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The plot seems to start from chapter 25. Till the chapter 25, the world is explained and the character has adapted to his new situation
Author here. I am reviewing my novel. I am giving 3.6 stars because comparing to other novels I have read, I find some areas where I can improve the quality of writing. The update stability would be 6~7 chapter a week. The update would be added at 8:00PM to 11:00PM (+8GMT) On some week I will not update on Mondays, but if I get contracted then I will guarentee 7 chapters a week.
I really like the theme of this novel. Medieval Mongolian conquests are not much mentioned in other novels
It's still early, since there are only about a dozen chapters, but I still think this book has shown a lot of potential already. MC traversed to the year 1203 AD in Mongolia. He becomes an aide to Genghis Khan and uses his modern knowledge and the information stored on his NeuroLink chip to improve the strength of the tribe and the living standard of its people. Author tries to give the characters personalities/motivations to make them more realistic and altough the writing quality could be better I think he does a pretty good job. Author seems to know a lot about mongolian history (I think he is mongolian irl) which makes the story more believable/interesting, but I hope in the future there will be more technical details. For example MC coats his steel swords in chromium but where did he get the chromium? How did they turn the steel into sword? Did make it Damascus steel? Did they case-harden it? I don't know if the novel will develop into the politic/scheming direction or the kingdom building/military conquest direction but I hope it's the latter. Until now there is no romance let alone harem and hopefully it stays that way. Overall a promising story please give it a chance ☺️
I'm really enjoying this story.................................................... ...................................................................................................................................
The plot seems to start from chapter 25. Till the chapter 25, the world is explained and the character has adapted to his new situation
Author here. I am reviewing my novel. I am giving 3.6 stars because comparing to other novels I have read, I find some areas where I can improve the quality of writing. The update stability would be 6~7 chapter a week. The update would be added at 8:00PM to 11:00PM (+8GMT) On some week I will not update on Mondays, but if I get contracted then I will guarentee 7 chapters a week.
I really like the theme of this novel. Medieval Mongolian conquests are not much mentioned in other novels
It's still early, since there are only about a dozen chapters, but I still think this book has shown a lot of potential already. MC traversed to the year 1203 AD in Mongolia. He becomes an aide to Genghis Khan and uses his modern knowledge and the information stored on his NeuroLink chip to improve the strength of the tribe and the living standard of its people. Author tries to give the characters personalities/motivations to make them more realistic and altough the writing quality could be better I think he does a pretty good job. Author seems to know a lot about mongolian history (I think he is mongolian irl) which makes the story more believable/interesting, but I hope in the future there will be more technical details. For example MC coats his steel swords in chromium but where did he get the chromium? How did they turn the steel into sword? Did make it Damascus steel? Did they case-harden it? I don't know if the novel will develop into the politic/scheming direction or the kingdom building/military conquest direction but I hope it's the latter. Until now there is no romance let alone harem and hopefully it stays that way. Overall a promising story please give it a chance ☺️
I'm really enjoying this story.................................................... ...................................................................................................................................