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The novel has a nice pace and character development, the only issue with the novel is the ending, it was so fast paced that you’d be confused by that’s happening a little bit
ending got rushed names are always changeing , author decided to rush the ending to continue his other work the translatord ed ot every chapter into 2-4 parts to get more money
the ending is really bad and after mc leaves his world it just becomes really random and mc never really faces anything difficult besides the final boss I think the aouthor rushed the book to continue his other work that he started like 10-20 chapters before the book ended , the ending is really shitty we don't get told what happanes after
Reveal Spoiler
MC was about to get corroded by the dark power which would turn him into someone ruthless, fitting of someone titled "Undead God". yet instead trashy plot armor swooped in and completely eliminated the corrosion which caused him to remain a pathetic wimp who'll never have the guts to fully utilise his power. BORING!
start of the paid chapters is at an absolutely horrible spot the chapter right before it has a horrible scene of main character acting as a cheerleader for some random person he doesn't even know for absolutely no reason. that alone made me want to stop reading the book but then you want me to start paying for chapters right after that horrible display. before this I was willing to pay for the chapters remember placement is key.
very interesting book. needs a little editing but nonetheless still very good
mc name is repeated alot and mcs talent charges money for use total garbage how can a talent be a talent if it costs you money to use. dropped after 10 chapters
book is good but the translation TEAM is just greed maxing after around chapter 100 they split chapters into three and if you only read the two chapters a day from the ad usage thats only 2 thirds of a chapter not even a full one which is crazy to put that into perspective
the story is ok,it's mostly the names of mc and his companions that are strange and kind of break the flow,like doggy 1 and 2 for humanoid skeletons, even if yhey weren't it 's just strange, just call them skeleton.
This book just randomly stopped updating 2 days ago, plots decent. Translation is kinda Jankie but ive been enjoying it. Probably wont continue reading if it just doesn’t regularly receive chapters.
slow plot development, lots of unnecessary explanation on MCs action which could have been brief a.k.a. info dump,
There’s a hint of an interesting story here but it’s held back by the writing, the translation, the world-building, the system, and the characters. Other than those things, it’s okay!
The story and translations are pretty decent until the mid 40 chapters. The author uses 4 different names for the female goblin following the Mc. He also consistently uses the Mcs last name. we have no need for a sir name for novels. It's repetitive and not needed. The story line is pretty decent, but lacks world back ground into the 40s of chapters. This book has hope if the translation errors are fixed.
he keeps repeating the Mc's name over and over. Dean Mckenzie does this Dean Mckenzie does that. It's annoying and repetitive.
Too much focus on stat levels. Characters not developed enough especially the female leads.
The novel has a nice pace and character development, the only issue with the novel is the ending, it was so fast paced that you’d be confused by that’s happening a little bit
ending got rushed names are always changeing , author decided to rush the ending to continue his other work the translatord ed ot every chapter into 2-4 parts to get more money
the ending is really bad and after mc leaves his world it just becomes really random and mc never really faces anything difficult besides the final boss I think the aouthor rushed the book to continue his other work that he started like 10-20 chapters before the book ended , the ending is really shitty we don't get told what happanes after
Reveal Spoiler MC was about to get corroded by the dark power which would turn him into someone ruthless, fitting of someone titled "Undead God". yet instead trashy plot armor swooped in and completely eliminated the corrosion which caused him to remain a pathetic wimp who'll never have the guts to fully utilise his power. BORING!
start of the paid chapters is at an absolutely horrible spot the chapter right before it has a horrible scene of main character acting as a cheerleader for some random person he doesn't even know for absolutely no reason. that alone made me want to stop reading the book but then you want me to start paying for chapters right after that horrible display. before this I was willing to pay for the chapters remember placement is key.
very interesting book. needs a little editing but nonetheless still very good
mc name is repeated alot and mcs talent charges money for use total garbage how can a talent be a talent if it costs you money to use. dropped after 10 chapters
book is good but the translation TEAM is just greed maxing after around chapter 100 they split chapters into three and if you only read the two chapters a day from the ad usage thats only 2 thirds of a chapter not even a full one which is crazy to put that into perspective
the story is ok,it's mostly the names of mc and his companions that are strange and kind of break the flow,like doggy 1 and 2 for humanoid skeletons, even if yhey weren't it 's just strange, just call them skeleton.
This book just randomly stopped updating 2 days ago, plots decent. Translation is kinda Jankie but ive been enjoying it. Probably wont continue reading if it just doesn’t regularly receive chapters.
slow plot development, lots of unnecessary explanation on MCs action which could have been brief a.k.a. info dump,
There’s a hint of an interesting story here but it’s held back by the writing, the translation, the world-building, the system, and the characters. Other than those things, it’s okay!
The story and translations are pretty decent until the mid 40 chapters. The author uses 4 different names for the female goblin following the Mc. He also consistently uses the Mcs last name. we have no need for a sir name for novels. It's repetitive and not needed. The story line is pretty decent, but lacks world back ground into the 40s of chapters. This book has hope if the translation errors are fixed.
he keeps repeating the Mc's name over and over. Dean Mckenzie does this Dean Mckenzie does that. It's annoying and repetitive.
Too much focus on stat levels. Characters not developed enough especially the female leads.