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This is my kind of genre. Fell in love with this book right from the beginning. This is one of the best book I've read on Webnovel so far. Keep up the good work.
WARNING - HIGH LEVELS OF CULTURE What can I say, thats one of the most amazing novels i know on Webnovel. It has everything a cultured man can dream of.... beauties, dragons, and dual cultivation... * Writing quality is superb, sometimes I doubt that its his 3rd language. Smooth to read and understand. Lemons have great details, author knows hot to move your lil bro (with words you pe rv...). *As of chapter 70, the story goes with a good pace. We know more and more about the world surrounding our MC. There is a big secret that needs more explanation, but it only pushes our imagination to more speculations. *Character design, to be honest, if you read what author did with mc's mommy, you will be shocked and trust me, in a good way. I read only harems, and yet that was something even i did not expect, genius move by author. Beside mommy we meet his older sis, and a house maid. All of them are great with different personalities. What I want to say is - winc est here feels great. *Update stability, from what I know we will get 2 chaps a day, so its very solid imo. *World background. Mc is a cultivator who uses QI, while the rest of the world uses mana ( inferior power ), reason? no idea. Still interesting, I bet there is a good plot behind it. *Story moves in a decent pace, not to slow or fast. Autor puts a lot of care into his characters, they dont feel one dimensional. You can start a chapter, have lots of fun and just be sad that you have to wait another day for next update. Now the most important part. NO NTR!!!! NO YURI !!!! Im a man of culture, and would not recommend some random disgusting stuff to my fellow daoists. Follow the culture, and give this book a try. I put my left ball on that, and thats like half of my life. Thanks for reading my review. Give this novel a chance, you wont be dissapointed!
I find the novel interesting but it is a painfully slow read. 1) Content worth one chapter is stretched out into multiple chapters. 2) Every wife of Yuan has to say something after every sentence of his. 3) Excessive meaningless chatter of the background characters.
Hey Author take this as a constructive criticism and not a diss at your novel, if you genuinely want to become a great novelist. Even if you tried your best to match the Cultivation Online, still you failed to achieve one of the biggest reasons why Yuan( MC of Cultivation Online ) is so damn near perfect MC. It is his character which is absolutely relatable to any normal decent person living in this society. Yuan is someone who has suffered injustice in his life and thus he understands the suffering of others who are in a similar situation to him, i.e they are powerless against injustice. So what does Yuan do once he starts gaining power, he helps those in need whenever he has the strength to do so and does not abandon people who are powerless to come out of their misery. At the same time, he is absolutely brutal towards his enemies and does not spare them or ignore them as soon they cause him any sort of trouble. Also he does all of this without harming his family and friends, him being an OP character, he is able to do all of this. This is what a normal person like me/ a decent person would do if they were to get powerful. This is the reason why many of us connect and feel for the Yuan as a character and root for him whenever he's in trouble. Unlike your Yuan, who expects others to sympathise towards his sufferings and unfairness and then he proceeds to ignore others sufferings when he himself comes into power. We will not be heartless and abandon people especially when we have the power to help them. In chapter 10 of your novel, you see that your MC looks around the poor condition of the town he lives in and then mocks at the suggestion of his system, when the system suggests him to help the needy people of the town, by saying that he's not a hero who is interested in helping people who are suffering unjustly. The literal irony of your MC is that in the beginning of the novel, you were trying to depict how unfair life has been for your MC and he deserves better, thus you have him a plot armour, where the MC after his unjust death received a second chance and so many upgrades from a very powerful being. Now, tell me author, why should I as a reader feel any sympathy towards this MC, when he is an absolute heartless Hypocrite, who laughs at others suffering and simultaneously cries out, when he himself suffers injustice?? If you still don't get my point then, I am sure that you'll never be able to create a masterpiece as Cultivation Online.
every thing is nice there is a slight grammatical mistakes but can be ignored pls don't give Chinese names to new character it's slightly confusing atleast try to give 7 chapters per week
Wahh wonderful story i love it bro You always sucess of life good luck bro (jantu) review di bolau emn word t likhi o lage 🥲 ki likhim aru 140 words hobo lage mne 😳 Vl lage la pohi alp pohi lu aru baki pisot pohim
it's interesting novel and still room to improve. it's different from the usual novel that i read.
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I'd advise to skip this one. Nothing interesting going on and things just happen for the sake of it. No emotions or buildup or mystery. It looks like the author is giving prompts to AI to create chapters to achieve word count. It is lifeless.
Story reads like it's been rewritten with grammerly in the tone of sophisticated, three times over. One minute he has no system points, the next he has a 1000 without any explanation. Story just overall feels unnatural.
The More chapters it is The more surprise in give[img=Feeling it][img=More pls]
An excellent story, but a little hot, but nothing that ruins the work. The author tries hard to improve the quality of the writing, so I think you should give it a chance.
The novel is good, but when will it have a real challenge? Because being in a world where everyone is weaker than him and the attitude is a bit passive, I don't understand why he needs to fly with a sword when he can do without it. I don't understand if the green one is too cool because my thought is if you can do it without it because you do it there are many good things but there are also bad things for example. the attitude, that he feels offended because they see him as a weirdo because obviously they are going to see him that way because they do not know the spiritual energy so what else do they expect and the other bad thing is the most cliché in all Chinese novel that they underestimate the protagonist, no one realize. Take him seriously until he proves that he is powerful.
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broski iIhave been following ur novel since keep up the good work and u will grow big
It look like Ai story the interaction look inhuman they all speak weird and don't feel real
unfortunately a very generic stereotypical story if you can even call it that because it is painfully slow with a lot of unnecessary repetitive dialogue and a lot of filler chapters: multiple chapters with just 'good morning' and descriptions of eating Every single conflict basically reads "How dare you do that to my young master" "dont you know who i am?" gets slapped, humiliated, comes back and rinse repeat... the characters have zero personality growth and the MC is painfully stupid forgetting constantly about the things he has aquired (MC gains an invaluable item to awaken a bloodline and simply does not use it at all), at times even his own system. There are so many inconsistencies in the story among which one of my favorites is that his sister gets a 1 week leave from the academy but the journey from her academy to her hometown takes more than 2months already with countless perils along the way to which she would have died multiple times over... another one being the MC staying at the exact same cultivation (peak spirit master) for 2 entire months while reaching there only took what? 2 weeks? futhermore the MC complains on a regular basis about the arrogance of nobles yet every chance he gets he regards everyone as lowly mortals - quite ironic. The only character i genuinely feel stands out is Xi Meili and author does her dirty by making her a walking garbage disposal unit. I saw a lot of potential in the novel when i started reading despite the overly pompous way the characters talk but due to the before mentioned points said potential was in my opinion sadly lost.
I walked into this novel with 0 expectations and i can admit i enjoy it. I will keep supporting this author as long as they keep releasing chapters
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I have 14 to 15 chapters and basically reached the conclusion that MC is an idiot only talking big. The conversation between harem members repeats. Unnecessary dialogues etc
The novel is good but you have to make Yuan stop being very passive and attack to kill when provoked because as he is now he is very similar to the original I would like his attitude towards enemies to be more hostile.
I have read this novel over 180+ chapter and i have to say this is literally copy of Cultivation Online not only in cultivation wise , Story wise too author just changes little bit of story nothing else. Very slow pase of story. And too much sweet talk at start it was good but it's going more annoying. Literally after bit of fight goes kiss and asking is he ok, even if he didn't even get a scratch, and they stuf food and same dialogue follow every time that how much they eat and all. And then more sweet talk
The plot is..... okay I guess? Honestly that's the best way I can describe it. Chapters are short and most of it is filled with nonsense and peanut gallery filler so that nothing ever really happens. The MC has 5 wives early, and every single one of them has input on every sentence the MC says or does. So a chapter usually just reads as: MC: let's do this Wife 1: yeah let's do it Wife 2: sure anything you want Wife 3: I always wanted to do that Wife 4: I can't wait Wife 5: I'll grab the snacks And that repeats in the chapter for literally every sentence or action. Run into an antagonist? Not only do the wives all talk, so do the bad guys, and so does everyone who sees it. I had to drop it because 10 chapters worth of content was spread to 100 chapters due to all the filler.
Overall I think this is a pretty good novel, my only issues are that the story is pretty slow and a lot of chapters are filler talking about how he kisses each of his wives
Don't laugh at me, readers! I am giving myself a full five-star review. Why? Because no one gives a review to this cultural book!
This is my kind of genre. Fell in love with this book right from the beginning. This is one of the best book I've read on Webnovel so far. Keep up the good work.
WARNING - HIGH LEVELS OF CULTURE What can I say, thats one of the most amazing novels i know on Webnovel. It has everything a cultured man can dream of.... beauties, dragons, and dual cultivation... * Writing quality is superb, sometimes I doubt that its his 3rd language. Smooth to read and understand. Lemons have great details, author knows hot to move your lil bro (with words you pe rv...). *As of chapter 70, the story goes with a good pace. We know more and more about the world surrounding our MC. There is a big secret that needs more explanation, but it only pushes our imagination to more speculations. *Character design, to be honest, if you read what author did with mc's mommy, you will be shocked and trust me, in a good way. I read only harems, and yet that was something even i did not expect, genius move by author. Beside mommy we meet his older sis, and a house maid. All of them are great with different personalities. What I want to say is - winc est here feels great. *Update stability, from what I know we will get 2 chaps a day, so its very solid imo. *World background. Mc is a cultivator who uses QI, while the rest of the world uses mana ( inferior power ), reason? no idea. Still interesting, I bet there is a good plot behind it. *Story moves in a decent pace, not to slow or fast. Autor puts a lot of care into his characters, they dont feel one dimensional. You can start a chapter, have lots of fun and just be sad that you have to wait another day for next update. Now the most important part. NO NTR!!!! NO YURI !!!! Im a man of culture, and would not recommend some random disgusting stuff to my fellow daoists. Follow the culture, and give this book a try. I put my left ball on that, and thats like half of my life. Thanks for reading my review. Give this novel a chance, you wont be dissapointed!
I find the novel interesting but it is a painfully slow read. 1) Content worth one chapter is stretched out into multiple chapters. 2) Every wife of Yuan has to say something after every sentence of his. 3) Excessive meaningless chatter of the background characters.
Hey Author take this as a constructive criticism and not a diss at your novel, if you genuinely want to become a great novelist. Even if you tried your best to match the Cultivation Online, still you failed to achieve one of the biggest reasons why Yuan( MC of Cultivation Online ) is so damn near perfect MC. It is his character which is absolutely relatable to any normal decent person living in this society. Yuan is someone who has suffered injustice in his life and thus he understands the suffering of others who are in a similar situation to him, i.e they are powerless against injustice. So what does Yuan do once he starts gaining power, he helps those in need whenever he has the strength to do so and does not abandon people who are powerless to come out of their misery. At the same time, he is absolutely brutal towards his enemies and does not spare them or ignore them as soon they cause him any sort of trouble. Also he does all of this without harming his family and friends, him being an OP character, he is able to do all of this. This is what a normal person like me/ a decent person would do if they were to get powerful. This is the reason why many of us connect and feel for the Yuan as a character and root for him whenever he's in trouble. Unlike your Yuan, who expects others to sympathise towards his sufferings and unfairness and then he proceeds to ignore others sufferings when he himself comes into power. We will not be heartless and abandon people especially when we have the power to help them. In chapter 10 of your novel, you see that your MC looks around the poor condition of the town he lives in and then mocks at the suggestion of his system, when the system suggests him to help the needy people of the town, by saying that he's not a hero who is interested in helping people who are suffering unjustly. The literal irony of your MC is that in the beginning of the novel, you were trying to depict how unfair life has been for your MC and he deserves better, thus you have him a plot armour, where the MC after his unjust death received a second chance and so many upgrades from a very powerful being. Now, tell me author, why should I as a reader feel any sympathy towards this MC, when he is an absolute heartless Hypocrite, who laughs at others suffering and simultaneously cries out, when he himself suffers injustice?? If you still don't get my point then, I am sure that you'll never be able to create a masterpiece as Cultivation Online.
every thing is nice there is a slight grammatical mistakes but can be ignored pls don't give Chinese names to new character it's slightly confusing atleast try to give 7 chapters per week
Wahh wonderful story i love it bro You always sucess of life good luck bro (jantu) review di bolau emn word t likhi o lage 🥲 ki likhim aru 140 words hobo lage mne 😳 Vl lage la pohi alp pohi lu aru baki pisot pohim
it's interesting novel and still room to improve. it's different from the usual novel that i read.
The first novel story of Cultivator in magical world is great and amazing new discovery.[img=Feeling it][img=update]
I'd advise to skip this one. Nothing interesting going on and things just happen for the sake of it. No emotions or buildup or mystery. It looks like the author is giving prompts to AI to create chapters to achieve word count. It is lifeless.
Story reads like it's been rewritten with grammerly in the tone of sophisticated, three times over. One minute he has no system points, the next he has a 1000 without any explanation. Story just overall feels unnatural.
The More chapters it is The more surprise in give[img=Feeling it][img=More pls]
An excellent story, but a little hot, but nothing that ruins the work. The author tries hard to improve the quality of the writing, so I think you should give it a chance.
The novel is good, but when will it have a real challenge? Because being in a world where everyone is weaker than him and the attitude is a bit passive, I don't understand why he needs to fly with a sword when he can do without it. I don't understand if the green one is too cool because my thought is if you can do it without it because you do it there are many good things but there are also bad things for example. the attitude, that he feels offended because they see him as a weirdo because obviously they are going to see him that way because they do not know the spiritual energy so what else do they expect and the other bad thing is the most cliché in all Chinese novel that they underestimate the protagonist, no one realize. Take him seriously until he proves that he is powerful.
Reveal Spoiler broski iIhave been following ur novel since keep up the good work and u will grow big
It look like Ai story the interaction look inhuman they all speak weird and don't feel real
unfortunately a very generic stereotypical story if you can even call it that because it is painfully slow with a lot of unnecessary repetitive dialogue and a lot of filler chapters: multiple chapters with just 'good morning' and descriptions of eating Every single conflict basically reads "How dare you do that to my young master" "dont you know who i am?" gets slapped, humiliated, comes back and rinse repeat... the characters have zero personality growth and the MC is painfully stupid forgetting constantly about the things he has aquired (MC gains an invaluable item to awaken a bloodline and simply does not use it at all), at times even his own system. There are so many inconsistencies in the story among which one of my favorites is that his sister gets a 1 week leave from the academy but the journey from her academy to her hometown takes more than 2months already with countless perils along the way to which she would have died multiple times over... another one being the MC staying at the exact same cultivation (peak spirit master) for 2 entire months while reaching there only took what? 2 weeks? futhermore the MC complains on a regular basis about the arrogance of nobles yet every chance he gets he regards everyone as lowly mortals - quite ironic. The only character i genuinely feel stands out is Xi Meili and author does her dirty by making her a walking garbage disposal unit. I saw a lot of potential in the novel when i started reading despite the overly pompous way the characters talk but due to the before mentioned points said potential was in my opinion sadly lost.
I walked into this novel with 0 expectations and i can admit i enjoy it. I will keep supporting this author as long as they keep releasing chapters
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I have 14 to 15 chapters and basically reached the conclusion that MC is an idiot only talking big. The conversation between harem members repeats. Unnecessary dialogues etc
The novel is good but you have to make Yuan stop being very passive and attack to kill when provoked because as he is now he is very similar to the original I would like his attitude towards enemies to be more hostile.
I have read this novel over 180+ chapter and i have to say this is literally copy of Cultivation Online not only in cultivation wise , Story wise too author just changes little bit of story nothing else. Very slow pase of story. And too much sweet talk at start it was good but it's going more annoying. Literally after bit of fight goes kiss and asking is he ok, even if he didn't even get a scratch, and they stuf food and same dialogue follow every time that how much they eat and all. And then more sweet talk
The plot is..... okay I guess? Honestly that's the best way I can describe it. Chapters are short and most of it is filled with nonsense and peanut gallery filler so that nothing ever really happens. The MC has 5 wives early, and every single one of them has input on every sentence the MC says or does. So a chapter usually just reads as: MC: let's do this Wife 1: yeah let's do it Wife 2: sure anything you want Wife 3: I always wanted to do that Wife 4: I can't wait Wife 5: I'll grab the snacks And that repeats in the chapter for literally every sentence or action. Run into an antagonist? Not only do the wives all talk, so do the bad guys, and so does everyone who sees it. I had to drop it because 10 chapters worth of content was spread to 100 chapters due to all the filler.
Overall I think this is a pretty good novel, my only issues are that the story is pretty slow and a lot of chapters are filler talking about how he kisses each of his wives
Don't laugh at me, readers! I am giving myself a full five-star review. Why? Because no one gives a review to this cultural book!