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terrible writing , zero plot , zero character development , all female leads have the same personality , mc is a simpleton
MC is waaay OP, like a god, but needlessly overcomplicated with system. Harem is way to much, no actual relationship building, thousands, millions of girls in harem, yet only dozen of them are touched. MC tries to get all women with him, yet not actually caring about them. Women are crazy. Netori everywhere to the point when women unalive their previous male relatives/partners just because, even if their relationship was good, they dont care. There's no plot, no romance, no comedy, no drama. Smut and useless system(bookwise, not for mc) and some random POV takes all the screentime. i wish i haven't read 100+ chapters waiting for something meaningful or pleasant.
There should be story between chapter 32 to 33. What happened with Elizabeth and her father and Ancl. Who is other lady called magma, when did he his third Students.
Rewrite this novel, this novel have a potential but it's repetitive. Too much drama, unnecessarily plot, and i think you should focus about the Cultivation of the girls.
novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"
was going good till ch 32 I had to stop. I'll pick back up after it's fixed it's to big of a jump in story
It’s alright at best, my confuse is at chapter 30 something everything gets new names. Pretty sure it’s a rewrite but there is zero indication of what’s what, I’m so confused rn.
The author screwed up the story plot doing rewrites, everything was going fine until after chapter 32. The next chapter though labeled 33 33 is so screwed up that I couldn't even tell you how many chapters are missing from after chapter 32 to the story timeline. so much info is missing so I'm deleting it from my library
it feels kinda dumb is all. I know it's not meant to be a masterpiece but I feel it shouldn't be dumb either. MC is super strong but wastes time playing around with random weaklings for no reason when his only goal is a harem. It would be diffferent if it was established he enjoyed doing it or something, but it feels like mc just decides to prolong fights for no reason while saying dumb lines like ,''you have nothing to worry about''. Like bro if she has nothing to worry about then show her she has nothing to worry about by beating the bad guy with one move, why waste time playing around. It's like a grown man beating up a kid and going, 'heh, had enough yet'', and then waiting for the kid to get up and try again. Just smack him once and call it a day otherwise its just pathetic tbh.
It was okay I guess, but from chapter 101 you start writing with chatgpt, what are you trying? Do you have a little respect for your readers? ridiculous!!!
piece of trash this book is truly stupidest book I've ever read congratulations author you successfully wasted my time im even furiously writing this comment
Could have been an enjoyable read of an OP MC, but unfortunately it is same thing over and over. It says Harem, but by ch 100 he already has over 1600 women in his Harem/Sect. At this point he has only spent minimal time with 6 of them, and spent snu snu time with 18 (12 at once) of them, and one of them supposedly multiple times. Author has a tendency to take a point and beat a dead horse with it. The story could have been a nice laid back read with a bit of development with the Sects... Heck he could have built the sects numbers from the Town folks and kept the Sects as subsidiaries and not affected them to much. If girls from the sects truly wanted to come to him, they could, but his visiting of the sects and essentially demanding female elders and disciples over and over for me is just bland to the story.. More enjoyable would have been building the disciples (1000 or less) with working with them, snu snu, travelling, and developing the sect would be more interesting. I will try beyond the sects to see if it gets any better after the town and sects are in line, but right now it is just lame.
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(2 1 2 3 4)/5=2.2___________________________________________This review section is either a case of readers with good sense leaving without making a review. or some bad reviews get deleted._________________________________________&&maybe I misunderstand the wish fulfillment genre. my impression was it is to personify a character who gets to finally live out the life you dream of with everything you value. The majority of wish fulfillment appears to not only devalue the things you might dream of having, it gives you the highest valued item possible, then makes them worthless by giving you more.__________________________&&___________In this novel, the MC gets everything one could desire so easily it's obvious they hold no value to him._______________________________&&&&&&_____the "wives" he gets. he claims he will live then to the extent of plucking stars for them if they desire. the thing is, while the females value this, it's such a trivial task for him that this stops being a meaningful gesture.I've ranted too much already. I'll hold off and say I stopped reading before finding the chapter where another review says the mc killed of all the males in a sect just to take all the females into his sect. given how ones of those females slept her way up, you can't say he was saving all these disciples from being abused.
good novel, just a bit slowanyway anyone can recommend me a novel with op mc like this one?
ita good actually I've been searching for a novel like this CAN ANYONE PLSSSS RECOMMEND ME A NOVEL LIKE THIS" there's another novel like this but I already read it called "the god of all system" the only difference is the mc of the god of all system is way toooooooooo stronger than daniel
Well... All I can say is that too much of anything is not enjoyable. Same for the harem. It would've been fine if he had like a close circle of women, but MC's desire to conquer ALL women isn't enjoyable. (Personality opinion). What made me drop the book is that he goes to a sect, destroys the upper echelons, but only kills the males and the women are kept alive to make them join his harem. But the women don't have a good character individually, one of them had even offered her body to the previous sect master. And as we all know, people who sell their body to gain material benefits are who?....Wh*res. That's who. I'm not really keen on women like that joining his harem, but other than that it's a fine read. Give it a try.
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From the middle of the story everything seems to be written with CHATGPT......... ........... .............................. .....................................
I really liked this book. I hope the author will release a new chapter soon. I'm looking forward to the new chapters. And this novel has become one of my favorites.
Author when you gonna add more chapters I ain’t gonna lie don’t want you to drop this because I been rereading this a lot since there haven’t been more chapters 🤷🏽♂️
terrible writing , zero plot , zero character development , all female leads have the same personality , mc is a simpleton
MC is waaay OP, like a god, but needlessly overcomplicated with system. Harem is way to much, no actual relationship building, thousands, millions of girls in harem, yet only dozen of them are touched. MC tries to get all women with him, yet not actually caring about them. Women are crazy. Netori everywhere to the point when women unalive their previous male relatives/partners just because, even if their relationship was good, they dont care. There's no plot, no romance, no comedy, no drama. Smut and useless system(bookwise, not for mc) and some random POV takes all the screentime. i wish i haven't read 100+ chapters waiting for something meaningful or pleasant.
There should be story between chapter 32 to 33. What happened with Elizabeth and her father and Ancl. Who is other lady called magma, when did he his third Students.
Rewrite this novel, this novel have a potential but it's repetitive. Too much drama, unnecessarily plot, and i think you should focus about the Cultivation of the girls.
novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"
was going good till ch 32 I had to stop. I'll pick back up after it's fixed it's to big of a jump in story
It’s alright at best, my confuse is at chapter 30 something everything gets new names. Pretty sure it’s a rewrite but there is zero indication of what’s what, I’m so confused rn.
The author screwed up the story plot doing rewrites, everything was going fine until after chapter 32. The next chapter though labeled 33 33 is so screwed up that I couldn't even tell you how many chapters are missing from after chapter 32 to the story timeline. so much info is missing so I'm deleting it from my library
it feels kinda dumb is all. I know it's not meant to be a masterpiece but I feel it shouldn't be dumb either. MC is super strong but wastes time playing around with random weaklings for no reason when his only goal is a harem. It would be diffferent if it was established he enjoyed doing it or something, but it feels like mc just decides to prolong fights for no reason while saying dumb lines like ,''you have nothing to worry about''. Like bro if she has nothing to worry about then show her she has nothing to worry about by beating the bad guy with one move, why waste time playing around. It's like a grown man beating up a kid and going, 'heh, had enough yet'', and then waiting for the kid to get up and try again. Just smack him once and call it a day otherwise its just pathetic tbh.
It was okay I guess, but from chapter 101 you start writing with chatgpt, what are you trying? Do you have a little respect for your readers? ridiculous!!!
piece of trash this book is truly stupidest book I've ever read congratulations author you successfully wasted my time im even furiously writing this comment
Could have been an enjoyable read of an OP MC, but unfortunately it is same thing over and over. It says Harem, but by ch 100 he already has over 1600 women in his Harem/Sect. At this point he has only spent minimal time with 6 of them, and spent snu snu time with 18 (12 at once) of them, and one of them supposedly multiple times. Author has a tendency to take a point and beat a dead horse with it. The story could have been a nice laid back read with a bit of development with the Sects... Heck he could have built the sects numbers from the Town folks and kept the Sects as subsidiaries and not affected them to much. If girls from the sects truly wanted to come to him, they could, but his visiting of the sects and essentially demanding female elders and disciples over and over for me is just bland to the story.. More enjoyable would have been building the disciples (1000 or less) with working with them, snu snu, travelling, and developing the sect would be more interesting. I will try beyond the sects to see if it gets any better after the town and sects are in line, but right now it is just lame.
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(2 1 2 3 4)/5=2.2___________________________________________This review section is either a case of readers with good sense leaving without making a review. or some bad reviews get deleted._________________________________________&&maybe I misunderstand the wish fulfillment genre. my impression was it is to personify a character who gets to finally live out the life you dream of with everything you value. The majority of wish fulfillment appears to not only devalue the things you might dream of having, it gives you the highest valued item possible, then makes them worthless by giving you more.__________________________&&___________In this novel, the MC gets everything one could desire so easily it's obvious they hold no value to him._______________________________&&&&&&_____the "wives" he gets. he claims he will live then to the extent of plucking stars for them if they desire. the thing is, while the females value this, it's such a trivial task for him that this stops being a meaningful gesture.I've ranted too much already. I'll hold off and say I stopped reading before finding the chapter where another review says the mc killed of all the males in a sect just to take all the females into his sect. given how ones of those females slept her way up, you can't say he was saving all these disciples from being abused.
good novel, just a bit slowanyway anyone can recommend me a novel with op mc like this one?
ita good actually I've been searching for a novel like this CAN ANYONE PLSSSS RECOMMEND ME A NOVEL LIKE THIS" there's another novel like this but I already read it called "the god of all system" the only difference is the mc of the god of all system is way toooooooooo stronger than daniel
Well... All I can say is that too much of anything is not enjoyable. Same for the harem. It would've been fine if he had like a close circle of women, but MC's desire to conquer ALL women isn't enjoyable. (Personality opinion). What made me drop the book is that he goes to a sect, destroys the upper echelons, but only kills the males and the women are kept alive to make them join his harem. But the women don't have a good character individually, one of them had even offered her body to the previous sect master. And as we all know, people who sell their body to gain material benefits are who?....Wh*res. That's who. I'm not really keen on women like that joining his harem, but other than that it's a fine read. Give it a try.
Loved The Story. Hope to Read More [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
From the middle of the story everything seems to be written with CHATGPT......... ........... .............................. .....................................
I really liked this book. I hope the author will release a new chapter soon. I'm looking forward to the new chapters. And this novel has become one of my favorites.
Author when you gonna add more chapters I ain’t gonna lie don’t want you to drop this because I been rereading this a lot since there haven’t been more chapters 🤷🏽♂️