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me encanta este libro espero no lo abandones por favor me gusta mucho su personaje y la manera en que lo escribes muchas gracias por subirlo
5 stars, 5 stars, 5 stars. I was a little worried it would be dropped around Chapter 55, but it's back on semi regular uploads. And trust me, it's the best fanfiction with an OC for Youjo Senki, and well, WELL is worth the wait for new chapters. I even started on fanart for this because it's so good. and the author is I iterative with the readers too. it's really good. also, Tanya's charecter is really cute. kinda reminds me of the manga Tanya. it's well done and well written. each new charecter and old feel like they belong in the bigger story.
Love the story but maybe see development in ranking in economics or military in a single chapter to see the standing of the Dacian and also see modern military build up to see how much they progressed Thanks
The best fanfic I have read so far. One of the few non-brain dead MC's that you can find in youjo senki stories................................
good fanfic I recommend it if you like youjo senki..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Literaly the best fanfic I have read so far, definitely give this one a shot, you wont regret it.
my primary complain for this fanfic are the writing quality of this fanfic almost has similar quality to an mtl novel because it has many typos and it's hard to discerning the meaning of some of the paragraphs in this fanfic.
This is one of the best stories I've read so far. The kingdombuilding elements are top-notch. I hope the author carries on writing kingdombuilding stories.
There are words with their first letters capitalized for no apparent reason. Some mistakes in grammar from here and there. Characters that feel childish due to amateurish dialogues and other reasons I won't bother to write. The concept is really nice but the delivery is meh. I'm neutral about political ideologies but you should really try to write them more objectively and with evidence in order to avoid unnecessary controversy with some sensitive people out there. Again, the concept is really nice but the story is not my cup of tea.
never knew I needed a Youjo senki fanfic.... now I do! please keep at it author your novel is great.
Ok... this is one of the rare stories as Youjo Senki fanfic with a male protagonist is indeed a very rare thing... The kingdom-building element and world-building elements are well done so it would be interesting to see how things developed. I cannot wait when the story will develop more on magic topics or some romance and so on...
There arent many Youjo Senki stories, and those that are actually good or at least decent is low, so seeing this having stable updates and good story and writing and characters is good, also not afraid of diving deeper into the lore that wasynt shown in the anime or manga is good.
Confesso que não me lembro de quase nada de Youjo Senki, mas lerei mesmo assim. Usarei a wiki enquanto leio. Obrigado pela história meu compadre.
I demand more! This great story makes you want to support the bad guys, nuff said.
It is a very good fanfic, I just hope that at some point images of the characters will be added (translated from google).....................................................................
This is amazing, one of the best fanfic with kingdom bulding out there. Thanks autor for this amazing story.................................................
Much better than I expected, despite the fact that the chapters are short, it's quite nice to see a story based on that series. PLEASE GIVE ME MORE
I wonder author, did you read the novel or are you just basing off the anime?
War Candy gold,women,dream,power,honor,more women,more gold.....War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible
Okay man, this is the first time i see Youjo Senki Fanfic in this platform and i hope this isn't dissapointed, i didn't read it yet but i hope it's good.
More Chapter Please!!! More more more more more more more more mor more more More more more more more more more more mor more more More more more more more more more more mor more more More more more more more more more more mor more more
as a fan of youjo senki world and a fan of kingdom building. I also liked to see what a male mc would do to world, when he has the power of his country in his hands. (Mind my English 😂)
looking forward to the development of this story also excited because there is few youjo senki with male mc
me encanta este libro espero no lo abandones por favor me gusta mucho su personaje y la manera en que lo escribes muchas gracias por subirlo
5 stars, 5 stars, 5 stars. I was a little worried it would be dropped around Chapter 55, but it's back on semi regular uploads. And trust me, it's the best fanfiction with an OC for Youjo Senki, and well, WELL is worth the wait for new chapters. I even started on fanart for this because it's so good. and the author is I iterative with the readers too. it's really good. also, Tanya's charecter is really cute. kinda reminds me of the manga Tanya. it's well done and well written. each new charecter and old feel like they belong in the bigger story.
Love the story but maybe see development in ranking in economics or military in a single chapter to see the standing of the Dacian and also see modern military build up to see how much they progressed Thanks
The best fanfic I have read so far. One of the few non-brain dead MC's that you can find in youjo senki stories................................
good fanfic I recommend it if you like youjo senki..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Literaly the best fanfic I have read so far, definitely give this one a shot, you wont regret it.
my primary complain for this fanfic are the writing quality of this fanfic almost has similar quality to an mtl novel because it has many typos and it's hard to discerning the meaning of some of the paragraphs in this fanfic.
This is one of the best stories I've read so far. The kingdombuilding elements are top-notch. I hope the author carries on writing kingdombuilding stories.
There are words with their first letters capitalized for no apparent reason. Some mistakes in grammar from here and there. Characters that feel childish due to amateurish dialogues and other reasons I won't bother to write. The concept is really nice but the delivery is meh. I'm neutral about political ideologies but you should really try to write them more objectively and with evidence in order to avoid unnecessary controversy with some sensitive people out there. Again, the concept is really nice but the story is not my cup of tea.
never knew I needed a Youjo senki fanfic.... now I do! please keep at it author your novel is great.
Ok... this is one of the rare stories as Youjo Senki fanfic with a male protagonist is indeed a very rare thing... The kingdom-building element and world-building elements are well done so it would be interesting to see how things developed. I cannot wait when the story will develop more on magic topics or some romance and so on...
There arent many Youjo Senki stories, and those that are actually good or at least decent is low, so seeing this having stable updates and good story and writing and characters is good, also not afraid of diving deeper into the lore that wasynt shown in the anime or manga is good.
Confesso que não me lembro de quase nada de Youjo Senki, mas lerei mesmo assim. Usarei a wiki enquanto leio. Obrigado pela história meu compadre.
I demand more! This great story makes you want to support the bad guys, nuff said.
It is a very good fanfic, I just hope that at some point images of the characters will be added (translated from google).....................................................................
This is amazing, one of the best fanfic with kingdom bulding out there. Thanks autor for this amazing story.................................................
Much better than I expected, despite the fact that the chapters are short, it's quite nice to see a story based on that series. PLEASE GIVE ME MORE
I wonder author, did you read the novel or are you just basing off the anime?
War Candy gold,women,dream,power,honor,more women,more gold.....War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible
Okay man, this is the first time i see Youjo Senki Fanfic in this platform and i hope this isn't dissapointed, i didn't read it yet but i hope it's good.
More Chapter Please!!! More more more more more more more more mor more more More more more more more more more more mor more more More more more more more more more more mor more more More more more more more more more more mor more more
as a fan of youjo senki world and a fan of kingdom building. I also liked to see what a male mc would do to world, when he has the power of his country in his hands. (Mind my English 😂)
looking forward to the development of this story also excited because there is few youjo senki with male mc
Ngl you don’t even deserve 1 star.