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After reading a few comments today, it made me realize something. Sorry, but this story is not for you. It doesn't matter whether you read it or not. I don't care if you drop it. All I want to say is that I write this story because I love One Piece. And, I am writing fanfiction. If you don't like the idea then you can easily drop it and clear it from your library. But those who like it should stay whether it is the best moment of the story or the worst moment of the story. Because every moment matters. So, I am going to delete any kind of review if you just give it based on your feelings rather than understanding the story. Because I don't believe that if you understand the story or are willing to wait for more to understand it better then you wouldn't remove a star unless it is for writing quality. I can assure you that.
it start pretty good but slowly become a classic Chinese protagonist ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Did you stop uploading new chepter if not when will get new chapters? Btw its really good fanfic really love it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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the devil fruit ability made me drop this. other than that, it's okay... I think. so much potential but wasted on a devil fruit that... not going to spoil it.
I've had this saved since the day it came into existence, and I never bothered to read it until there were more chapters until I forgot about it and then found it like 25 minutes ago, and that whole time I've been reading the reviews, it's bumbed me out, I was exited to enjoy another one piece ff, now I'm just going to read it and see if I can enjoy it, but, sadly, I'm extremely picky about what I read.
the fanfic is nice and the development is subtle and you start liking it, if you created a new world with a similar story line it would give you originality
It start out great a normal isekai guy without cheats except for the usual knowledge, that want to follow the story that will do anything to catch up to the Strawhats and so that he will not left behind. but then the author made a devil fruit that is suitable to the mc's reckless fighting style but choose to feed it to merry but its still acceptable since people love merry so I push through but then he made the second devil fruit stupid gambling which hated by every reader some dropped out but some choose to continue myself included. but what made me dropped this shit is when at ch 70-71 he goes full spoiler drop to the crew about luffy's devil fruit, shanks plan theory, some stupid worlds secret thats when I decided to dropped out, as you said that this novel is not for me but have some balls about reviews that is not pleasant to your eyes I heard that authors deleting 3 and below review, I dont care if this gets deleted as long as I got to say my opinion and review of this novel
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Eu gostei da história e do personagem principal não estando por que estão falando mal obs (duvido que muitos deles conseguiriam fazer uma fic com tão boa quanto ) espero que não abandone a fic
I love the main character and his dynamic with the captain—it adds real depth to the story. His power is refreshingly unique compared to typical fanfics, making every twist even more engaging. The race against time raises the stakes, and I can't wait to see how his journey unfolds, shaping his loved ones and leaving a lasting impact on the world.
Sinceramente me pareció mas horrible que gracioso este fanfic, no quiero ofender pero en serio lo de "Débil" a "Fuerte" ahí se les paso la mano que el mc prácticamente rogara unirse a luffy me pareció patético y lo peor es que cuando golpea a alguien se lastima la mano....es en serio como a alguien le puede gustar esto? y dejemos de lado la fruta de basura que le dieron al MC porque se haría largo esto. Sinceramente para mi los mejores fanfic de One Piece son los que los MC nunca comen un fruta del diablo
I usually don't give low ratings, but sadly, this fanfic dropped quality too much. As someone who read until 175 onwards, the story quality dropped!!! Luffy's character is changed. Liam's character changes in the early chapters. He said he would love only one woman with all his heart, and suddenly, in chapter 175, Robin calls him a pervert. And we get to know Liam's hitting on Robin and Vivi, and he's a trash piece?? And worse of all is he getting erased ?? Throughout the story from chapter 5, we are continuously reminded that Liam is vice-captain, but he keeps acting like a captain. I know Luffy is dumb but he's not that dumb that he needs a vice-captain to take every decision and speak on his behalf. Tho the only redeeming point about this story is the writing quality which is 5/5. Thank you to the writer for this great masterpiece I had this book in my library for a long time, and I had fun reading Liam's journey. I enjoyed this book till the Kuzan fight. Wish you the best in your Future endeavor. Happy Writing
Tha last chp is Bad ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ...............
5/3/1/3/5 Will keep it short. Writing quality is really good on this one. Author actually understands the one piece world amd it's characters. Update schedule is a bit random. He goes on long hiatus then randomly comes back and stays consistent till his next hiatus. Story development is good to. The changes done throughout the story, subtle or directly is done right. Except the romance parts (which I hate with my life) were a bit force. But if you can ignore it you'll have a blast on this ff. Character design has nothing unique. Everything is the same hence the 2 syars. World background is fantastic. You can actually feel the weather or condition the crew's in.
Firstly, thank you author for continuing writing this story! I was reluctant at first to pick up this novel when I saw that it wasn’t updated for ages. But with the recent influx of new chapters I started reading it. This is a great novel that takes the classic joining-the-Straw Hats trope but makes it unique, fresh and exciting! Even the MC’s devil fruit powers are new and interesting. Love it and can’t wait for more chapters!!
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WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?!?!??? IT'S BEEN MORE THAN HALF A YEAR!!! CAN'T YOU JUST RELEASE A FEW 100-200 CHAPTERS NOW?! PLEASE?! NOT ALL OF US ARE RICH ENOUGH TO PAY FOR YOUR PATREON MANN!!! JUST UPDATE ALREADY
That's why I don't like 1 star. I'm not going to explain the reasons.!. .!..!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!.
It really great One piece fanfiction!! I love It!!! It have a very great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like how MC/Liam use his knowledge very great.. He make Strawhats Pirates more stronger.. And his power is also so broken.. Especially he can bet to back to health as soon as possible (bet vitality), and also can steal other people devil fruit.. Love it.. Love it so much your story author sama.. Keep up the great work :D
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Please update, your story is great 👍 please continue your story don't dropped this story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great story! Glad it's not your typical OP from the start MC. He starts off really weak but is progressing at a nice pace. Also cool that he's encouraged the rest of the crew to train more too. Particularly Nami and Usopp. They've got so much untapped potential that is literally waiting to burst out. Only thing that I've found a bit iffy, and they aren't even too big, is 1. Why's bro keep calling Luffy captain? Like, I get he's your captain, but he's also your friend. Call him Luffy in normal situations, but call him captain in serious ones. And 2. I feel he's giving out too much information. I know he's set up a background where it would make sense, but that background is a pretty weak one which could be easily popped, and doesn't explain why he's knows so much about certain individuals. Some things I suggest for your story, which aren't really too involved with your character as I like him. 1. Add onto his "backstory". 2. For close combat, when you reach Skypeia, have Usopp implement dials into his Hammer for close range. Maybe also have him get those bouncy boots from the Shandians (Can't remember too well, it's been quite a while). 3. Make them spar and learn off each other. By now I feel at least Robin, Franky, and Brook should've unlocked some basic haki. We've got 4 masters of it on board the ship now, there aren't much excuses. It would be cool if SH were like a Rocks second coming, although on a much smaller scale. Where all the Strawhats in their prime are atleast 3rd Commander level. And last 4. Please add in some wholesome canon chapters. Where it's not all about plot, and it's just the crew getting up to their same old shenanigans. That's all from me, sorry for the word vomit. Just wanted to get across to you how good your story is and possible things to consider. I know you've already gotten a lot of comments on it, and you've already responded, but I just wanted to emphasize how much you can't drop. Thanks!
After reading a few comments today, it made me realize something. Sorry, but this story is not for you. It doesn't matter whether you read it or not. I don't care if you drop it. All I want to say is that I write this story because I love One Piece. And, I am writing fanfiction. If you don't like the idea then you can easily drop it and clear it from your library. But those who like it should stay whether it is the best moment of the story or the worst moment of the story. Because every moment matters. So, I am going to delete any kind of review if you just give it based on your feelings rather than understanding the story. Because I don't believe that if you understand the story or are willing to wait for more to understand it better then you wouldn't remove a star unless it is for writing quality. I can assure you that.
it start pretty good but slowly become a classic Chinese protagonist ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Did you stop uploading new chepter if not when will get new chapters? Btw its really good fanfic really love it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
okey [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the devil fruit ability made me drop this. other than that, it's okay... I think. so much potential but wasted on a devil fruit that... not going to spoil it.
I've had this saved since the day it came into existence, and I never bothered to read it until there were more chapters until I forgot about it and then found it like 25 minutes ago, and that whole time I've been reading the reviews, it's bumbed me out, I was exited to enjoy another one piece ff, now I'm just going to read it and see if I can enjoy it, but, sadly, I'm extremely picky about what I read.
the fanfic is nice and the development is subtle and you start liking it, if you created a new world with a similar story line it would give you originality
It start out great a normal isekai guy without cheats except for the usual knowledge, that want to follow the story that will do anything to catch up to the Strawhats and so that he will not left behind. but then the author made a devil fruit that is suitable to the mc's reckless fighting style but choose to feed it to merry but its still acceptable since people love merry so I push through but then he made the second devil fruit stupid gambling which hated by every reader some dropped out but some choose to continue myself included. but what made me dropped this shit is when at ch 70-71 he goes full spoiler drop to the crew about luffy's devil fruit, shanks plan theory, some stupid worlds secret thats when I decided to dropped out, as you said that this novel is not for me but have some balls about reviews that is not pleasant to your eyes I heard that authors deleting 3 and below review, I dont care if this gets deleted as long as I got to say my opinion and review of this novel
Reveal Spoiler Eu gostei da história e do personagem principal não estando por que estão falando mal obs (duvido que muitos deles conseguiriam fazer uma fic com tão boa quanto ) espero que não abandone a fic
I love the main character and his dynamic with the captain—it adds real depth to the story. His power is refreshingly unique compared to typical fanfics, making every twist even more engaging. The race against time raises the stakes, and I can't wait to see how his journey unfolds, shaping his loved ones and leaving a lasting impact on the world.
Sinceramente me pareció mas horrible que gracioso este fanfic, no quiero ofender pero en serio lo de "Débil" a "Fuerte" ahí se les paso la mano que el mc prácticamente rogara unirse a luffy me pareció patético y lo peor es que cuando golpea a alguien se lastima la mano....es en serio como a alguien le puede gustar esto? y dejemos de lado la fruta de basura que le dieron al MC porque se haría largo esto. Sinceramente para mi los mejores fanfic de One Piece son los que los MC nunca comen un fruta del diablo
I usually don't give low ratings, but sadly, this fanfic dropped quality too much. As someone who read until 175 onwards, the story quality dropped!!! Luffy's character is changed. Liam's character changes in the early chapters. He said he would love only one woman with all his heart, and suddenly, in chapter 175, Robin calls him a pervert. And we get to know Liam's hitting on Robin and Vivi, and he's a trash piece?? And worse of all is he getting erased ?? Throughout the story from chapter 5, we are continuously reminded that Liam is vice-captain, but he keeps acting like a captain. I know Luffy is dumb but he's not that dumb that he needs a vice-captain to take every decision and speak on his behalf. Tho the only redeeming point about this story is the writing quality which is 5/5. Thank you to the writer for this great masterpiece I had this book in my library for a long time, and I had fun reading Liam's journey. I enjoyed this book till the Kuzan fight. Wish you the best in your Future endeavor. Happy Writing
Tha last chp is Bad ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ...............
5/3/1/3/5 Will keep it short. Writing quality is really good on this one. Author actually understands the one piece world amd it's characters. Update schedule is a bit random. He goes on long hiatus then randomly comes back and stays consistent till his next hiatus. Story development is good to. The changes done throughout the story, subtle or directly is done right. Except the romance parts (which I hate with my life) were a bit force. But if you can ignore it you'll have a blast on this ff. Character design has nothing unique. Everything is the same hence the 2 syars. World background is fantastic. You can actually feel the weather or condition the crew's in.
Firstly, thank you author for continuing writing this story! I was reluctant at first to pick up this novel when I saw that it wasn’t updated for ages. But with the recent influx of new chapters I started reading it. This is a great novel that takes the classic joining-the-Straw Hats trope but makes it unique, fresh and exciting! Even the MC’s devil fruit powers are new and interesting. Love it and can’t wait for more chapters!!
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WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?!?!??? IT'S BEEN MORE THAN HALF A YEAR!!! CAN'T YOU JUST RELEASE A FEW 100-200 CHAPTERS NOW?! PLEASE?! NOT ALL OF US ARE RICH ENOUGH TO PAY FOR YOUR PATREON MANN!!! JUST UPDATE ALREADY
That's why I don't like 1 star. I'm not going to explain the reasons.!. .!..!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!. .!.
It really great One piece fanfiction!! I love It!!! It have a very great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like how MC/Liam use his knowledge very great.. He make Strawhats Pirates more stronger.. And his power is also so broken.. Especially he can bet to back to health as soon as possible (bet vitality), and also can steal other people devil fruit.. Love it.. Love it so much your story author sama.. Keep up the great work :D
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Please update, your story is great 👍 please continue your story don't dropped this story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great story! Glad it's not your typical OP from the start MC. He starts off really weak but is progressing at a nice pace. Also cool that he's encouraged the rest of the crew to train more too. Particularly Nami and Usopp. They've got so much untapped potential that is literally waiting to burst out. Only thing that I've found a bit iffy, and they aren't even too big, is 1. Why's bro keep calling Luffy captain? Like, I get he's your captain, but he's also your friend. Call him Luffy in normal situations, but call him captain in serious ones. And 2. I feel he's giving out too much information. I know he's set up a background where it would make sense, but that background is a pretty weak one which could be easily popped, and doesn't explain why he's knows so much about certain individuals. Some things I suggest for your story, which aren't really too involved with your character as I like him. 1. Add onto his "backstory". 2. For close combat, when you reach Skypeia, have Usopp implement dials into his Hammer for close range. Maybe also have him get those bouncy boots from the Shandians (Can't remember too well, it's been quite a while). 3. Make them spar and learn off each other. By now I feel at least Robin, Franky, and Brook should've unlocked some basic haki. We've got 4 masters of it on board the ship now, there aren't much excuses. It would be cool if SH were like a Rocks second coming, although on a much smaller scale. Where all the Strawhats in their prime are atleast 3rd Commander level. And last 4. Please add in some wholesome canon chapters. Where it's not all about plot, and it's just the crew getting up to their same old shenanigans. That's all from me, sorry for the word vomit. Just wanted to get across to you how good your story is and possible things to consider. I know you've already gotten a lot of comments on it, and you've already responded, but I just wanted to emphasize how much you can't drop. Thanks!