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3 months no update, is story complete or abandoned? Don't want to waste time if no ending.
seems unique but can i ask is this dropped? because the last update is 1 month ago...
I liked it. Enjoyed the characters, the plot, the world, however there was one mild thing that annoyed me. The synopsis, the dialogue at the end makes no sense to my mind, he says "Why, you ask?" When the question beforehand was a do. Anyway still liked the novel, and you should still defo give it a try.
I really enjoy the story so far (I read 40 Chapters in 2 days)I am just afraid the Author dropped it can someone enlighten me if there are going to be new chapters
Ahh😢 don't like the romance tag, hope its just something that happens at the end of the novel.
I really like this story[img=recommend]~~~~ I just want the author to release more chapters~~~~[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love this book... The author needs to do some work on the characters though. But, I like the story in general, especially mc's class, it sounds unique.
umm, man cryo I read some starting chapters and it is good, so this will go in my library, and keep the updating stable. hmm and will there be gore and torture in future.
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~~~~~~ Absolute banger [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] highly recommended
Interesting novel first read. I could tell it already has a defined plot and has a good flow of how the story will go. I also like the tone of the story. It's very formal, as well as the complexity. Will keep on reading.
original novel, good pace and new system. the protagonist very well done. Good release rate. Up to 50 no grammar/syntax errors.I hope you continue to update it more quickly
Now this is a unique story. first time i have seen a merchant as a main character. Don't disappoint me by writing $#@t[img=recommend]
I've read up to chap 10 and I gotta ask this before he goes any further, is going to become stronger? I mean there's SS rank talents on the left, EX rank talents on the right, and pretty sure the leader of blue team is SSS rank talent.
a banger novel what more can I say?... especially the concept is good and fun to read
Around 10 chapters Honestly I'm a sucker for lit-rpgs so I gave this a shot, I have to say I got quickly disappointed. The author goes with the old trope of making our protagonist some sort of omni-competent super handsome character fitting in with the archetype of a protagonist who can never do any wrong and never makes any mistakes somehow thinking that's going to make him more relatable to the reader it doesn't. I appreciate the whole idea of being thrown into just a random situation and the cruel moral choices that a person has to make those are understandable in a story especially developing one but then it gets into this whole power and rating system that is given little to no explanation and then automatically just throwing in a multiversal conflict and whole sets of rules and deus ex machina are coming left and right I get the idea of the character trying to take advantage of the situation and I respect a protagonist who does that but I kind of was looking for something a little more on the mercantile side rather than just immediately trying to either rip people off or manipulate people and yes I understand that the real world doesn't work like that there are many people that try to hurt or scam others and there's nothing new about a manipulative protagonist and that in and of itself is not a bad thing but I kind of want to see the internal thoughts of the protagonist in order to find out what's happening here it's just I don't know it's jumping into many directions at once and I can't take it anymore it's both too much and too little to keep track of very little consistency background or really any interesting or compelling characters to follow rather than shallow archetypes of a servant or a master or a thug or random civilian there's nothing here really to keep me interested I have really no comments to the author as it seems to largely be an abandoned novel but to anyone looking to read this to just see what it is don't waste time or any sort of mental space on the series it's not worth it.
Reveal Spoiler 3 months no update, is story complete or abandoned? Don't want to waste time if no ending.
seems unique but can i ask is this dropped? because the last update is 1 month ago...
I liked it. Enjoyed the characters, the plot, the world, however there was one mild thing that annoyed me. The synopsis, the dialogue at the end makes no sense to my mind, he says "Why, you ask?" When the question beforehand was a do. Anyway still liked the novel, and you should still defo give it a try.
I really enjoy the story so far (I read 40 Chapters in 2 days)I am just afraid the Author dropped it can someone enlighten me if there are going to be new chapters
Ahh😢 don't like the romance tag, hope its just something that happens at the end of the novel.
I really like this story[img=recommend]~~~~ I just want the author to release more chapters~~~~[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love this book... The author needs to do some work on the characters though. But, I like the story in general, especially mc's class, it sounds unique.
umm, man cryo I read some starting chapters and it is good, so this will go in my library, and keep the updating stable. hmm and will there be gore and torture in future.
Reveal Spoiler ~~~~~~ Absolute banger [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] highly recommended
Interesting novel first read. I could tell it already has a defined plot and has a good flow of how the story will go. I also like the tone of the story. It's very formal, as well as the complexity. Will keep on reading.
original novel, good pace and new system. the protagonist very well done. Good release rate. Up to 50 no grammar/syntax errors.I hope you continue to update it more quickly
Now this is a unique story. first time i have seen a merchant as a main character. Don't disappoint me by writing $#@t[img=recommend]
I've read up to chap 10 and I gotta ask this before he goes any further, is going to become stronger? I mean there's SS rank talents on the left, EX rank talents on the right, and pretty sure the leader of blue team is SSS rank talent.
a banger novel what more can I say?... especially the concept is good and fun to read
Around 10 chapters Honestly I'm a sucker for lit-rpgs so I gave this a shot, I have to say I got quickly disappointed. The author goes with the old trope of making our protagonist some sort of omni-competent super handsome character fitting in with the archetype of a protagonist who can never do any wrong and never makes any mistakes somehow thinking that's going to make him more relatable to the reader it doesn't. I appreciate the whole idea of being thrown into just a random situation and the cruel moral choices that a person has to make those are understandable in a story especially developing one but then it gets into this whole power and rating system that is given little to no explanation and then automatically just throwing in a multiversal conflict and whole sets of rules and deus ex machina are coming left and right I get the idea of the character trying to take advantage of the situation and I respect a protagonist who does that but I kind of was looking for something a little more on the mercantile side rather than just immediately trying to either rip people off or manipulate people and yes I understand that the real world doesn't work like that there are many people that try to hurt or scam others and there's nothing new about a manipulative protagonist and that in and of itself is not a bad thing but I kind of want to see the internal thoughts of the protagonist in order to find out what's happening here it's just I don't know it's jumping into many directions at once and I can't take it anymore it's both too much and too little to keep track of very little consistency background or really any interesting or compelling characters to follow rather than shallow archetypes of a servant or a master or a thug or random civilian there's nothing here really to keep me interested I have really no comments to the author as it seems to largely be an abandoned novel but to anyone looking to read this to just see what it is don't waste time or any sort of mental space on the series it's not worth it.
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