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Story was good but really Fell off When he started using Peter and Strange as an Horst like he is to String now
From +- 520 chapters, many chapters are mixed up. I can't even read, because it's not 1 or 2 chapters, there is a lot. Pls translator, do something.
This has been a big disappointment. I truely thought this could be a good fanfic, but I've been proven wrong. The usual 'young master reaching the heavens god like being with op system edge lord' thinking they're better than everyone, but is a braindead moron.
Dont waste your time with this trash if you like a hero complex this isnt for you because the hero is a moronic scum bag, if you like villains this still isnt for you because he does heroic actions to fuel his system. Hes basically a chatic neutral idiot that fits nowhere in the spectrum and leave everyone who reads it annoyed. Not to mention its a chinese translation so the writing is akward, and dialogue is trash.
MC gets a system that allows him to travel to other magic worlds, and Harry Potter just happens to be the first. Im not sure if the HPverse is significant or more important compared to others, but its definitely not the only one. I think most reason chapter which is like 700, is on the 4th or 5th world. Basically, if you here for harry potter, probably a bad idea.
Honestly, its not the worst story ive read. The translation is decent enough and isnt too difficult to read. The one thing that i feel ruins the story, is how apathetic the MC is. He basically cares about a few people and thats it. There is absolutely no character growth, like you would expect from a guy who has a system that forces him to do good for power. It could be my preference, but i just like hero stories, and this really isnt one. If the mc got a system that required him to be a villain for power, i reckon the story would be identical to this one, with few changes
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I enjoyed the mcu, HP and scorcerers apprentice worlds but totally lost interest with card captor sakura and fairy tail. But of all the stoy lines and plots, I enjoyed the MCxHermione love story the most for some reason. That made me smile the whole time
The pronouns keep changing, the magic used in the Harry Potter world is inconsistent and incorrect, the MC is very dumb most times, the diolog is very bad, and the plot is meh. I would definitely recommend skipping this one.
ะฅะพัะพัะฐั ะธััะพัะธั ะดะพ 520+ ะณะปะฐะฒ, ะดะฐะปััะต ะณะปะฐะฒั ะธะดัั ะฒ ัะฐะทะฝะพะฑะพะน, ะปัััะต ัะธัะฐัั ะพัะธะณะธะฝะฐะป ัะตะผ ะฟะตัะตะฟััะฐะฝะฝัะต ััะถะตั ัะพะดะตัะถะฐัะธะน ะผะฝะพะถะตััะฒะพ ัะฟะพะนะปะตัะพะฒ ะฝะฐ ะบะฐะถะดะพะผ ัะฐะณั!!!
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the translator doesn't care that these subscribers on webnovel can't follow the story because he forgot certain chapters, I'm talking about ten. for 1 month we have been asking for the missing chapters to be added but he does nothing and continues to post new chapters.
Great, I read 600+ chapters in a week and now what to do?๐................................. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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The story is about a man who got the opportunity to travel to other worlds. The beginning of the path causes the hero to need improvement. In the middle of the journey, he becomes stronger and discovers new opportunities for himself. In the last chapters, having great power and standing at the top of the magical world, he changes it for himself. But what happens then? Getting strength for the sake of strength? Meaningless interpersonal relationships indirectly woven into the plot? A good story is one that entertains in reading and makes you think about the meaning of the work. I really hope that the author in his work will not only tell the continuation of a fascinating story, but also bring meaning and message to his characters.
So I really Really like this book. Itโs a simple power trip. The MC gains his power quite relatively easily but it makes senseโฆ harry potters magic ls are just very overwhelmingly powerfulโฆ not many can fight getting the killing curse and so it makes sense how easily he gains his powers. He worked hard on it too- like his cheat is pretty cheap but it worked well as to reason out how a mentally adult(soul) preteen is capable of fighting head to head with gods as well as a conflict drive for the mc to actually be a hero. Itโs over all a simple and fun read. The issue is however. After 500 the one who is handling the accounts forgot to actually fix the mistakesโฆ now itโs unreadable. Very much a sad turn of events for a simple and fun story about a main character traveling across the multiverse to help people just cause and make everyone happy. That being said i suspect the translator is likely tired of the story and moving forwards but donโt want to push away his patrons.
The pronouns keep changing, the magic used in the Harry Potter world is inconsistent and incorrect, the MC is very dumb most times, the diolog is very bad, and the plot is meh. I would definitely recommend skipping this one.
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Shameful translator, makes fun of knowing that his webnovel community, I do like everyone else and unsubscribe from Patreon in support. SHAME
honestly i gave up reading this book one he started to go to other universes other then marvel and Harry potter like the title suggested
I'll tell that is one of the best multiverse type author I'll kill u if u stop itbeware [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The book was ruined by careless translator who uploaded chapters wrong. And there are still missing chapters right now quidab should have more regulation on this its a shame how many book were ruiend like this
I love the book but I need help in the latest chapters what episode did Jerry return the the marvel world for fairy tail world
more than 20 chapters out and still no update, (520...) I'm tired of supporting a translator who makes fun of his community. in support of those who do not have Patreon, I am stopping my subscription
this is a very good noval. I am following it from the beginning. it unique than other Harry potter fanfic I have read.Please keep uploading till the end.note to Author: at the end of the fairy tail arc some chapter are missing and disorganised.
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Story was good but really Fell off When he started using Peter and Strange as an Horst like he is to String now
From +- 520 chapters, many chapters are mixed up. I can't even read, because it's not 1 or 2 chapters, there is a lot. Pls translator, do something.
This has been a big disappointment. I truely thought this could be a good fanfic, but I've been proven wrong. The usual 'young master reaching the heavens god like being with op system edge lord' thinking they're better than everyone, but is a braindead moron.
Dont waste your time with this trash if you like a hero complex this isnt for you because the hero is a moronic scum bag, if you like villains this still isnt for you because he does heroic actions to fuel his system. Hes basically a chatic neutral idiot that fits nowhere in the spectrum and leave everyone who reads it annoyed. Not to mention its a chinese translation so the writing is akward, and dialogue is trash.
MC gets a system that allows him to travel to other magic worlds, and Harry Potter just happens to be the first. Im not sure if the HPverse is significant or more important compared to others, but its definitely not the only one. I think most reason chapter which is like 700, is on the 4th or 5th world. Basically, if you here for harry potter, probably a bad idea.
Honestly, its not the worst story ive read. The translation is decent enough and isnt too difficult to read. The one thing that i feel ruins the story, is how apathetic the MC is. He basically cares about a few people and thats it. There is absolutely no character growth, like you would expect from a guy who has a system that forces him to do good for power. It could be my preference, but i just like hero stories, and this really isnt one. If the mc got a system that required him to be a villain for power, i reckon the story would be identical to this one, with few changes
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Supremacy chinese. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I enjoyed the mcu, HP and scorcerers apprentice worlds but totally lost interest with card captor sakura and fairy tail. But of all the stoy lines and plots, I enjoyed the MCxHermione love story the most for some reason. That made me smile the whole time
The pronouns keep changing, the magic used in the Harry Potter world is inconsistent and incorrect, the MC is very dumb most times, the diolog is very bad, and the plot is meh. I would definitely recommend skipping this one.
ะฅะพัะพัะฐั ะธััะพัะธั ะดะพ 520+ ะณะปะฐะฒ, ะดะฐะปััะต ะณะปะฐะฒั ะธะดัั ะฒ ัะฐะทะฝะพะฑะพะน, ะปัััะต ัะธัะฐัั ะพัะธะณะธะฝะฐะป ัะตะผ ะฟะตัะตะฟััะฐะฝะฝัะต ััะถะตั ัะพะดะตัะถะฐัะธะน ะผะฝะพะถะตััะฒะพ ัะฟะพะนะปะตัะพะฒ ะฝะฐ ะบะฐะถะดะพะผ ัะฐะณั!!!
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the translator doesn't care that these subscribers on webnovel can't follow the story because he forgot certain chapters, I'm talking about ten. for 1 month we have been asking for the missing chapters to be added but he does nothing and continues to post new chapters.
Great, I read 600+ chapters in a week and now what to do?๐................................. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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The story is about a man who got the opportunity to travel to other worlds. The beginning of the path causes the hero to need improvement. In the middle of the journey, he becomes stronger and discovers new opportunities for himself. In the last chapters, having great power and standing at the top of the magical world, he changes it for himself. But what happens then? Getting strength for the sake of strength? Meaningless interpersonal relationships indirectly woven into the plot? A good story is one that entertains in reading and makes you think about the meaning of the work. I really hope that the author in his work will not only tell the continuation of a fascinating story, but also bring meaning and message to his characters.
So I really Really like this book. Itโs a simple power trip. The MC gains his power quite relatively easily but it makes senseโฆ harry potters magic ls are just very overwhelmingly powerfulโฆ not many can fight getting the killing curse and so it makes sense how easily he gains his powers. He worked hard on it too- like his cheat is pretty cheap but it worked well as to reason out how a mentally adult(soul) preteen is capable of fighting head to head with gods as well as a conflict drive for the mc to actually be a hero. Itโs over all a simple and fun read. The issue is however. After 500 the one who is handling the accounts forgot to actually fix the mistakesโฆ now itโs unreadable. Very much a sad turn of events for a simple and fun story about a main character traveling across the multiverse to help people just cause and make everyone happy. That being said i suspect the translator is likely tired of the story and moving forwards but donโt want to push away his patrons.
The pronouns keep changing, the magic used in the Harry Potter world is inconsistent and incorrect, the MC is very dumb most times, the diolog is very bad, and the plot is meh. I would definitely recommend skipping this one.
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Shameful translator, makes fun of knowing that his webnovel community, I do like everyone else and unsubscribe from Patreon in support. SHAME
honestly i gave up reading this book one he started to go to other universes other then marvel and Harry potter like the title suggested
I'll tell that is one of the best multiverse type author I'll kill u if u stop itbeware [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The book was ruined by careless translator who uploaded chapters wrong. And there are still missing chapters right now quidab should have more regulation on this its a shame how many book were ruiend like this
I love the book but I need help in the latest chapters what episode did Jerry return the the marvel world for fairy tail world
more than 20 chapters out and still no update, (520...) I'm tired of supporting a translator who makes fun of his community. in support of those who do not have Patreon, I am stopping my subscription
this is a very good noval. I am following it from the beginning. it unique than other Harry potter fanfic I have read.Please keep uploading till the end.note to Author: at the end of the fairy tail arc some chapter are missing and disorganised.
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