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AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL IS GOLD. AUTHOR WILL BUFFY BECOMES LUCIFER GIRL.FOR 3RD UNIVERSE BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER AND THEN GRIMM AND CHARME AND MEN IN BLACK MOVIES AND FARSCAPE..THE AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR AN AWESOME NOVEL STORY. THANK YOU
I like it a lot, good character writing usw. Just a personal "issue" that there is no harem, not a lot just a max. of three or four would be fine, but thats just a thought no real critic. What I don´t like is how WEAK the Archangel species is I mean freaking ARCHANGEL in comics and other shows there are the PEAK. Still I can understand to make her not so OP from the beginning. Oh and please more smut, like MORE thx
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Is there an image of Lucifer's fangs? Are they Hellsing Alucard fangs or others?
I probably already reviewed this story before but I like it a lot and wish you could restart it or rewrite it I am reading your other stories and loving them as well
Heyoo, just wanted to let you know after reading this and waiting for a few months, if you'll ever come back to this? Also good job with the writing lately, and good luck with future writing!
I hope this continues for it has great potential and I hope it continues to the next world to see where it goes
Probably one of the most well written fanfics I’ve read. Honestly don’t know where to find good ones. So thanks for the chapters
What happened to wind saga I was looking forward to that then all of a sudden you switch to Harry Potter like that’s not been done a thousand times
I LOVE the book but the only problem I have with it is that the chapter's/pages are WAY too short if you could change that I'd appreciate it but if you can't dont't worry about it. Anyway it's a really good book and don't listen to haters.
Writing is really good, plot feels good. Mc personality is interesting.- mc has way too many powers . and (species)- the TVD immortality (vamirism) feels like unnecceary- when there is too many ablities it takes too much time to try to explain all of them [ the balance between mc abilities explaining and plot could be better.]- (blood pressure starts to rise when reading all about mc op/too many powers and abilities)[in my opinion it really would be better if mc had only one Race/species and less powers]
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a bit worried on how its gonna play out with other worlds and all that stuff but the story development is very i guess addicting? personally i was zoned in and the writing quality is really good too the back ground could have been improved it was kind of typical "my dad died and left it for me" simple but it works i guess only really seen enough of Alice and luci to get the personality understanding other characters im unsure of
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Reviewed the other so it’s only fair I do the same on this one.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Love the story so far just wondering when the next chapter will be out as your other stories are equally good and they have been updated three times while this one hasn't been tuched
AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL IS GOLD. AUTHOR WILL BUFFY BECOMES LUCIFER GIRL.FOR 3RD UNIVERSE BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER AND THEN GRIMM AND CHARME AND MEN IN BLACK MOVIES AND FARSCAPE..THE AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR AN AWESOME NOVEL STORY. THANK YOU
I like it a lot, good character writing usw. Just a personal "issue" that there is no harem, not a lot just a max. of three or four would be fine, but thats just a thought no real critic. What I don´t like is how WEAK the Archangel species is I mean freaking ARCHANGEL in comics and other shows there are the PEAK. Still I can understand to make her not so OP from the beginning. Oh and please more smut, like MORE thx
Reveal Spoiler Is there an image of Lucifer's fangs? Are they Hellsing Alucard fangs or others?
I probably already reviewed this story before but I like it a lot and wish you could restart it or rewrite it I am reading your other stories and loving them as well
Heyoo, just wanted to let you know after reading this and waiting for a few months, if you'll ever come back to this? Also good job with the writing lately, and good luck with future writing!
I hope this continues for it has great potential and I hope it continues to the next world to see where it goes
Probably one of the most well written fanfics I’ve read. Honestly don’t know where to find good ones. So thanks for the chapters
What happened to wind saga I was looking forward to that then all of a sudden you switch to Harry Potter like that’s not been done a thousand times
I LOVE the book but the only problem I have with it is that the chapter's/pages are WAY too short if you could change that I'd appreciate it but if you can't dont't worry about it. Anyway it's a really good book and don't listen to haters.
Writing is really good, plot feels good. Mc personality is interesting.- mc has way too many powers . and (species)- the TVD immortality (vamirism) feels like unnecceary- when there is too many ablities it takes too much time to try to explain all of them [ the balance between mc abilities explaining and plot could be better.]- (blood pressure starts to rise when reading all about mc op/too many powers and abilities)[in my opinion it really would be better if mc had only one Race/species and less powers]
Reveal Spoiler a bit worried on how its gonna play out with other worlds and all that stuff but the story development is very i guess addicting? personally i was zoned in and the writing quality is really good too the back ground could have been improved it was kind of typical "my dad died and left it for me" simple but it works i guess only really seen enough of Alice and luci to get the personality understanding other characters im unsure of
Reveal Spoiler Reviewed the other so it’s only fair I do the same on this one.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Love the story so far just wondering when the next chapter will be out as your other stories are equally good and they have been updated three times while this one hasn't been tuched