Reviews of Script Writing System In Modern Family by CultivatorReader - Webnovel

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Hit_Me_Truck_kun

Useless mc, doesn't understand personal space and is just trying too hard. can't read anymore or I might just break my phone.😩

1mth
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Gicon_Maloto

I like the story it just no more update at webnovel after 2 years, does author hate this platform?, but so far I love this work I need more updates on this story very enjoyable and a good past time when it's too boring in IRL, hope the author to revive this workπŸ™

6mth
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E_en_Ja_ger0P

I got hook up by the modern family fanfic.....so far this book entertain me the most....i hope the author will continue to write the story as this was one of the best modern family fanfic i ever read

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11mth
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Jacob_LIBBERT

are you drooping this work \ .

1yr
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David_Salinas_9358

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1yr
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DadguyDave

Not bad but pacing is a bit wierd. The MC is pretty much dropping a new movie, tv show, book, etc every "week" making it somewhat unrealistic. I get that the script writing is kinda key to the plot, but other than the weekly "episode" with the cast of modern family the MC just keeps "working" on his career... at 13... with no real breaks or character development. So well written, somewhat entertaining (because of Modern Family really) and pretty well thought out, the MC just really doesn't make me want to keep reading after a while

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LastGod

dropped fic MASTER!!!....................

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Raventan

author is ready pass away by car accident RIP................................................................................................................................. ................ ...................

1yr
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Jacob_LIBBERT

where is more of the story I love the story can't wait for more.

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EmphieIsMe

Been a while. But am still waiting... Hopefully, you still update

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Jacob_LIBBERT

love it can wait for more ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

2yr
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The_Chosen_Man

Characters conversing is written incredibly dull. None of the characters feel real to their sitcom. Actually, they don’t even feel remotely human because none of the characters react when the MC does something weird. I will say that the way they are describing Hollywood feels pretty real, but that’s about it.

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Anime_fan1234

The only problem with this story is that it needs more chapters

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VitalStrats

I will say, the amount of times you say "By the way" gets a little annoying, you've said that so many times 10 chapters. You used by the way like 6 times in 1 chapter

2yr
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Jausl47

It started meh then continue getting worse I wanted to give it chance to see if it gets better but read it till chapter 46 and god oh god if it gets worse. The mc character doesn't have any development he is a cameo in all the episodes not inputting anything relevant and if he gets involved somehow he does it in the cringiest way possible. Coherence is something thrown out of the window from the start. I don't why to call it a modern family ff when all he does is do nothing get points to buy some scripts and do negotiations that's it. If you change the characters of MF and put some generic characters the story would go on like nothing and this shouldn't be the case for a ff.

2yr
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storyteller101

are you still posting this or is it dropped

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Swayam_Redla

love your work this is one of the best modern family ff . Hope you will continue this πŸ˜€

2yr
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AzizahPutri

Decent but please use Harem tag if you wrote harem fanfic a lot of people don't like it _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

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LukeMorningStar

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Humbuub

I love modern family, but it's also the reason why I dislike this ff. The OG is just so well-written, the characters are like a well oiled cog machine, and everytime the MC talks it's like throwing a wrench of cringiness all over it. the system is also broken, a day with the characters is enough to buy a script at the quality of Haunting of Hill House. I just don't appreciate such huge payoff by just being a bystander.

2yr
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OTAKU69_

Never watched modern family but I am enjoying this story would definitely recommend reading keep up the good work author βœοΈπŸ‘πŸ»

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DetachedDreamer

I was attracted to the story because I love the script system genre at the moment. to be honest I've never watched modern family, well that is til now. You should be paid for your portrayal of the shows humor because it was enough for me to search hulu and watch it. I love the MC and pairing. I like the scripts and books chosen so far. honestly nothing negative worth noting that experience alone won't resolve. I guess maybe I can't wait to see the releases and his interaction with fame and the actually nitty gritty of movie making and the business. but im only half way thru an unfinished story so that may well come down the line when he's older. Great story, keep it up.

2yr
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FinnsRevenge

Author was harassing us poor discord members for reviews without posting a chapter, so mean. The writing could be better, it's ironically written in a script style which I usually drop instantly, however, it's funny. The story is absolutely hilarious and I love it, I have laughed from almost every chapter. That right there is important for a fanfic based off of a comedy TV show.

2yr
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isekaihater

could be better if you pair MC with a cuter girl 😀

2yr
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Damnboyrocks

Nice book and original content. One of the first modern family ff and i like it too.

2yr
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DarthMairon

EXELLENT story with a fun story and side plots that compliment the OG Modern Family major plot. I love how Ryan manages to keep his interactions with the family even. The author has an EXELLENT writing pace and gives very good chapters very often, truly an EXELLENT work overall and a worthwhile read. On an unrelated but impressive note this did start several other Modern Family Fics so this is, in a way the father of that particular theme.

2yr
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YassineDSuLtAn

Thank you for this new fanfic genre you started anew series of fanfic and you deserve 5 stars in all except updating stability [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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BardLoen

Haven't watched a single episode of modern family. I only know of Phil from youtube clips a great dude and this is a great story keep it up.

2yr
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Daoist0MaTY9

I need more uploads every week. such a good story but always feel I in the cliffhanger

2yr
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Hit_Me_Truck_kun

Useless mc, doesn't understand personal space and is just trying too hard. can't read anymore or I might just break my phone.😩

1mth
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Gicon_Maloto

I like the story it just no more update at webnovel after 2 years, does author hate this platform?, but so far I love this work I need more updates on this story very enjoyable and a good past time when it's too boring in IRL, hope the author to revive this workπŸ™

6mth
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E_en_Ja_ger0P

I got hook up by the modern family fanfic.....so far this book entertain me the most....i hope the author will continue to write the story as this was one of the best modern family fanfic i ever read

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11mth
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Jacob_LIBBERT

are you drooping this work \ .

1yr
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David_Salinas_9358

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1yr
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DadguyDave

Not bad but pacing is a bit wierd. The MC is pretty much dropping a new movie, tv show, book, etc every "week" making it somewhat unrealistic. I get that the script writing is kinda key to the plot, but other than the weekly "episode" with the cast of modern family the MC just keeps "working" on his career... at 13... with no real breaks or character development. So well written, somewhat entertaining (because of Modern Family really) and pretty well thought out, the MC just really doesn't make me want to keep reading after a while

1yr
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LastGod

dropped fic MASTER!!!....................

1yr
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Raventan

author is ready pass away by car accident RIP................................................................................................................................. ................ ...................

1yr
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Jacob_LIBBERT

where is more of the story I love the story can't wait for more.

1yr
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EmphieIsMe

Been a while. But am still waiting... Hopefully, you still update

2yr
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Jacob_LIBBERT

love it can wait for more ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

2yr
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The_Chosen_Man

Characters conversing is written incredibly dull. None of the characters feel real to their sitcom. Actually, they don’t even feel remotely human because none of the characters react when the MC does something weird. I will say that the way they are describing Hollywood feels pretty real, but that’s about it.

2yr
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Anime_fan1234

The only problem with this story is that it needs more chapters

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VitalStrats

I will say, the amount of times you say "By the way" gets a little annoying, you've said that so many times 10 chapters. You used by the way like 6 times in 1 chapter

2yr
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Jausl47

It started meh then continue getting worse I wanted to give it chance to see if it gets better but read it till chapter 46 and god oh god if it gets worse. The mc character doesn't have any development he is a cameo in all the episodes not inputting anything relevant and if he gets involved somehow he does it in the cringiest way possible. Coherence is something thrown out of the window from the start. I don't why to call it a modern family ff when all he does is do nothing get points to buy some scripts and do negotiations that's it. If you change the characters of MF and put some generic characters the story would go on like nothing and this shouldn't be the case for a ff.

2yr
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storyteller101

are you still posting this or is it dropped

2yr
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Swayam_Redla

love your work this is one of the best modern family ff . Hope you will continue this πŸ˜€

2yr
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AzizahPutri

Decent but please use Harem tag if you wrote harem fanfic a lot of people don't like it _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

2yr
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LukeMorningStar

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Humbuub

I love modern family, but it's also the reason why I dislike this ff. The OG is just so well-written, the characters are like a well oiled cog machine, and everytime the MC talks it's like throwing a wrench of cringiness all over it. the system is also broken, a day with the characters is enough to buy a script at the quality of Haunting of Hill House. I just don't appreciate such huge payoff by just being a bystander.

2yr
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OTAKU69_

Never watched modern family but I am enjoying this story would definitely recommend reading keep up the good work author βœοΈπŸ‘πŸ»

2yr
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DetachedDreamer

I was attracted to the story because I love the script system genre at the moment. to be honest I've never watched modern family, well that is til now. You should be paid for your portrayal of the shows humor because it was enough for me to search hulu and watch it. I love the MC and pairing. I like the scripts and books chosen so far. honestly nothing negative worth noting that experience alone won't resolve. I guess maybe I can't wait to see the releases and his interaction with fame and the actually nitty gritty of movie making and the business. but im only half way thru an unfinished story so that may well come down the line when he's older. Great story, keep it up.

2yr
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FinnsRevenge

Author was harassing us poor discord members for reviews without posting a chapter, so mean. The writing could be better, it's ironically written in a script style which I usually drop instantly, however, it's funny. The story is absolutely hilarious and I love it, I have laughed from almost every chapter. That right there is important for a fanfic based off of a comedy TV show.

2yr
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isekaihater

could be better if you pair MC with a cuter girl 😀

2yr
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Damnboyrocks

Nice book and original content. One of the first modern family ff and i like it too.

2yr
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DarthMairon

EXELLENT story with a fun story and side plots that compliment the OG Modern Family major plot. I love how Ryan manages to keep his interactions with the family even. The author has an EXELLENT writing pace and gives very good chapters very often, truly an EXELLENT work overall and a worthwhile read. On an unrelated but impressive note this did start several other Modern Family Fics so this is, in a way the father of that particular theme.

2yr
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YassineDSuLtAn

Thank you for this new fanfic genre you started anew series of fanfic and you deserve 5 stars in all except updating stability [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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BardLoen

Haven't watched a single episode of modern family. I only know of Phil from youtube clips a great dude and this is a great story keep it up.

2yr
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Daoist0MaTY9

I need more uploads every week. such a good story but always feel I in the cliffhanger

2yr
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