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I'm Happy,No Very Happy with this novel it has evil mc but with emotion like one time he is normal with villagers and another time he is pure evil and i like the way relationship between meena nd mc is going it's just there is not enough chapter and when author break fourth wall it's spine chillin with story and my fav character our one and only rat grifter but ut has so much potential i hope you utilise to maximum author.and if you like mystry suspense and plot twist with human broken behaviour and mc is like joker but with more emotions he expects from life much more in novel but at the end of day entertainment is best for me(evil smirk)
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I don’t usually comment much, but I had to say, this story is so alive! The descriptions, emotions, and rhythm all make it so easy to imagine visually. I could see it working perfectly as a webtoon or even a full manga series. The way you build tension and reveal details feels so cinematic. I really hope one day this gets turned into a visual adaptation because it truly deserves that spotlight.
Author u sick?? Cuz your not updating it often if not it’s fine also do u use editors? Cuz i cant read cuz of the grammar
it's a good one... ignore the grammatical mistakes ... those won't be that much of bother to understand and enjoy the plot ...though the genre is horror it's more mystery and weird supernatural stuffs ... the most interesting and fun in the novel is the MC
Read the first book as titled then it from what I can tell it mostly becomes an anthology, not my thing.
Really good novel, but there are some.. mistakes, as in grammar, etc… Overall, it’s awesome. Asking your allowance, for me to translate this novel in Russian. I feel like it should get more spread around the internet, it deserves that.
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow—your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is (florianne_0268) or by email (florianne189[at]gmail[dot]com). Hope to hear from you soon.
I'ce only just started the second arc, but I was hooked from chapter 1. This story's character development is top-notch as even a character that's only been introduced for 1 chapter feels so real with their own quirks and motives. The twists are also fantastic so far. If you're looking for a series that isn't just a grind of fights and power struggles, then I highly recommend giving this series a read!
I don't know where this rating comes from... From the first chapter “I am this”, “I am this”, “I am that”, I am nothing” in almost every sentence, it is impossible to read, I closed it on the 2nd chapter.
Well ive read to chapter 40 for the story it is very nice i love how he is quite omniscience but since i am broke i cant really buy it but until its free chapters its really nice i hope you countinue to write it
Bro very upset with your second arc ending. I was expecting something better by the end of second arc. Little Spoilers-> But all I see are failure, failure, loss of memory and still no body. End of Spoiler. The purpose of your MC is entertainment but the same can be achieved from watching TV or reading novels also( Like we are doing). So I cannot continue to watch your character make a clown of himself. It feels stupid without a real good motivation. You can get entertainment from anything. Just simply by watching ants also. So why make something so easy something so complicated.
I don’t normally write reviews, especially this early into reading (ch30), but this book feels like exactly what I’ve wanted from the rebirth/isekai genre. The fantastic set up, MC, and power system remind me a lot of Soul of Negary at its peak but with a-lot of LotM dna
I’m someone who doesn’t have patience so I didn’t know everything was illusion happening to mc, I almost dropped but i read till 15 chapters the mystery came out it’s fun reading it and the mc is evil.
This novel is truly an interesting novel with the protagonist fully living up the the role and the story telling style of the story and how it’s gradually built up into whatever evil plan jester is planning
great novel, I like idea behind it and from reading it you can feel the author really cares about his work
After reading more than a 100 chapters I can say it's a unique story. The author introduces us to a new type of Mc. But nevertheless his villainy isn't truly fleshed out in the story. It's kinda a narrative rather than something the readers can truly grasp. It's a recommend for seasonal readers not newbies for it's definitely something you would find anywhere.It's not too late to start tweaking Jester as the first arc ended on a high note.Considering the age of the MC we expect the plot twists and scheming to be mind blowingAnyway it's a definite good read
It is amazing. If you want to try something new. Though i have to say it is very confusing at the start and I didn’t understand power system at all because some people are just too poweful without making any sense and how can one even progress in levels.but it is a good read all things considered.
I... remember thinking of writing a 5 star review for this. But I dont either.I dont. Its weird... ha 5 stars. Its amazing wonderful.
This story is one of the best so far, I love the violence the most. I might sound like an edglord but stories are always more interesting with a little bit of indiscriminate killing. But there even better when there’s someone smart doing the killing.
I really like the premise of a self-aware MC that serves as his own narrator. Really gives a Godly feel to the Jester, especially since he has others arguably stronge than him fooled. The beginning lulls you in and then shatters your expectations after Jester emerges in the Magic World. Can't wait for more backstory on what Jester did before creating Dream Street
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Really nice change from typical stories on the site, with more of a story focus rather the what the protagonist is doing every waking moment.(even if the story is the development of the main character) Which allows the pacing to be much better done as the author can use other character to further the plot without it just becoming the protagonist monologuing and explaining everything. It also helps that the protagonist doesn’t have to be always doing something for chapters to come out allowing for less filler as other characters will be written about meaning better world development as we see thing outside of that the protagonist directly interacts with now in in the future. (good world building)
Rat king? lol thats funny I have never seen rats fight Myself i'd really like to watch rats fight Your story is really nice GoGo I like the way your words were written Very easy to read and understand And i do not know how many words were per chapter because i loved reading it all the step of the way!
Wow. I'm actually surprised by how good this novel is. It has great potential and the only downside is it's lack of chapters. :) :) :) :) :)
If you want to read something that's both interesting and mysterious then this is the novel for you. word word word word word word word word.
This novel is great. The mystery and the plot twists are amazing. I highly recommend this novel to people who like mc's with twisted personalities.
A very interesting read with a mc that is different from the typical one bringing variety to the history. I recommend it to change from the typical histories that are overflowing the plattform.
I'm SO glad I stumbled upon this gem...this is just the kind of book I was hoping to find...thank you author for writing this :) You are nailing the villain POV.
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author .I enjoy your work . recommended:)
The story is steam punkish with magic flair to it. But it is also a lot different than what you might have read before. As said before, this is a story about an ill man. It's 18+ for a reason and you truly shouldn't read it if you are not ready for it. There are mature themes in this novel and I won't be holding back on specific aspects of reality that is our own world. So get ready. As for the story itself, there are two forms of storytelling. One from the perspective of our main character(Let's call him Jester) will act as the narrator, telling us the story. While the other is third-person usually narration when Jester is not present in the scene. Making that particular scene not part of Jester's play. So read it at your own risk. And if you might have questions, ask away.
I'm Happy,No Very Happy with this novel it has evil mc but with emotion like one time he is normal with villagers and another time he is pure evil and i like the way relationship between meena nd mc is going it's just there is not enough chapter and when author break fourth wall it's spine chillin with story and my fav character our one and only rat grifter but ut has so much potential i hope you utilise to maximum author.and if you like mystry suspense and plot twist with human broken behaviour and mc is like joker but with more emotions he expects from life much more in novel but at the end of day entertainment is best for me(evil smirk)
Reveal Spoiler I don’t usually comment much, but I had to say, this story is so alive! The descriptions, emotions, and rhythm all make it so easy to imagine visually. I could see it working perfectly as a webtoon or even a full manga series. The way you build tension and reveal details feels so cinematic. I really hope one day this gets turned into a visual adaptation because it truly deserves that spotlight.
Author u sick?? Cuz your not updating it often if not it’s fine also do u use editors? Cuz i cant read cuz of the grammar
it's a good one... ignore the grammatical mistakes ... those won't be that much of bother to understand and enjoy the plot ...though the genre is horror it's more mystery and weird supernatural stuffs ... the most interesting and fun in the novel is the MC
Read the first book as titled then it from what I can tell it mostly becomes an anthology, not my thing.
Really good novel, but there are some.. mistakes, as in grammar, etc… Overall, it’s awesome. Asking your allowance, for me to translate this novel in Russian. I feel like it should get more spread around the internet, it deserves that.
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow—your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is (florianne_0268) or by email (florianne189[at]gmail[dot]com). Hope to hear from you soon.
I'ce only just started the second arc, but I was hooked from chapter 1. This story's character development is top-notch as even a character that's only been introduced for 1 chapter feels so real with their own quirks and motives. The twists are also fantastic so far. If you're looking for a series that isn't just a grind of fights and power struggles, then I highly recommend giving this series a read!
I don't know where this rating comes from... From the first chapter “I am this”, “I am this”, “I am that”, I am nothing” in almost every sentence, it is impossible to read, I closed it on the 2nd chapter.
Well ive read to chapter 40 for the story it is very nice i love how he is quite omniscience but since i am broke i cant really buy it but until its free chapters its really nice i hope you countinue to write it
Bro very upset with your second arc ending. I was expecting something better by the end of second arc. Little Spoilers-> But all I see are failure, failure, loss of memory and still no body. End of Spoiler. The purpose of your MC is entertainment but the same can be achieved from watching TV or reading novels also( Like we are doing). So I cannot continue to watch your character make a clown of himself. It feels stupid without a real good motivation. You can get entertainment from anything. Just simply by watching ants also. So why make something so easy something so complicated.
I don’t normally write reviews, especially this early into reading (ch30), but this book feels like exactly what I’ve wanted from the rebirth/isekai genre. The fantastic set up, MC, and power system remind me a lot of Soul of Negary at its peak but with a-lot of LotM dna
I’m someone who doesn’t have patience so I didn’t know everything was illusion happening to mc, I almost dropped but i read till 15 chapters the mystery came out it’s fun reading it and the mc is evil.
This novel is truly an interesting novel with the protagonist fully living up the the role and the story telling style of the story and how it’s gradually built up into whatever evil plan jester is planning
great novel, I like idea behind it and from reading it you can feel the author really cares about his work
After reading more than a 100 chapters I can say it's a unique story. The author introduces us to a new type of Mc. But nevertheless his villainy isn't truly fleshed out in the story. It's kinda a narrative rather than something the readers can truly grasp. It's a recommend for seasonal readers not newbies for it's definitely something you would find anywhere.It's not too late to start tweaking Jester as the first arc ended on a high note.Considering the age of the MC we expect the plot twists and scheming to be mind blowingAnyway it's a definite good read
It is amazing. If you want to try something new. Though i have to say it is very confusing at the start and I didn’t understand power system at all because some people are just too poweful without making any sense and how can one even progress in levels.but it is a good read all things considered.
I... remember thinking of writing a 5 star review for this. But I dont either.I dont. Its weird... ha 5 stars. Its amazing wonderful.
This story is one of the best so far, I love the violence the most. I might sound like an edglord but stories are always more interesting with a little bit of indiscriminate killing. But there even better when there’s someone smart doing the killing.
I really like the premise of a self-aware MC that serves as his own narrator. Really gives a Godly feel to the Jester, especially since he has others arguably stronge than him fooled. The beginning lulls you in and then shatters your expectations after Jester emerges in the Magic World. Can't wait for more backstory on what Jester did before creating Dream Street
Reveal Spoiler Really nice change from typical stories on the site, with more of a story focus rather the what the protagonist is doing every waking moment.(even if the story is the development of the main character) Which allows the pacing to be much better done as the author can use other character to further the plot without it just becoming the protagonist monologuing and explaining everything. It also helps that the protagonist doesn’t have to be always doing something for chapters to come out allowing for less filler as other characters will be written about meaning better world development as we see thing outside of that the protagonist directly interacts with now in in the future. (good world building)
Rat king? lol thats funny I have never seen rats fight Myself i'd really like to watch rats fight Your story is really nice GoGo I like the way your words were written Very easy to read and understand And i do not know how many words were per chapter because i loved reading it all the step of the way!
Wow. I'm actually surprised by how good this novel is. It has great potential and the only downside is it's lack of chapters. :) :) :) :) :)
If you want to read something that's both interesting and mysterious then this is the novel for you. word word word word word word word word.
This novel is great. The mystery and the plot twists are amazing. I highly recommend this novel to people who like mc's with twisted personalities.
A very interesting read with a mc that is different from the typical one bringing variety to the history. I recommend it to change from the typical histories that are overflowing the plattform.
I'm SO glad I stumbled upon this gem...this is just the kind of book I was hoping to find...thank you author for writing this :) You are nailing the villain POV.
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author .I enjoy your work . recommended:)
The story is steam punkish with magic flair to it. But it is also a lot different than what you might have read before. As said before, this is a story about an ill man. It's 18+ for a reason and you truly shouldn't read it if you are not ready for it. There are mature themes in this novel and I won't be holding back on specific aspects of reality that is our own world. So get ready. As for the story itself, there are two forms of storytelling. One from the perspective of our main character(Let's call him Jester) will act as the narrator, telling us the story. While the other is third-person usually narration when Jester is not present in the scene. Making that particular scene not part of Jester's play. So read it at your own risk. And if you might have questions, ask away.