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The story's beginning is fantastic. it loses its way in later chapters Ch 750 and on
We really waiting with excitement for next chapter![img=Feeling it]Appreciate for you good writing.[img=Unalived]
Lanjutkan ceritanya, saya bersemangat utk melanjutkan membaca cerita ini. Karena ini mencakup banyak variasi dalam kehidupan Alex sebagai tokoh yang ber kharisma
With someone of that power when He goes god mode you would think he could bend the universe to his whims, someone saw the Marvel MCU and just copied that when they ran out of ideas.
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Has such potential to be a great story but poor writing by the author destroys it. The main character shows no growth doing the same thing over and over. The same scenarios are repeated just with different people. Story development is awful. The characters and situations that come up are totally unrealistic. Such a shame
Garbage, author should be ban from writing, or should I say the AI writes for him. [img=disgusted] to the new readers stop it, you wasting your time.
Je suis arrivé jusqu'à l'épisode 105 je suis toujours attiré par cette histoire d'Alex le billionnaire et son Aimée Debbie ! [img=recommend] Espèrons voir ça dans un film [img=fp]
I was really enjoying the story, As a matter of fact, I still enjoy the story after all the weirdness that took place after episode 773. But the story really took a dump after 773. If you read this review, I advise that you don’t spend another dime on this story on Pocket FM.
weird story pattern It sucks for the reader to read this kind of story where they can't find out what was happening in the story
DONT READ was enjoying at first then became really stupid. waste of time.
Devieron de aberla finalizado cuando podian ubiera sido una gran novela pero aora ya no tiene remedio ya se destruyo por completo que error tan grande aberla segido asta el capitulo 1015 me siento desepcionado y todavia no an encontrado un final la novela continuara eso es el colmo
this book is full of teachings of life and money now I have seen people pay respects to money than humans
I really love everything about the story Alexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Debbieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Ambroseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Sometimes hard to track the Story, after episode 650 don’t know what happens story goes all over…
The story started off well, pretty interesting, but eventually, it turns out that Alex is a complete idiot. He falls for the same tricks by women all the time, he really can't protect Debbie or even an apple. He is so careless with money, the moon maidens give him a credit/debit card with access to $5m in it, he instantly spends all of it at once. he certainly can't be trusted with anything. Regarding the story line, how did it change from a secret billionaire heir to like Goku, after the desert incident in chp700+, then to a story about a millionaire idiot again, after being pushed back to reality from his godhood state. When did he fall in love with Yvonne? She was never his ex, it was Cathy. When did he become an enemy to Lincoln? Riley has 9 lives or what? What happened to Debbie's sister and grandad? What happened to Brians's daughter? What happened to officer Chelsea? What happened to the moon maidens? It totally became a whole different story after going to the desert and from then on . Debbie breaks off with Alex after they get Chris from the bunker, Alex then decides to try get back to Yvonne after picking Debbie, right in Yvonne's face. If he was truly in love with Debbie, he would have gone after her, but no, he lets her leave. The guy is an idiot. He goes to Riley's sister to get Intel from her about Riley, the idiot Alex decides not to answer his phone after telling Chris and Louis to call in case of emergency. If you know you are not going to answer your phone, why have it with you in the first place . Ken Stokes goes from being an important associate of the Ambrose family, he was like president of Morgan Chase kind of guy, to being a TV personnel with no link to the Ambrose, after Alex returns from his godhood reality. Debbie certainly heard and knows that Lincoln was involved with the abduction of Chris, yet she still decides to work for him after he gives her the business card and she calls to get his details . Did she suddenly develop amnesia ? So many things wrong with this story from the desert incident. It totally becomes a different book entirely .
The story has a incoherent and diverging story line. The plot started out pretty good. The mc started with a good base but diverged from the starting point. After being betrayed by his ex girlfriend, he’s disgusted with ppl that are only looking for rich boyfriend. He finally finds a girlfriend that’s nice and loyal. But then why does it seem like he’s on the verge of falling for any pretty girl he sees. And how many times do you need to pretend to be another girl’s boyfriend even tho you are in a relationship. And why are you hang around the girl that you know is trying to break you guys up. Just cause you can’t say no and can’t be bother to pay attention? Is that suppose to be a cool rich guy response? Then you feel guilty for getting kissed by another girl by surprise? But you liked the kissed but felt guilt for your girlfriend. Then felt guily for sharing a plate with another girl when your girlfriend isn’t around. Just a doormat guy pretending to loyal and nice. The world background is convoluted. Everyone is chasing rich ppl and looking down on the poor. Herd mentality. Not very many likable character. I dropped it after he found out his girlfriend was schemed against and missing and he’s was drunk at the time. Then he let the girl who caused it all go just cause she tricked him into believing he slept with her.
Bahinchod ye kaisa story hua sala title instant millionaire hai par sala male lead chutiya ki trah hai jiske pas itna power hoga lund ke liye Aisa karega. Bhai thoda logically bhi soch kar likhta. Sala itna power Hite hue bhi land ki trah gali kha Raha hai bully ho raha hai pura story me laga jaise duniya ke kisi kamjor bande ko power de di gayi ho par use use karna nahi ata hai
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great! but cannot get enough of it. I have not written as much in the very long time
This is a very interesting book but there seem to be two stories in one. Alex the god and then Alex the human. Alex the human is a much more realistic and interesting storyline with all his 'new' friends. What ever happened to the Ambrose family business group?
There are confusing and even conflicting Episodes in the novel. How old does alex Ambrose left to face his poverty training? In some episodes it said he is on his 20's so it could be early, mid or late twenties perhaps but, there are series of episodes said that he is exactly 20 years of age, so,he started his poverty training at the age of 13. Also the character of justin ambrose said brother of alex, later episodes said only half bro and then it said justin ambrose is only cousin of alex, the writer inconsistency was reflected as we readers/audio listeners had followed the story. Also the character of debbie as now ms.marvel is not on point since she was been raised in a rural village, so how come that his father with the family bodyguard always on look out of debbie, i found so conflicting, the writer never stablished well the character of debbie! Then, the plot is boring it cycled always on bullying of how loser alex is in the story. Thus, the story has no main focus it even landed to the spiritual realm that alex seems to be the choosen one. Its good to hve story about poor boy but a millionaire just focus on that but to add other story like spiritual realm or story of other dimension like magical powers something like that is nonsense, thats how the story is and im sad how the writer imagination placed the story dull! There are so many inconsistentcy and complexeties of the story i know some of readerss of insta millionaire has also many observations regarding the plot even it is a series, but....!
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Like every one else I was a super fan of this book until around the 800.like I really like it that is until I realized this was a rip off “rebirth of urban immortal cultivator “ ;( If you like the cultivation stuff just go read that … it makes more since
Alex A. vs Charlie Wade from The Amazing Son-in-Law would be the ultimate battle both be in some poverty training but rich , then get good medical and martial arts skills , both with a girl that then turns out to be from a good family and also become like some supreme gods... overall a good novel just missing bunch of episodes while he was underground cultivating the flower after the missile attack . Just wakes up goes kill riley and story changes
the story was really nice and interesting each chapter would leave u wanting to read more but the last chapters ruined everything, the story's became more fictional, more magic and everything lost meaning in the last chapters I wasn't able to finish the chapters bse they're irritaiting
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Hi, could you update last chapters? You finished at 1014, but it seems to be 200 chapters more:) Overall story is quite good for me, but i am still waiting for the rest
I don't get it but the story and this altered timeline Alex cheated on Debbie and they're not going to get back together I'm just disappointed in this
this is trash..750+ became a different story like it didnt aligned with the title anymore 😂
The story's beginning is fantastic. it loses its way in later chapters Ch 750 and on
We really waiting with excitement for next chapter![img=Feeling it]Appreciate for you good writing.[img=Unalived]
Lanjutkan ceritanya, saya bersemangat utk melanjutkan membaca cerita ini. Karena ini mencakup banyak variasi dalam kehidupan Alex sebagai tokoh yang ber kharisma
With someone of that power when He goes god mode you would think he could bend the universe to his whims, someone saw the Marvel MCU and just copied that when they ran out of ideas.
Reveal Spoiler Has such potential to be a great story but poor writing by the author destroys it. The main character shows no growth doing the same thing over and over. The same scenarios are repeated just with different people. Story development is awful. The characters and situations that come up are totally unrealistic. Such a shame
Garbage, author should be ban from writing, or should I say the AI writes for him. [img=disgusted] to the new readers stop it, you wasting your time.
Je suis arrivé jusqu'à l'épisode 105 je suis toujours attiré par cette histoire d'Alex le billionnaire et son Aimée Debbie ! [img=recommend] Espèrons voir ça dans un film [img=fp]
I was really enjoying the story, As a matter of fact, I still enjoy the story after all the weirdness that took place after episode 773. But the story really took a dump after 773. If you read this review, I advise that you don’t spend another dime on this story on Pocket FM.
weird story pattern It sucks for the reader to read this kind of story where they can't find out what was happening in the story
DONT READ was enjoying at first then became really stupid. waste of time.
Devieron de aberla finalizado cuando podian ubiera sido una gran novela pero aora ya no tiene remedio ya se destruyo por completo que error tan grande aberla segido asta el capitulo 1015 me siento desepcionado y todavia no an encontrado un final la novela continuara eso es el colmo
this book is full of teachings of life and money now I have seen people pay respects to money than humans
I really love everything about the story Alexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Debbieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Ambroseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Sometimes hard to track the Story, after episode 650 don’t know what happens story goes all over…
The story started off well, pretty interesting, but eventually, it turns out that Alex is a complete idiot. He falls for the same tricks by women all the time, he really can't protect Debbie or even an apple. He is so careless with money, the moon maidens give him a credit/debit card with access to $5m in it, he instantly spends all of it at once. he certainly can't be trusted with anything. Regarding the story line, how did it change from a secret billionaire heir to like Goku, after the desert incident in chp700+, then to a story about a millionaire idiot again, after being pushed back to reality from his godhood state. When did he fall in love with Yvonne? She was never his ex, it was Cathy. When did he become an enemy to Lincoln? Riley has 9 lives or what? What happened to Debbie's sister and grandad? What happened to Brians's daughter? What happened to officer Chelsea? What happened to the moon maidens? It totally became a whole different story after going to the desert and from then on . Debbie breaks off with Alex after they get Chris from the bunker, Alex then decides to try get back to Yvonne after picking Debbie, right in Yvonne's face. If he was truly in love with Debbie, he would have gone after her, but no, he lets her leave. The guy is an idiot. He goes to Riley's sister to get Intel from her about Riley, the idiot Alex decides not to answer his phone after telling Chris and Louis to call in case of emergency. If you know you are not going to answer your phone, why have it with you in the first place . Ken Stokes goes from being an important associate of the Ambrose family, he was like president of Morgan Chase kind of guy, to being a TV personnel with no link to the Ambrose, after Alex returns from his godhood reality. Debbie certainly heard and knows that Lincoln was involved with the abduction of Chris, yet she still decides to work for him after he gives her the business card and she calls to get his details . Did she suddenly develop amnesia ? So many things wrong with this story from the desert incident. It totally becomes a different book entirely .
The story has a incoherent and diverging story line. The plot started out pretty good. The mc started with a good base but diverged from the starting point. After being betrayed by his ex girlfriend, he’s disgusted with ppl that are only looking for rich boyfriend. He finally finds a girlfriend that’s nice and loyal. But then why does it seem like he’s on the verge of falling for any pretty girl he sees. And how many times do you need to pretend to be another girl’s boyfriend even tho you are in a relationship. And why are you hang around the girl that you know is trying to break you guys up. Just cause you can’t say no and can’t be bother to pay attention? Is that suppose to be a cool rich guy response? Then you feel guilty for getting kissed by another girl by surprise? But you liked the kissed but felt guilt for your girlfriend. Then felt guily for sharing a plate with another girl when your girlfriend isn’t around. Just a doormat guy pretending to loyal and nice. The world background is convoluted. Everyone is chasing rich ppl and looking down on the poor. Herd mentality. Not very many likable character. I dropped it after he found out his girlfriend was schemed against and missing and he’s was drunk at the time. Then he let the girl who caused it all go just cause she tricked him into believing he slept with her.
Bahinchod ye kaisa story hua sala title instant millionaire hai par sala male lead chutiya ki trah hai jiske pas itna power hoga lund ke liye Aisa karega. Bhai thoda logically bhi soch kar likhta. Sala itna power Hite hue bhi land ki trah gali kha Raha hai bully ho raha hai pura story me laga jaise duniya ke kisi kamjor bande ko power de di gayi ho par use use karna nahi ata hai
Reveal Spoiler great! but cannot get enough of it. I have not written as much in the very long time
This is a very interesting book but there seem to be two stories in one. Alex the god and then Alex the human. Alex the human is a much more realistic and interesting storyline with all his 'new' friends. What ever happened to the Ambrose family business group?
There are confusing and even conflicting Episodes in the novel. How old does alex Ambrose left to face his poverty training? In some episodes it said he is on his 20's so it could be early, mid or late twenties perhaps but, there are series of episodes said that he is exactly 20 years of age, so,he started his poverty training at the age of 13. Also the character of justin ambrose said brother of alex, later episodes said only half bro and then it said justin ambrose is only cousin of alex, the writer inconsistency was reflected as we readers/audio listeners had followed the story. Also the character of debbie as now ms.marvel is not on point since she was been raised in a rural village, so how come that his father with the family bodyguard always on look out of debbie, i found so conflicting, the writer never stablished well the character of debbie! Then, the plot is boring it cycled always on bullying of how loser alex is in the story. Thus, the story has no main focus it even landed to the spiritual realm that alex seems to be the choosen one. Its good to hve story about poor boy but a millionaire just focus on that but to add other story like spiritual realm or story of other dimension like magical powers something like that is nonsense, thats how the story is and im sad how the writer imagination placed the story dull! There are so many inconsistentcy and complexeties of the story i know some of readerss of insta millionaire has also many observations regarding the plot even it is a series, but....!
Reveal Spoiler Like every one else I was a super fan of this book until around the 800.like I really like it that is until I realized this was a rip off “rebirth of urban immortal cultivator “ ;( If you like the cultivation stuff just go read that … it makes more since
Alex A. vs Charlie Wade from The Amazing Son-in-Law would be the ultimate battle both be in some poverty training but rich , then get good medical and martial arts skills , both with a girl that then turns out to be from a good family and also become like some supreme gods... overall a good novel just missing bunch of episodes while he was underground cultivating the flower after the missile attack . Just wakes up goes kill riley and story changes
the story was really nice and interesting each chapter would leave u wanting to read more but the last chapters ruined everything, the story's became more fictional, more magic and everything lost meaning in the last chapters I wasn't able to finish the chapters bse they're irritaiting
Reveal Spoiler Hi, could you update last chapters? You finished at 1014, but it seems to be 200 chapters more:) Overall story is quite good for me, but i am still waiting for the rest
I don't get it but the story and this altered timeline Alex cheated on Debbie and they're not going to get back together I'm just disappointed in this
this is trash..750+ became a different story like it didnt aligned with the title anymore 😂