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Has it ups, to some extent nice story, only problems are forced plots of Harry with Dumbledore were harry acts, in way that it generates plot that its infuriating how dumb it is
Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! ! Jiraiya swimming in the sea of dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp
this harry isnt a battle hardened veteran despite killing death eaters for two years. the only harry youll see is a scared little boy with ptsd.
Dont waste your time on this fic. This Harry is a complete idiot and the author just gives him hardcore ptsd randomly and then it just gets ignored again. He really attacked an Auror for no reason and then thinks he will be fine? Nah this story is awful.
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Why does Harry seem like such a d— in this story? Not saying it’s a bad thing just curious I guess Sorry for wasting anybodies time reading this and I hope you have a great rest of your day or night.
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Good Quality Fic. Excited to see more and more... I can see Author has quite some experience under his hands 😁. Please keep it up. Thanks for your Efforts.
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Good. At least the loans will be paid and he can make money from other things. maybe loot and sell items from room of requirements. ...........
Reveal Spoiler I am liking it so far. let's see how it goes. ................................................................................................................................................................................
good stuff. I'm exited to see where this series goes. I recommend this to anyone who's interested in a unique take on a harry potter fanfiction.
The concept is cool, but this Harry is too random and dislikable. Nothing he does makes sense. It's illogical. It's like a mix between a teen drama series and summer child misconceptions of what traumatic experiences, and ptsd are like.
Has it ups, to some extent nice story, only problems are forced plots of Harry with Dumbledore were harry acts, in way that it generates plot that its infuriating how dumb it is
Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! ! Jiraiya swimming in the sea of dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp
this harry isnt a battle hardened veteran despite killing death eaters for two years. the only harry youll see is a scared little boy with ptsd.
Dont waste your time on this fic. This Harry is a complete idiot and the author just gives him hardcore ptsd randomly and then it just gets ignored again. He really attacked an Auror for no reason and then thinks he will be fine? Nah this story is awful.
Reveal Spoiler Why does Harry seem like such a d— in this story? Not saying it’s a bad thing just curious I guess Sorry for wasting anybodies time reading this and I hope you have a great rest of your day or night.
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Reveal Spoiler Good Quality Fic. Excited to see more and more... I can see Author has quite some experience under his hands 😁. Please keep it up. Thanks for your Efforts.
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Good. At least the loans will be paid and he can make money from other things. maybe loot and sell items from room of requirements. ...........
Reveal Spoiler I am liking it so far. let's see how it goes. ................................................................................................................................................................................
good stuff. I'm exited to see where this series goes. I recommend this to anyone who's interested in a unique take on a harry potter fanfiction.
The concept is cool, but this Harry is too random and dislikable. Nothing he does makes sense. It's illogical. It's like a mix between a teen drama series and summer child misconceptions of what traumatic experiences, and ptsd are like.