Reviews of Lords Online: Kingdom-building MMORPG by Copycat_Writer - Webnovel

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Karol_Tatarczyk

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6mth
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Arthur_Merja

The story reads like an outline and skips ahead. The abilities and items randomly appear without gaining them. Not a smooth read. The premise seems to be an enjoyable one though.

1yr
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Dsk95
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I have read upto 8 chapters and couldn't go beyond that. the story is going so fast without any connection

1yr
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Outback_Gamer

I read up to chapter 14 or so. so I'm not sure if it gets better, I may retry this and change my review in the future.My main issues is that it's too fast, the build times and resources gathering seems non existent. he seems to get a combat skill out of nowhere in chapter 12 without explanation. he just seems to be able to do everything and anything without weakness.My final issue is the details of the area like for example, the first village he comes across has no good description of its layout yet in a battle it seems to have walls that need seige towers to assault and a moat with only a population of 200.

1yr
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rightoredye

Wow, what an interesting main character, I don't typically read videogame type novels, but this was a fun ride. Can't wait to see what's next.

1yr
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MBU_Overlord_6594

Am not a big fan of game novels but this book just changed my mind.I love the story concept and the way it's narrated.Great work of art by another legend in the making.Keep the chapters coming.

1yr
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Darja_Renen

Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment and I took a liking in Aizen, I can say he is a well written character. I genuinely enjoyed the story. 10/10. In library it goes!

1yr
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vetlog

It was good, but too short. This is nice. Similar to typical game as usual but still excellent.

1yr
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Silvia62

nice plot but the story it's too rushed, keep up the good work.

1yr
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DummyOfPast

It's 7 out of 10 novel, not good but not bad either. It has good potential if the author edits some mistakes.Still, it's good for newbie reader...

1yr
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Ninestar619_5803

This book will be the best indeed. A story that is worth reading from all that is full of struggles, battles, challenges, and betrayals. This story is truly amazing. The plot setting, the world-building, and the character designs all are burning in the story as it encourages to go on more. GREAT BOOK AUTHOR, KEEP IT UP!

1yr
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1stDrunkenImmortal

I don’t know if it’s any good but I dropped it as soon as I saw he picked regressor as his name. Like it won’t be to hard to think that the guy with regressor as his name is actually a regressor. It’s like one novel I read that a regressor picked time traveler as his name.

1yr
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MiasmaLotus

story is way too rushed and confusing to keep track of it all.

1yr
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Laplace_Knight

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1yr
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Karol_Tatarczyk

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6mth
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Arthur_Merja

The story reads like an outline and skips ahead. The abilities and items randomly appear without gaining them. Not a smooth read. The premise seems to be an enjoyable one though.

1yr
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Dsk95
LV 13 Badge

I have read upto 8 chapters and couldn't go beyond that. the story is going so fast without any connection

1yr
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Outback_Gamer

I read up to chapter 14 or so. so I'm not sure if it gets better, I may retry this and change my review in the future.My main issues is that it's too fast, the build times and resources gathering seems non existent. he seems to get a combat skill out of nowhere in chapter 12 without explanation. he just seems to be able to do everything and anything without weakness.My final issue is the details of the area like for example, the first village he comes across has no good description of its layout yet in a battle it seems to have walls that need seige towers to assault and a moat with only a population of 200.

1yr
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rightoredye

Wow, what an interesting main character, I don't typically read videogame type novels, but this was a fun ride. Can't wait to see what's next.

1yr
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MBU_Overlord_6594

Am not a big fan of game novels but this book just changed my mind.I love the story concept and the way it's narrated.Great work of art by another legend in the making.Keep the chapters coming.

1yr
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Darja_Renen

Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment and I took a liking in Aizen, I can say he is a well written character. I genuinely enjoyed the story. 10/10. In library it goes!

1yr
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vetlog

It was good, but too short. This is nice. Similar to typical game as usual but still excellent.

1yr
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Silvia62

nice plot but the story it's too rushed, keep up the good work.

1yr
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DummyOfPast

It's 7 out of 10 novel, not good but not bad either. It has good potential if the author edits some mistakes.Still, it's good for newbie reader...

1yr
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Ninestar619_5803

This book will be the best indeed. A story that is worth reading from all that is full of struggles, battles, challenges, and betrayals. This story is truly amazing. The plot setting, the world-building, and the character designs all are burning in the story as it encourages to go on more. GREAT BOOK AUTHOR, KEEP IT UP!

1yr
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1stDrunkenImmortal

I don’t know if it’s any good but I dropped it as soon as I saw he picked regressor as his name. Like it won’t be to hard to think that the guy with regressor as his name is actually a regressor. It’s like one novel I read that a regressor picked time traveler as his name.

1yr
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MiasmaLotus

story is way too rushed and confusing to keep track of it all.

1yr
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Laplace_Knight

....,.......................,.....,.....

1yr
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