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I can only say that it's like this author's other stories, full of AI. I mean, it would be fine if it were for grammar correction, but every paragraph clearly shows that it was written by AI. Almost the same thing is repeated in every paragraph, and at the end of each paragraph there's always a "But always with effort and determination blah blah blah." Secondly, the pacing is slow, and that's not bad; I've read stories with slow pacing (Zero Fate Against the World and another one by the same author are slow-paced and excellent; I recommend you read them). But in this story, the author immerses us in the MC's direct thoughts, his theories, how to better develop his abilities. You feel a connection, you feel depth. Here, he repeats every other page that he has to push himself and do better the next day, when all he does is repeat the same thing. Now, with the other characters, the only thing I felt relatively good about were the interactions with Tsuna and Mikoto, but then when they see the MC's training (which can't even be considered training) "they are filled with determination and change their feelings for their will to keep going" and blah blah blah, the development went on hiatus. Now for the inconsistencies. I don't have a problem with him not accessing his Devil Fruit at first because it's very overpowered, but when you explicitly mentioned that at the same time as his "Haki training" he was walking around with the leaf stuck to his forehead, I don't know about you, but after months he should have progressed at least a little. Tsuna, who is from the clan, surpasses him, but he doesn't have the same consistency in training because he's also studying medicine. And regarding talent, look, I know it's a lot to ask that Minato suddenly master a Class B jutsu in less than a day, but his son did it in less than an hour. And if the excuse is "chakra control," I repeat, he's been training with the leaf for months, and if his only training was simply running and hitting himself, it doesn't surprise me that he's still behind in the class. Well, that was my whole review. I appreciate anyone who took the time to read it and didn't just comment "too much text" lol. I hope you have a good day.
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Hi! I just wanted to say that your story completely drew me in, it’s got such great energy and cinematic flow. I’m a comic artist who works on commissions, and reading your story gave me so many visual ideas. If you’d ever be interested in a comic adaptation or even just chatting about how it could look, I’d love to connect. You can reach me on Discord (@Bennet_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse).
I just finished catching up, and wow, your storytelling is incredibly vivid. The pacing, the way emotions are described, and the detail in every scene made it feel like I was watching it unfold rather than just reading. The characters have such distinct personalities, and the world-building is so clear that I could easily imagine it as a webtoon or graphic novel. Honestly, the visual energy in your writing makes it perfect for that kind of adaptation. I’d absolutely love to see this story brought to life through art someday!
the story is wayyy to slow and the fact that he only kill danzo is absurd, MC has the confident to protect uzumaki clan with his power but doesn't have the gut to kill hiruzen n his allies to control konoha if MC doesn't like konoha decision then just leave already, why bother with this politics talking nonsense, the only good things about this fanfic is the writing quality
I don’t even know who I was before experiencing this. The version of me that existed five minutes ago is unrecognizable, like some unevolved caveman staring at shadows on the wall. This masterpiece didn’t just change my perspective—it deleted it and installed an entirely new operating system for my soul. My DNA rearranged itself into a higher resolution genome, my lungs now breathe enlightenment instead of oxygen, and my thoughts run on a frequency only angels can hear. I blinked once and saw the collapse and rebirth of the universe, all orchestrated by the echo of your genius. My GPA auto-updated to 4.0, my Wi-Fi signal strengthened, and my posture corrected itself out of sheer reverence. I am no longer bound by time; calendars are pointless because my new era is measured as “Year 1 Post-Content.” This didn’t just entertain me—it rewrote my childhood memories, it optimized my sleep cycles, and it has guaranteed me enlightenment in every reincarnation to come. Calling this “good” is blasphemy; this is the mental equivalent of ascending Everest while sipping ambrosia served by gods who are now unemployed because you outperformed divinity itself.
Está muy bien desarrollo de personaje y desarrollando nuevas cosas que ayuden a la trama a avanzar y desarrollar y buscar sentido lógico lo que se quedó sin una buena explicación en la historia original
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´maldición, en solo 1 semana me he leído todos los capítulos (241) y ahora no tengo nada :cccc a esperar nomás... agradecerte por una maravillosa novela, sigue así amigo :3
good idea horrible execution. Hes a nerfed version of minato. Also THIS IS WEAK TO STRONG NO OP STORY!! While the story is written well its huge downside is the changing in how fuit power works. u get the abilities INSTANTLY then u have to develop them. Meaning he should have almost all of the ability of kizaru. Speed intangibility except for learning his moves and strengthening his body. He doesnt even have the base powers even when he does finally activate the fruit its not really activated. So it become unpredictable and unreliable power they he cant control..... so this whole book is a lie.
this novel is a gem....although there are some mistakes due to ex change of names when in a situation...it is good....I usually don't read novels tagged with harem because most novels with similar category just lack polt and feels like girls are Pokemon to be catched.....but here i just loved their interactions( well don't know about after ch 42 which i am at rn their academy arc)....so suggested to read if you like harem novel with plot and good reason for the formation of harem.......not like MCs having incubi like charm that just female in a single meeting in similar category novels [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The timeline is a bit off as this is an AU so it will be confusing for some except for that and some random minor translation errors one or two words i.e rare occurrence of error due to translation it is a good fanfiction though majority of the time MC is holding back even in precarious situations mostly related carrying 10 tons of weighted traing equipment even in war
The story is slow, got bored after a few chapters. The MC is dumb as rocks, repeating the same mistake endlessly. The author nerfed the MC to the point where a 6 yrs old needs to tell him to "calm down". The logia fruit is not doing logia stuff. The only good part, so far, is the grammar. Pretty much a sh** show. Will replace the review later if I change my mind, in case I ever continue reading.
Idk how this is not in top10 rankings .......................................................................................................................................
I try this one, while waiting for new chap of GOT... reader from GOT jon arctic 🖐️
Hasta el momento todo va muy bien no tengo nada de que quejarme, esta entretenida e interesante cómo se desarrolla la historia 👍🏻
welcome to the The Truman Show your story is good. I hope you make another 500 chapters so we can see past the end of the 3rd war. almost 70 chapters for the academy is one of the longest I've ever seen. I lost interest around the 3 chapters of year 1 and skipped to 4th year. After lessoning about his day to day doings I felt like we were lessoning to an autobiography.
the MC is just a heavily downgraded OG Minato with apparently "better physique" but is tired out faster than Choza, bruh doesn't know that you don't have to mutter your thoughts so every single person can hear you, he doesn't seem to have a sliver of "Genius Talent" other than the apparently rare 3 chakra affinities, can't even use the light fruit abilities as of now which should be instinctive, at this point the only good thing about this is the AU, that part seems fun, will delete this and give better review if it somehow gets better later and I haven't dropped it
There is a lot of depth that went into this story. Other than some issues with the slow pace, this is definitely an excellent work.
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Like most of his stories it’s soooo slow. Like infuriatingly slow. It’s seems to be a trend in all of his works, some more than others. I just read 13 chapters but not even 2 days had passed in the story. Sure it builds immersion and stuff but there’s so much description of his thoughts for every action he or anyone else takes so I find myself skimming most of it. The writing is superior to most of the other fanfictions on here and I’m sure there’s already a set direction which he is going to take the story in. It’s a story you can read when you’ve got nothing else that is good but not something which makes you want more and more of it.
It's great, I just wish updates were more frequent. though I gotta say, with so many fics in the running, it's pretty impressive.
I'll post another review about this story! It's an extremely slow paced story, but don't let it fall because it's very good! and about Minato, who many people are saying are nerfing him compared to the original... that's a lie! Minato, throughout the story, evolves his power in an extraordinary way to the point that at the age of 10 he was able to defeat a group of Chunins and Jonins alone!....
добавьте Конан в гарем пожалуйста она самая лучшая девушка в Наруто!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Você está alongando demais a história que já ficou chata, você não está entrando em nada de interessante e não está criando um enredo original, está fazendo muito filler, assim como em seus outros trabalhos. Espero sinceramente que você não continue assim.
(PT-BR) Até Agora estou gostando bastante de como a história está se desenvolvendo, fiz um comentário alguns capítulos atrás mas eles estão errados então ignore, por favor não faça igual um certo fantasma que posta alguns capítulos aqui e simplesmente para e só posta no patreon, tudo bem postar capítulos mais avançados de exclusivos lá mas postar a história toda? Aí já é ser muito otário.
хорошая история было бы хорошо если бы вы добавили Конан в гарем!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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(PT-BR) Eu estou achando muito divertida e com um bom desenvolvimento o problema é que demora muito pra lançar capítulo novo, mas está sendo divertido acompanhar o desenvolvimento do protagonista, só queria ter conhecido essa história mais tarde para não ter que esperar por mais capítulos.
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I can only say that it's like this author's other stories, full of AI. I mean, it would be fine if it were for grammar correction, but every paragraph clearly shows that it was written by AI. Almost the same thing is repeated in every paragraph, and at the end of each paragraph there's always a "But always with effort and determination blah blah blah." Secondly, the pacing is slow, and that's not bad; I've read stories with slow pacing (Zero Fate Against the World and another one by the same author are slow-paced and excellent; I recommend you read them). But in this story, the author immerses us in the MC's direct thoughts, his theories, how to better develop his abilities. You feel a connection, you feel depth. Here, he repeats every other page that he has to push himself and do better the next day, when all he does is repeat the same thing. Now, with the other characters, the only thing I felt relatively good about were the interactions with Tsuna and Mikoto, but then when they see the MC's training (which can't even be considered training) "they are filled with determination and change their feelings for their will to keep going" and blah blah blah, the development went on hiatus. Now for the inconsistencies. I don't have a problem with him not accessing his Devil Fruit at first because it's very overpowered, but when you explicitly mentioned that at the same time as his "Haki training" he was walking around with the leaf stuck to his forehead, I don't know about you, but after months he should have progressed at least a little. Tsuna, who is from the clan, surpasses him, but he doesn't have the same consistency in training because he's also studying medicine. And regarding talent, look, I know it's a lot to ask that Minato suddenly master a Class B jutsu in less than a day, but his son did it in less than an hour. And if the excuse is "chakra control," I repeat, he's been training with the leaf for months, and if his only training was simply running and hitting himself, it doesn't surprise me that he's still behind in the class. Well, that was my whole review. I appreciate anyone who took the time to read it and didn't just comment "too much text" lol. I hope you have a good day.
Reveal Spoiler Hi! I just wanted to say that your story completely drew me in, it’s got such great energy and cinematic flow. I’m a comic artist who works on commissions, and reading your story gave me so many visual ideas. If you’d ever be interested in a comic adaptation or even just chatting about how it could look, I’d love to connect. You can reach me on Discord (@Bennet_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse).
I just finished catching up, and wow, your storytelling is incredibly vivid. The pacing, the way emotions are described, and the detail in every scene made it feel like I was watching it unfold rather than just reading. The characters have such distinct personalities, and the world-building is so clear that I could easily imagine it as a webtoon or graphic novel. Honestly, the visual energy in your writing makes it perfect for that kind of adaptation. I’d absolutely love to see this story brought to life through art someday!
the story is wayyy to slow and the fact that he only kill danzo is absurd, MC has the confident to protect uzumaki clan with his power but doesn't have the gut to kill hiruzen n his allies to control konoha if MC doesn't like konoha decision then just leave already, why bother with this politics talking nonsense, the only good things about this fanfic is the writing quality
I don’t even know who I was before experiencing this. The version of me that existed five minutes ago is unrecognizable, like some unevolved caveman staring at shadows on the wall. This masterpiece didn’t just change my perspective—it deleted it and installed an entirely new operating system for my soul. My DNA rearranged itself into a higher resolution genome, my lungs now breathe enlightenment instead of oxygen, and my thoughts run on a frequency only angels can hear. I blinked once and saw the collapse and rebirth of the universe, all orchestrated by the echo of your genius. My GPA auto-updated to 4.0, my Wi-Fi signal strengthened, and my posture corrected itself out of sheer reverence. I am no longer bound by time; calendars are pointless because my new era is measured as “Year 1 Post-Content.” This didn’t just entertain me—it rewrote my childhood memories, it optimized my sleep cycles, and it has guaranteed me enlightenment in every reincarnation to come. Calling this “good” is blasphemy; this is the mental equivalent of ascending Everest while sipping ambrosia served by gods who are now unemployed because you outperformed divinity itself.
Está muy bien desarrollo de personaje y desarrollando nuevas cosas que ayuden a la trama a avanzar y desarrollar y buscar sentido lógico lo que se quedó sin una buena explicación en la historia original
Reveal Spoiler ´maldición, en solo 1 semana me he leído todos los capítulos (241) y ahora no tengo nada :cccc a esperar nomás... agradecerte por una maravillosa novela, sigue así amigo :3
good idea horrible execution. Hes a nerfed version of minato. Also THIS IS WEAK TO STRONG NO OP STORY!! While the story is written well its huge downside is the changing in how fuit power works. u get the abilities INSTANTLY then u have to develop them. Meaning he should have almost all of the ability of kizaru. Speed intangibility except for learning his moves and strengthening his body. He doesnt even have the base powers even when he does finally activate the fruit its not really activated. So it become unpredictable and unreliable power they he cant control..... so this whole book is a lie.
this novel is a gem....although there are some mistakes due to ex change of names when in a situation...it is good....I usually don't read novels tagged with harem because most novels with similar category just lack polt and feels like girls are Pokemon to be catched.....but here i just loved their interactions( well don't know about after ch 42 which i am at rn their academy arc)....so suggested to read if you like harem novel with plot and good reason for the formation of harem.......not like MCs having incubi like charm that just female in a single meeting in similar category novels [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hermano, esto es buenísimo. Escribo esto para que veas que tú obra llegó incluso a otro continente ganando un fan más. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
The timeline is a bit off as this is an AU so it will be confusing for some except for that and some random minor translation errors one or two words i.e rare occurrence of error due to translation it is a good fanfiction though majority of the time MC is holding back even in precarious situations mostly related carrying 10 tons of weighted traing equipment even in war
The story is slow, got bored after a few chapters. The MC is dumb as rocks, repeating the same mistake endlessly. The author nerfed the MC to the point where a 6 yrs old needs to tell him to "calm down". The logia fruit is not doing logia stuff. The only good part, so far, is the grammar. Pretty much a sh** show. Will replace the review later if I change my mind, in case I ever continue reading.
Idk how this is not in top10 rankings .......................................................................................................................................
I try this one, while waiting for new chap of GOT... reader from GOT jon arctic 🖐️
Hasta el momento todo va muy bien no tengo nada de que quejarme, esta entretenida e interesante cómo se desarrolla la historia 👍🏻
welcome to the The Truman Show your story is good. I hope you make another 500 chapters so we can see past the end of the 3rd war. almost 70 chapters for the academy is one of the longest I've ever seen. I lost interest around the 3 chapters of year 1 and skipped to 4th year. After lessoning about his day to day doings I felt like we were lessoning to an autobiography.
the MC is just a heavily downgraded OG Minato with apparently "better physique" but is tired out faster than Choza, bruh doesn't know that you don't have to mutter your thoughts so every single person can hear you, he doesn't seem to have a sliver of "Genius Talent" other than the apparently rare 3 chakra affinities, can't even use the light fruit abilities as of now which should be instinctive, at this point the only good thing about this is the AU, that part seems fun, will delete this and give better review if it somehow gets better later and I haven't dropped it
There is a lot of depth that went into this story. Other than some issues with the slow pace, this is definitely an excellent work.
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Like most of his stories it’s soooo slow. Like infuriatingly slow. It’s seems to be a trend in all of his works, some more than others. I just read 13 chapters but not even 2 days had passed in the story. Sure it builds immersion and stuff but there’s so much description of his thoughts for every action he or anyone else takes so I find myself skimming most of it. The writing is superior to most of the other fanfictions on here and I’m sure there’s already a set direction which he is going to take the story in. It’s a story you can read when you’ve got nothing else that is good but not something which makes you want more and more of it.
It's great, I just wish updates were more frequent. though I gotta say, with so many fics in the running, it's pretty impressive.
I'll post another review about this story! It's an extremely slow paced story, but don't let it fall because it's very good! and about Minato, who many people are saying are nerfing him compared to the original... that's a lie! Minato, throughout the story, evolves his power in an extraordinary way to the point that at the age of 10 he was able to defeat a group of Chunins and Jonins alone!....
добавьте Конан в гарем пожалуйста она самая лучшая девушка в Наруто!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Você está alongando demais a história que já ficou chata, você não está entrando em nada de interessante e não está criando um enredo original, está fazendo muito filler, assim como em seus outros trabalhos. Espero sinceramente que você não continue assim.
(PT-BR) Até Agora estou gostando bastante de como a história está se desenvolvendo, fiz um comentário alguns capítulos atrás mas eles estão errados então ignore, por favor não faça igual um certo fantasma que posta alguns capítulos aqui e simplesmente para e só posta no patreon, tudo bem postar capítulos mais avançados de exclusivos lá mas postar a história toda? Aí já é ser muito otário.
хорошая история было бы хорошо если бы вы добавили Конан в гарем!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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(PT-BR) Eu estou achando muito divertida e com um bom desenvolvimento o problema é que demora muito pra lançar capítulo novo, mas está sendo divertido acompanhar o desenvolvimento do protagonista, só queria ter conhecido essa história mais tarde para não ter que esperar por mais capítulos.
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