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Well, where do I start? it's simply amazing! i read the first few chapters and i couldn't put it down. To me, a story that hooks you in from chapter 1 is worth all the time you can give it.
Author man, wish you all the best in this rewrite but sincerely I prefer the other storyline. Tips to the other one.
So, this novel is under serious editing and rewriting. A new batch of chapters will be uploaded starting from this Friday. I sincerely hope you stick around to read the new ones. Thanks.
This is a good system book. It has an interesting concept, I'm tempted to ruin it for everyone but I will control myself so you lot can enjoy it as well.
From the Synopsis, everyone could say that the book is very intriguing and must have interesting contents. Love your book author😍🤩 For that reason, I highly recommend this book
I don't what you have edited and not... but I see there is no more requirements to rewrite the first seven chapters. It simply keeps people hooked and have suspense, thing I liked the most is that the gaming dump wasn't included in first few chapters. Like it's annoying but your story is vivid and full of emotions. I have a lot to learn...keep up!
Well, where do I start? it's simply amazing! i read the first few chapters and i couldn't put it down. To me, a story that hooks you in from chapter 1 is worth all the time you can give it.
Author man, wish you all the best in this rewrite but sincerely I prefer the other storyline. Tips to the other one.
So, this novel is under serious editing and rewriting. A new batch of chapters will be uploaded starting from this Friday. I sincerely hope you stick around to read the new ones. Thanks.
This is a good system book. It has an interesting concept, I'm tempted to ruin it for everyone but I will control myself so you lot can enjoy it as well.
From the Synopsis, everyone could say that the book is very intriguing and must have interesting contents. Love your book author😍🤩 For that reason, I highly recommend this book
I don't what you have edited and not... but I see there is no more requirements to rewrite the first seven chapters. It simply keeps people hooked and have suspense, thing I liked the most is that the gaming dump wasn't included in first few chapters. Like it's annoying but your story is vivid and full of emotions. I have a lot to learn...keep up!