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I love the story and hope for more chapters like 300-500 chapter hope is not difficult for you
Great story, one of my favorite ffic, keep up the good work, perfect[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Es muy buena la historia una idea original y muy entretenida sigue actualizando!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Please advise similar works where man creates worlds as a god. And the work itself is okay, but rushed and omits a lot of details, which is bad
The idea behind this story is pretty good, but unfortunately the grammar in it could use a lot of help and the background of the character was very vague with no story telling of it at all
A very wonderful story in terms of writing, the development of the world, and the development of the characters in it. I advise everyone who wants a quiet novel that ignites enthusiasm in reading this story. I only hope that the writer does not drop it in the same way as many successful novels. In the end, thank you for this wonderful story.
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Had high hopes. But like many bad OP MC stories. This author fell into the trap of just creating a list of things the MC has done is doing or will do. Very few very short character interactions. Almost zero meaningful relationships. even wheb it seems he might start actually interacting with other people in some meaningful way. He goes back to listing things again.
The various errors made by the authors please check or have some to proof read your work , in any case it still interesting -savannah was omitted when it should be yavannah
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I just read the novel in one sitting. And the truth is that it is very confusing. I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way. An example would be time. At one point they were in the long night that was supposed to last years and so on and everything was fine until then. But out of nowhere it jumped to the Andal invasion in a time that I imagine was 50 or 60 years taking into account that those who ruled were the grandchildren of the first houses. Which is very incoherent considering that according to the series and the books, the long night happened between 2 and 3 thousand years before the Andals arrived. Another point would be the Lanisters. I don't know if I'm wrong here, but they didn't participate in the long night and if I remember correctly they were Andalus. I think that if the author develops the story more instead of simply passing everything by as quickly as if time did not exist, it would be a great novel, but until the historical accuracies are corrected or the timeline made sense, it will continue to be just as confusing. Aaaah something else would be the valiryos. Who are supposed to have emerged about 2 thousand years before the conquest but here they appear as if nothing had happened. As I say, there are many historical inconsistencies that make the novel confusing.
Alll i can say that mc being the creator and creating servants; and focusing to his world & interfering on it to whatever he wishes is something i like.
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Personally, I liked the work of art. I also have a suggestion for the gods that they can have children from humans, but without divine power, but with powers such as increased physical strength or speed of reaction or regeneration.
The concept of evolution could be added into this story like some giants or children of the forest can become somewhat like Titans or Fae/Dryads also the concept of a world tree in westeros is appealing
Its very good tho still very sad about the fact that the prologe thingy was so intersting sounding and was the reason i forst started to read cus i expwcted it to start from the begening and be a weak to strong feic and a lot of kingdombuilding its very sad but still pretty good
Could you make for him to create the gods to govern and provide entertainment for him plus could he also procreate tho is your choice thanks for the novel.
i usually love all of your novels I still do congratulations on making another w fanfic
Excelente capπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
EXCELENTE HISTORIA πππππππππππππππππ πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Great story, one of my favorite ffic, keep up the good work, perfect[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Es muy buena la historia una idea original y muy entretenida sigue actualizando!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Please advise similar works where man creates worlds as a god. And the work itself is okay, but rushed and omits a lot of details, which is bad
The idea behind this story is pretty good, but unfortunately the grammar in it could use a lot of help and the background of the character was very vague with no story telling of it at all
A very wonderful story in terms of writing, the development of the world, and the development of the characters in it. I advise everyone who wants a quiet novel that ignites enthusiasm in reading this story. I only hope that the writer does not drop it in the same way as many successful novels. In the end, thank you for this wonderful story.
it is good [img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ][img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ][img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ][img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ][img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ][img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ][img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ][img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ][img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ]
Had high hopes. But like many bad OP MC stories. This author fell into the trap of just creating a list of things the MC has done is doing or will do. Very few very short character interactions. Almost zero meaningful relationships. even wheb it seems he might start actually interacting with other people in some meaningful way. He goes back to listing things again.
The various errors made by the authors please check or have some to proof read your work , in any case it still interesting -savannah was omitted when it should be yavannah
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I just read the novel in one sitting. And the truth is that it is very confusing. I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way. An example would be time. At one point they were in the long night that was supposed to last years and so on and everything was fine until then. But out of nowhere it jumped to the Andal invasion in a time that I imagine was 50 or 60 years taking into account that those who ruled were the grandchildren of the first houses. Which is very incoherent considering that according to the series and the books, the long night happened between 2 and 3 thousand years before the Andals arrived. Another point would be the Lanisters. I don't know if I'm wrong here, but they didn't participate in the long night and if I remember correctly they were Andalus. I think that if the author develops the story more instead of simply passing everything by as quickly as if time did not exist, it would be a great novel, but until the historical accuracies are corrected or the timeline made sense, it will continue to be just as confusing. Aaaah something else would be the valiryos. Who are supposed to have emerged about 2 thousand years before the conquest but here they appear as if nothing had happened. As I say, there are many historical inconsistencies that make the novel confusing.
Alll i can say that mc being the creator and creating servants; and focusing to his world & interfering on it to whatever he wishes is something i like.
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This is great. I hope you keep writing this story ..... ........................................... ......................................... ........................................... ......................................... ........................................... ......................................... ........................................... ........................................ ........................................... ......................................... ........................................... ......................................... ........................................... ......................................... ........................................... .......................................
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Personally, I liked the work of art. I also have a suggestion for the gods that they can have children from humans, but without divine power, but with powers such as increased physical strength or speed of reaction or regeneration.
The concept of evolution could be added into this story like some giants or children of the forest can become somewhat like Titans or Fae/Dryads also the concept of a world tree in westeros is appealing
Its very good tho still very sad about the fact that the prologe thingy was so intersting sounding and was the reason i forst started to read cus i expwcted it to start from the begening and be a weak to strong feic and a lot of kingdombuilding its very sad but still pretty good
Could you make for him to create the gods to govern and provide entertainment for him plus could he also procreate tho is your choice thanks for the novel.
i usually love all of your novels I still do congratulations on making another w fanfic
Excelente capπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ