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Shadowyin65

This book character brings about a whole new journey to a semi-relatable call for adventurer that's well known in the setting of this fiction world. Well, I'm going back to enjoying this adventure.

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Don_Esteban

Started off good enough but the encounters with characters from one piece feel incredibly forced, just like her joining the strawhats. Her being part of the crew just makes the normal one piece story boring because there is barely any real struggle, except for the reader having to endure the annoying and braty nature of the MC. You can skip chapters without missing much, thats's always a sign for me that the story needs some more fine tuning. I would not recommend this fanfic unless you have nothing else of good quality to read, the chapters are long and a chunk of it is boring.

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BrandPatriarch

5/5 no dramaㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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Mr_no
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it is quite enjoyable read it's managed to keep my interest for nearly 400 chapters and still counting

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Tewingus

Great book, definitely recommend this one

3mth
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Lawson26

Unorginaality at its finest. Brain dead MC that has the appearance of a 12 year old boy with a 🐱. Furthermore it’s a Strawhat tag along done in the worse way possible. Follows Luffy around making next to no changes & supposed 617 year old sword smith that WONT KILL ANYONE because Luffy said no. Even when she breaks apart from Luffy and is on her on she refuses to kill EVIL people even after telling Robin that evil cultivators need to be killed… All in all I true waste of time and one of the most unoriginal fanfics I’ve ever had the misfortune of reading.

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Orchamus

Excellent job, so rare to find a good Cultivation cross with an anime, but this not only managed it but does so at LENGTH! Could use some similar stories, maybe Danmachi or Eminence in Shadow or even MHA from when Quirks came about.

4mth
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WackySpace

For once its not a self insert that knows the story by heart and tries to change everything. It's an amazing story and interesting character, can't wait to finish it.

4mth
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Tewingus

This story is pretty much flawless, you get exactly what you clicked for and more. The story is well written, very funny using both the typical xianxia humor sparsely and more straightforward gags. Cherry is a very lovable and well structured mc, the OCs actually bring something to the story too which is somewhat rare. A read I fully recommend

4mth
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Clown_Of_God

i read up to the part that says cultivator then i dropped it...........................................................................................

6mth
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P0lyps
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This is the best book I’ve ever read For anyone reading this review this a great book don’t pass on it even if you don’t know one piece at all.

8mth
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itsmeyukiedcqii

One of the best one piece fanfiction that the lead was a female. Instead of the usual men oriented fanfiction in this novel world called earth. 🙌🤸👑

9mth
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Joshp447

Really awesome story it’s been one of my favorites.

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xxTAC3000xx

The perfect Fanfic for a one piece fan that I was looking for.

10mth
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Demon_Of_Lust

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍)))))))))))))))))))))))))):

11mth
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Gabriel_Ibold

This is a story that I actually get excited for updates !!!

1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax

I just wish there were lemons, but that's just me nitpicking since it's a way of showing their love and whatnot. Also, it's interesting how some authors write those scenes, hehe. Still, it's a great story so far, and it makes you wish it was neverending.

1yr
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WickedSage

Really dope writing and engeniusly fun adventure. SPACE PIRATES CULTIVATION ROMANTIC REALISM SEXY HAPPINESS CLEVER USE OF ABILITIES BEAUTIFUL HORIZON

1yr
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Haku_Ouroboros

Es como leer el manga de one piece con 1 personaje de fondo más el cual no hace mucho o lo hace cuando todo está resuelto y no tiene ningún peso en la historia.

1yr
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ghostjk

ngl I thought this this was holy joker for a second cus of the one piece and immortality😅

1yr
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Reiya9

Great story until she joined the straw hats then it went downhill

1yr
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Drako_0692

Typical Chinese tale. These work when the world is original since the norm is to be strong since someone will want to humiliate you but when it is a predetermined world they must adapt to the new world and not follow the Chinese standard

1yr
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Hiser1

Banger. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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Hasan_Shopnil

Thanks for the New One Piece Fanfic.I love It.Please add all One Piece Anime,Manga,Fillers,Movies,Games etc. plot in this fanfic and Please let Cherry observe all other characters such as Brook,Sanji,Zoro,Mihawk,Shanks,Dragon,Garp,Katakuri,Kaido,Yamato,Vista and learn various techniques.

1yr
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KALIISTHEBEST

A surprisingly good one piece fanfic doesn’ follow the strawhats too closely that you feel your reading a rewrite of everything and it has a good pacing to it would recommend giving it a try

1yr
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timeawayfromstress

mc has no brain. He has lived so many years, he has become stronger, but he does not have a brain. Mc has the brain of the characters in mtl novels. as someone who has never fought, as someone who has practiced xulian in his previous life and gained superior powers. mc does not have a brain, it can be called no brain. There is no logic in the novel. The novel is garbage The author tried to make his novel look like Naruto Dream to Immortaly.

1yr
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Doxombre

Not bad really. You could feel that this book was written as a fanfic considering the semi-ridiculous situations she finds herself in and attitude she expresses, though that can be excused as the Mc's personality. I think the characters OOC a bit but not to the point you don't recognize them. The Mc's background in One Piece is interesting and how she tackles each situation based on her skills and connections is pretty fun to read about. However, theres this feeling of the MC being held back, considering she's sticking with the crew. But it's also understandable with the relationship she has with one of them. Overall, I'd like to see more. Maybe character development, changes in plot— something interesting.

1yr
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DaddyDavo

In my opinion this started off good but then the mc got forced to join the straw hats by ‘fate’ then it became like every other one piece ff in existence.

1yr
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Oryzen

Well everyone is rating it a 5 star even tho it has some problems. So imma just join them [img=recommend]

1yr
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Eldesaparecido

Vale creo que la historia se está tomando a si misma enserio y eso está muy bien pero tienes que recordar que esto es one piece es un mundo bastante loco y por eso es tan popular todo lo demás muy bien. además patas .

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1yr
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Shadowyin65

This book character brings about a whole new journey to a semi-relatable call for adventurer that's well known in the setting of this fiction world. Well, I'm going back to enjoying this adventure.

1mth
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Don_Esteban

Started off good enough but the encounters with characters from one piece feel incredibly forced, just like her joining the strawhats. Her being part of the crew just makes the normal one piece story boring because there is barely any real struggle, except for the reader having to endure the annoying and braty nature of the MC. You can skip chapters without missing much, thats's always a sign for me that the story needs some more fine tuning. I would not recommend this fanfic unless you have nothing else of good quality to read, the chapters are long and a chunk of it is boring.

1mth
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BrandPatriarch

5/5 no dramaㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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Mr_no
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it is quite enjoyable read it's managed to keep my interest for nearly 400 chapters and still counting

3mth
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Tewingus

Great book, definitely recommend this one

3mth
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Lawson26

Unorginaality at its finest. Brain dead MC that has the appearance of a 12 year old boy with a 🐱. Furthermore it’s a Strawhat tag along done in the worse way possible. Follows Luffy around making next to no changes & supposed 617 year old sword smith that WONT KILL ANYONE because Luffy said no. Even when she breaks apart from Luffy and is on her on she refuses to kill EVIL people even after telling Robin that evil cultivators need to be killed… All in all I true waste of time and one of the most unoriginal fanfics I’ve ever had the misfortune of reading.

4mth
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Orchamus

Excellent job, so rare to find a good Cultivation cross with an anime, but this not only managed it but does so at LENGTH! Could use some similar stories, maybe Danmachi or Eminence in Shadow or even MHA from when Quirks came about.

4mth
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WackySpace

For once its not a self insert that knows the story by heart and tries to change everything. It's an amazing story and interesting character, can't wait to finish it.

4mth
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Tewingus

This story is pretty much flawless, you get exactly what you clicked for and more. The story is well written, very funny using both the typical xianxia humor sparsely and more straightforward gags. Cherry is a very lovable and well structured mc, the OCs actually bring something to the story too which is somewhat rare. A read I fully recommend

4mth
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Clown_Of_God

i read up to the part that says cultivator then i dropped it...........................................................................................

6mth
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P0lyps
LV 14 Badge

This is the best book I’ve ever read For anyone reading this review this a great book don’t pass on it even if you don’t know one piece at all.

8mth
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itsmeyukiedcqii

One of the best one piece fanfiction that the lead was a female. Instead of the usual men oriented fanfiction in this novel world called earth. 🙌🤸👑

9mth
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Joshp447

Really awesome story it’s been one of my favorites.

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10mth
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xxTAC3000xx

The perfect Fanfic for a one piece fan that I was looking for.

10mth
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Demon_Of_Lust

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍)))))))))))))))))))))))))):

11mth
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Gabriel_Ibold

This is a story that I actually get excited for updates !!!

1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax

I just wish there were lemons, but that's just me nitpicking since it's a way of showing their love and whatnot. Also, it's interesting how some authors write those scenes, hehe. Still, it's a great story so far, and it makes you wish it was neverending.

1yr
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WickedSage

Really dope writing and engeniusly fun adventure. SPACE PIRATES CULTIVATION ROMANTIC REALISM SEXY HAPPINESS CLEVER USE OF ABILITIES BEAUTIFUL HORIZON

1yr
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Haku_Ouroboros

Es como leer el manga de one piece con 1 personaje de fondo más el cual no hace mucho o lo hace cuando todo está resuelto y no tiene ningún peso en la historia.

1yr
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ghostjk

ngl I thought this this was holy joker for a second cus of the one piece and immortality😅

1yr
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Reiya9

Great story until she joined the straw hats then it went downhill

1yr
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Drako_0692

Typical Chinese tale. These work when the world is original since the norm is to be strong since someone will want to humiliate you but when it is a predetermined world they must adapt to the new world and not follow the Chinese standard

1yr
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Hiser1

Banger. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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Hasan_Shopnil

Thanks for the New One Piece Fanfic.I love It.Please add all One Piece Anime,Manga,Fillers,Movies,Games etc. plot in this fanfic and Please let Cherry observe all other characters such as Brook,Sanji,Zoro,Mihawk,Shanks,Dragon,Garp,Katakuri,Kaido,Yamato,Vista and learn various techniques.

1yr
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KALIISTHEBEST

A surprisingly good one piece fanfic doesn’ follow the strawhats too closely that you feel your reading a rewrite of everything and it has a good pacing to it would recommend giving it a try

1yr
View 0 Replies
timeawayfromstress

mc has no brain. He has lived so many years, he has become stronger, but he does not have a brain. Mc has the brain of the characters in mtl novels. as someone who has never fought, as someone who has practiced xulian in his previous life and gained superior powers. mc does not have a brain, it can be called no brain. There is no logic in the novel. The novel is garbage The author tried to make his novel look like Naruto Dream to Immortaly.

1yr
View 4 Replies
Doxombre

Not bad really. You could feel that this book was written as a fanfic considering the semi-ridiculous situations she finds herself in and attitude she expresses, though that can be excused as the Mc's personality. I think the characters OOC a bit but not to the point you don't recognize them. The Mc's background in One Piece is interesting and how she tackles each situation based on her skills and connections is pretty fun to read about. However, theres this feeling of the MC being held back, considering she's sticking with the crew. But it's also understandable with the relationship she has with one of them. Overall, I'd like to see more. Maybe character development, changes in plot— something interesting.

1yr
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DaddyDavo

In my opinion this started off good but then the mc got forced to join the straw hats by ‘fate’ then it became like every other one piece ff in existence.

1yr
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Oryzen

Well everyone is rating it a 5 star even tho it has some problems. So imma just join them [img=recommend]

1yr
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Eldesaparecido

Vale creo que la historia se está tomando a si misma enserio y eso está muy bien pero tienes que recordar que esto es one piece es un mundo bastante loco y por eso es tan popular todo lo demás muy bien. además patas .

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1yr
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