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Mc has no motive to do anything, making it hard to invest in the story or conflict. Mc would rather be sleeping. systems with personalities are double-edged swords. If done right, it can enhance if wrong it can hurt,but the system can't be the only driving force of the Mc growth.
Japanese beta shota Protagonist brain, he takes punches and kicks and blows to his body like it is normal and correct occurrence and maybe pleasure. Absolutely no control of his emotions and...I am speechless. I got angered for no reason reading the first chapters. What is unique or not so used is that, this is based in Nigeria(Africa)👍. You can imagine there will be fights in every sentence. The grammar and Punctuation are perfect(haven't been able to find any mistakes).
I unique concept to begin with.. also an MC who loves sleeping more than his life! Not the usual masculine, overly handsome cold ML, but some every male... thats a great beginning... his expressions and feelings for the new world are on point! Great work author🤗❤
Here is the Author's biased review. At first I wanted to drop this book, since there was a lot of rejection due to the theme and setting of the book. It's a rated 18, it's harem. You know what, I'm just gonna push it and see where it goes. Hopefully with the support of readers, I can see this to the end.
1 Review!!!??? let me fix that alo your idea is rare Almost unique it intrigues me and seems interesting therefore i will read this with fairness
I like the way you wrote when the MC confused between die or life. Every chapters why your MC is unique hahaha. I cannot stop laughing especially when he entered the New Wold.So far the plot is interesting, especially about the MC lol[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Excellent start-up. Especially the setup being outside The West and East. This is reality merging with fantasy gradually, with like 4 mixing systems. Nice.
Mc has no motive to do anything, making it hard to invest in the story or conflict. Mc would rather be sleeping. systems with personalities are double-edged swords. If done right, it can enhance if wrong it can hurt,but the system can't be the only driving force of the Mc growth.
Japanese beta shota Protagonist brain, he takes punches and kicks and blows to his body like it is normal and correct occurrence and maybe pleasure. Absolutely no control of his emotions and...I am speechless. I got angered for no reason reading the first chapters. What is unique or not so used is that, this is based in Nigeria(Africa)👍. You can imagine there will be fights in every sentence. The grammar and Punctuation are perfect(haven't been able to find any mistakes).
I unique concept to begin with.. also an MC who loves sleeping more than his life! Not the usual masculine, overly handsome cold ML, but some every male... thats a great beginning... his expressions and feelings for the new world are on point! Great work author🤗❤
Here is the Author's biased review. At first I wanted to drop this book, since there was a lot of rejection due to the theme and setting of the book. It's a rated 18, it's harem. You know what, I'm just gonna push it and see where it goes. Hopefully with the support of readers, I can see this to the end.
1 Review!!!??? let me fix that alo your idea is rare Almost unique it intrigues me and seems interesting therefore i will read this with fairness
I like the way you wrote when the MC confused between die or life. Every chapters why your MC is unique hahaha. I cannot stop laughing especially when he entered the New Wold.So far the plot is interesting, especially about the MC lol[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Excellent start-up. Especially the setup being outside The West and East. This is reality merging with fantasy gradually, with like 4 mixing systems. Nice.