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๐๐๐ฒ , ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐๐ง'๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ฉ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐ญ'๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ซ๐๐๐ข๐๐ฅ๐. ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐จ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ข๐ฆ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง ๐จ๐ซ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐. ๐๐จ, ๐'๐ฆ ๐๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ, ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐๐ฌ, ๐๐๐ง๐ ๐, ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฌ. ๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ, ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐'๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ( ๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ง๐๐ฆ๐: ๐๐ฏ๐_๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐_) ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ. ๐๐๐ง'๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐๐๐ฌ๐ญ, ๐๐ฏ๐.
Itโs average, the only thing that makes is average is that everything is predictable in this story, itโs missing a wow factor, however, as a startup story for new readers this could be great. Thatโs why although itโs not my cup of tea, itโs not bad.
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This is my 2nd book by the author Treein. I only read the free chapters to see how I would like the story because sci fi tags on WebNovel seem to be a hit or miss for me. But I wasn't disappointed!! Yuka tries to be low key. I get why and all, but I wonder how long she'll be able to keep the facade ๐๐ Need to read more!
Another great book by Treein, and with the added bonus of tying into the universe of other books. Super read, really enjoyed it. Thank you!
Fun characters all around. The main character was especially well written since it is a delicate balancing act between being very skilled but apathetic towards most things. There is great humor as well as action scenes. The story has a steady progression with information slowly being revealed as the FMC learns it. Also ends positively. Only two negatives were grammar, spelling and pronoun errors for characters occasionally (needs editing) and some contrived scenes that had to happen for the plot. Neither take away from story and donโt impact it much since things are still easy enough to follow.
Docked a tiny bit for pronoun issues. Other than that, only a few typos, so not bad at all. I actually really enjoyed this story. It's a mecha fight full of fun. It's definitely worth a read. Now, I'll have to check out some of the author's other books.
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very good stories two for 1 same people differant universes love it time to re read it
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This book is very interesting but lack a certain sense of excitement. The author is pretty good with the English language but I canโt quite put my finger on it but somethingโs missing. When I figure it out I will comment.
This story was really well-written. It answered the most pressing questions well and it was interesting from beginning to end.
The overall story was well developed and was evenly paced. There was a start and a conclusion and it wasnโt dragged out. If you like science fiction futuristic stories this book is a good read.
I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters are well developed and the world-building ist solid.
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Love this story so far ๐ very interesting FL and storyline that keeps the attention at every line. Cannot wait to read more โบ๏ธ
Great writing, fun plot line, and the thing I like the most, there were things that made me laugh uproariously. Author, thanks for your hard work.
Interesting story so far, the FL is fiesty, daring and strong. Funny trope of wanting a lazy life but keep being pulled into crazy situations. All set in the interstellar era which I love.
Good story. Something different from the usual romance. I wonder how the author created such a futuristic novel. Very imaginative. Tganks author,
๐๐๐ฒ , ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐๐ง'๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ฉ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐ญ'๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ซ๐๐๐ข๐๐ฅ๐. ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐จ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ข๐ฆ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง ๐จ๐ซ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐. ๐๐จ, ๐'๐ฆ ๐๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ, ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐๐ฌ, ๐๐๐ง๐ ๐, ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฌ. ๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ, ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐'๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ( ๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ง๐๐ฆ๐: ๐๐ฏ๐_๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐_) ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ. ๐๐๐ง'๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐๐๐ฌ๐ญ, ๐๐ฏ๐.
Itโs average, the only thing that makes is average is that everything is predictable in this story, itโs missing a wow factor, however, as a startup story for new readers this could be great. Thatโs why although itโs not my cup of tea, itโs not bad.
Reveal Spoiler This is my 2nd book by the author Treein. I only read the free chapters to see how I would like the story because sci fi tags on WebNovel seem to be a hit or miss for me. But I wasn't disappointed!! Yuka tries to be low key. I get why and all, but I wonder how long she'll be able to keep the facade ๐๐ Need to read more!
Another great book by Treein, and with the added bonus of tying into the universe of other books. Super read, really enjoyed it. Thank you!
Fun characters all around. The main character was especially well written since it is a delicate balancing act between being very skilled but apathetic towards most things. There is great humor as well as action scenes. The story has a steady progression with information slowly being revealed as the FMC learns it. Also ends positively. Only two negatives were grammar, spelling and pronoun errors for characters occasionally (needs editing) and some contrived scenes that had to happen for the plot. Neither take away from story and donโt impact it much since things are still easy enough to follow.
Docked a tiny bit for pronoun issues. Other than that, only a few typos, so not bad at all. I actually really enjoyed this story. It's a mecha fight full of fun. It's definitely worth a read. Now, I'll have to check out some of the author's other books.
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very good stories two for 1 same people differant universes love it time to re read it
Reveal Spoiler This book is very interesting but lack a certain sense of excitement. The author is pretty good with the English language but I canโt quite put my finger on it but somethingโs missing. When I figure it out I will comment.
This story was really well-written. It answered the most pressing questions well and it was interesting from beginning to end.
The overall story was well developed and was evenly paced. There was a start and a conclusion and it wasnโt dragged out. If you like science fiction futuristic stories this book is a good read.
I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters are well developed and the world-building ist solid.
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Love this story so far ๐ very interesting FL and storyline that keeps the attention at every line. Cannot wait to read more โบ๏ธ
Great writing, fun plot line, and the thing I like the most, there were things that made me laugh uproariously. Author, thanks for your hard work.
Interesting story so far, the FL is fiesty, daring and strong. Funny trope of wanting a lazy life but keep being pulled into crazy situations. All set in the interstellar era which I love.
Good story. Something different from the usual romance. I wonder how the author created such a futuristic novel. Very imaginative. Tganks author,