon, nor is anything developed.
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Just read the book from start to finnish, and I have to say this book is one of the top 3 ATLA fanfictions I have read so far. Hopefully more people will read this amazing book
-------------------------------------Очень годный фанфик. Немного освежает после китайских новел. Я не думал что это хоть и будет немного глав, займут несколько дней чтения, с перерывами.----------------
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the author and his egotistical mc..... he forgot about his mother... oh~ how heartless, this is a literal reincarnated MC who doesn't care about his parents in his new world.
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Reveal Spoiler when's the next update author? it's been 2 months since you last updated even with the recent ending of the other novel.
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Um maluco idiota que sai afogando o ganso aleatóriamente. Típico, sem graça e a falta de criatividade é admirável. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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it's good but I was expecting it to be as great as your one piece fanfic so i was a bit let down. I can still remember how entertaining your one piece fanfic was even though I read it last year and it got a solid 5 star rating from me but this one is better than many other avatar fanfics ive read so great job[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It’s quite good, there are a few leaps in logic but if you wonder why everyone thinks earth bending is clearly the strongest and most broken branch of bending look no further than this fanfic. I think the gravity bending is a jump in logic though. Also azula suddenly siding with the mc… I think there was still some story left to be told about aang and what he would do after finding out about the MC. I mean in a way he did exactly as azula said… although he killed very few she wasn’t entirely wrong… So IMO there was still a little bit that was left unsaid. However I think given that aang does enter the spirit world a few times he could’ve just ended things with the previous avatar speaking to aang. Well, overall it’s quite good a few things changed from sorce material but it’s a fanfiction and the author can and imo should do what they want.