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Look, this is some really great shit and the mc hax is interesting, BUT the update stability is the same as spiting on the reader face, this fic has existed for years and has only 50 chapters, i don't suggest that you read it, because you will want more and will never get it
A really good jjk story that has a lot of elements of the show. Pact full of explanation which I enjoy, history and shit, the MC is strong not through sheer power ( he is plenty strong as well) but through brains and skills something which I like a lot than just brute for every situation
This FF has a good story along with a great explanation of Curse Techniques.
hard to stay with in the middle picks back up with the when fighting really good love it
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The Mc in the span of 3 months goes from the weakest amount of energy to special grade. Then after people tried to kill him he instead gave them and their boss his protection and made a way to teach them sorcery wouldn’t recommend if you don’t like a hero Mc. Also the update stability is horrendous. And the pacing is extremely slow Mc hasn’t even interacted with any of the cast.
The grammar in the story is good I couldn't find any mistakes. The MC interactions and actions feels exactly how a 15 year old kid would. Unfortunately, this here is a reincarnated person who should be more grounded, not make rash decisions and have a more stable personality... Which unfortunately he doesn't have. Also, there are too many inconsistencies. With the author, sometimes saying "having 1,000 points in cursed energy control is very impressive among other Jujutsu users", but later that chapter saying his "energy control is way too awkward and have a lot to improve". Listing Gojo and Geto as special grade while they're still in tech school... Anyway there are a lot of inconsistencies that gave me an headache. To sum it up I would say the idea was good but the execution was poor. Writing quality: 5 Updating stability: 2 Story development: 3 Character design: 1 World background: 5
This work in general is very good, I just have a few criticisms to improve this story, firstly - the protagonist becomes strong very quickly, if the author doesn't Nerf him (which I believe he will) this work will end around chapter 80, if not has a twist. second - there is a lack of more interaction with the main characters of the jujutsu work, there are few interactions (in my opinion) and finally my last point, which is more of a hope that this work does not follow the original work to the letter, if it just follows exactly the same, with few changes, like the protagonist killing some curses, for example: the protagonist goes and kills an important villain, like Mahito right at the beginning, and this doesn't change in the work as a whole and it continues to follow the original, but with this change (which in the end doesn't change anything, I've read a lot of works like this) in the end, I just hope that this work doesn't disappoint in the end.
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My compliments to the author, he knows his stuff. The worldbuilding actually makes sense, the characters are written well and the MC is understandable and likeable.
Biggest hamper in this story is updates stability. Like he takes massive breaks..... When he is writing his consistent but, he takes breaks a lot. Otherwise it's quite good. So if you don't Like the inconsistency of uploads, I do not recommend.
It is a solid read, and you can understand the plot and power system without watching or reading jjk.
excellent fanfiction. It lack a bit of character and world development but if the story continu, I hope it will be resolved.
I like the overall design of the story and the building of the main character at the beginning and haw it continues down the line.
i like the story as well as the MC but can you keep the monologue and explanation's short there too long so it distracts you from the main point but overall this is a good book
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Well for starters the backround of the character is very interesting. Plus the timeline in which he comes to is very strategically important so that he can be incorporated better in the plot. I like the ideas in general and the development of it. I also agree with the mc's decisions up to his point. They were the best decisions someone that was kicked out of his clan can make. All in all a very good and interesting story! Can't wait for the future updates!!
Well for starters this fic is actually a lot more interesting than i gave it credit for in the beginning. I hope that the updates become more consintent though. The author portrays the characters very similar to the original ones so thats a good thing, the pace is a little slow however. I don't have any bad things to say about it, but i think more interactions with the main cast and less alone time would be very interesting. Also i hope some future events change (like gojos death) but that's just my opinion, im gonna read it either way.
I quite like this story. It has a plot and not some mindless op character. I hope there won't be any meaningless harem and romance though, it would just make the story deviate from the developing from weak to strong. I think this have the potential to be one of those fics that focuses only on getting stronger and maybe even develop to writing an exciting fight with Sukuna. Personally, I feel that adding harem and romance would just ruin the story since it would feel awkward training to be strong then there would suddenly be a chick popping up that would either be used for some chap fillers about developing a happy family or whatnot. We'll, it could be just me, but I think it's better not having those genre at all and just focus on getting stronger. The MC can have those chicks when he can defeat Sukuna, but for the story development, it's better if there's no chick for the time being. Just focus on exciting fights, it's better that way.
its pretty good probably the best jjk ff on this app till this date (the one's i read) . i was going to complain that it was a bit fast paced specially regarding the power scaling but after catching up to the latest chapter i get that it was only a prelude to the divergence that's going to happen and i like that since most fanfictions usually follow the trope of that fate will keep fixing things no matter what happened. it's intriguing to see how the addition of a greater power would have an impact in the greater scheme of things. though i feel that u'r writing style is good i hope u can introduce more depth to the charachter unstead of attributing everything to the skill while it's feasible in the short term at some point in the long run it will become overused and i feel that's why most writers dislike things like gamer mind i feel u should leave the cap of it short so that it won't turn into a skill like gamer mind and fall in the trap and find it hard to add depth to ur charachter in the future
Any updates? Its 2 months Already, i hope the author is Healthy again, please, i really like the fanfiction story of Jujutsu kaisen please recover soon, and upload again, please don't rashly upload it, make it good like always
Unfortunately I am not a critic so I cannot correctly express the strong points why I like this story so I can only say that so far (Chap 23) this fic is one of the best stories I have read, I highly recommend it.
Writing Quality ★︎★︎★︎ Stability of Updates ★︎★︎ Story Development ★︎ Character Design ★︎ World Background ★︎★︎★︎★︎
Look, this is some really great shit and the mc hax is interesting, BUT the update stability is the same as spiting on the reader face, this fic has existed for years and has only 50 chapters, i don't suggest that you read it, because you will want more and will never get it
A really good jjk story that has a lot of elements of the show. Pact full of explanation which I enjoy, history and shit, the MC is strong not through sheer power ( he is plenty strong as well) but through brains and skills something which I like a lot than just brute for every situation
This FF has a good story along with a great explanation of Curse Techniques.
hard to stay with in the middle picks back up with the when fighting really good love it
Perfect ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
Интересно ................................................................................................................................................
The Mc in the span of 3 months goes from the weakest amount of energy to special grade. Then after people tried to kill him he instead gave them and their boss his protection and made a way to teach them sorcery wouldn’t recommend if you don’t like a hero Mc. Also the update stability is horrendous. And the pacing is extremely slow Mc hasn’t even interacted with any of the cast.
The grammar in the story is good I couldn't find any mistakes. The MC interactions and actions feels exactly how a 15 year old kid would. Unfortunately, this here is a reincarnated person who should be more grounded, not make rash decisions and have a more stable personality... Which unfortunately he doesn't have. Also, there are too many inconsistencies. With the author, sometimes saying "having 1,000 points in cursed energy control is very impressive among other Jujutsu users", but later that chapter saying his "energy control is way too awkward and have a lot to improve". Listing Gojo and Geto as special grade while they're still in tech school... Anyway there are a lot of inconsistencies that gave me an headache. To sum it up I would say the idea was good but the execution was poor. Writing quality: 5 Updating stability: 2 Story development: 3 Character design: 1 World background: 5
This work in general is very good, I just have a few criticisms to improve this story, firstly - the protagonist becomes strong very quickly, if the author doesn't Nerf him (which I believe he will) this work will end around chapter 80, if not has a twist. second - there is a lack of more interaction with the main characters of the jujutsu work, there are few interactions (in my opinion) and finally my last point, which is more of a hope that this work does not follow the original work to the letter, if it just follows exactly the same, with few changes, like the protagonist killing some curses, for example: the protagonist goes and kills an important villain, like Mahito right at the beginning, and this doesn't change in the work as a whole and it continues to follow the original, but with this change (which in the end doesn't change anything, I've read a lot of works like this) in the end, I just hope that this work doesn't disappoint in the end.
it gets better every chapter. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
My compliments to the author, he knows his stuff. The worldbuilding actually makes sense, the characters are written well and the MC is understandable and likeable.
Biggest hamper in this story is updates stability. Like he takes massive breaks..... When he is writing his consistent but, he takes breaks a lot. Otherwise it's quite good. So if you don't Like the inconsistency of uploads, I do not recommend.
It is a solid read, and you can understand the plot and power system without watching or reading jjk.
excellent fanfiction. It lack a bit of character and world development but if the story continu, I hope it will be resolved.
I like the overall design of the story and the building of the main character at the beginning and haw it continues down the line.
i like the story as well as the MC but can you keep the monologue and explanation's short there too long so it distracts you from the main point but overall this is a good book
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Well for starters the backround of the character is very interesting. Plus the timeline in which he comes to is very strategically important so that he can be incorporated better in the plot. I like the ideas in general and the development of it. I also agree with the mc's decisions up to his point. They were the best decisions someone that was kicked out of his clan can make. All in all a very good and interesting story! Can't wait for the future updates!!
Well for starters this fic is actually a lot more interesting than i gave it credit for in the beginning. I hope that the updates become more consintent though. The author portrays the characters very similar to the original ones so thats a good thing, the pace is a little slow however. I don't have any bad things to say about it, but i think more interactions with the main cast and less alone time would be very interesting. Also i hope some future events change (like gojos death) but that's just my opinion, im gonna read it either way.
I quite like this story. It has a plot and not some mindless op character. I hope there won't be any meaningless harem and romance though, it would just make the story deviate from the developing from weak to strong. I think this have the potential to be one of those fics that focuses only on getting stronger and maybe even develop to writing an exciting fight with Sukuna. Personally, I feel that adding harem and romance would just ruin the story since it would feel awkward training to be strong then there would suddenly be a chick popping up that would either be used for some chap fillers about developing a happy family or whatnot. We'll, it could be just me, but I think it's better not having those genre at all and just focus on getting stronger. The MC can have those chicks when he can defeat Sukuna, but for the story development, it's better if there's no chick for the time being. Just focus on exciting fights, it's better that way.
its pretty good probably the best jjk ff on this app till this date (the one's i read) . i was going to complain that it was a bit fast paced specially regarding the power scaling but after catching up to the latest chapter i get that it was only a prelude to the divergence that's going to happen and i like that since most fanfictions usually follow the trope of that fate will keep fixing things no matter what happened. it's intriguing to see how the addition of a greater power would have an impact in the greater scheme of things. though i feel that u'r writing style is good i hope u can introduce more depth to the charachter unstead of attributing everything to the skill while it's feasible in the short term at some point in the long run it will become overused and i feel that's why most writers dislike things like gamer mind i feel u should leave the cap of it short so that it won't turn into a skill like gamer mind and fall in the trap and find it hard to add depth to ur charachter in the future
Any updates? Its 2 months Already, i hope the author is Healthy again, please, i really like the fanfiction story of Jujutsu kaisen please recover soon, and upload again, please don't rashly upload it, make it good like always
Unfortunately I am not a critic so I cannot correctly express the strong points why I like this story so I can only say that so far (Chap 23) this fic is one of the best stories I have read, I highly recommend it.
Writing Quality ★︎★︎★︎ Stability of Updates ★︎★︎ Story Development ★︎ Character Design ★︎ World Background ★︎★︎★︎★︎