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pretty meh, but for a legacies/tvd/originals fanfic, its an okay read. but like them, ut has glaring flaws, too much bashing (landon's to be exact, especially when their is no point to, because writers wrote him to be hope's elena and he did surpass her in terms of usability/character.) breaking the world power structure by introducing too much bs. it should have been like instead of becoming op, she needed to get points by changing/not changing the story and when she completes the world, then she can jump, not by being a wish fullfillment wannabe. its not as bad as introducing lucifer in tvd, lie what the hell, writer should just say it out loud he is trying to compensate for his nonexistent d**k. another problem is fmc's existence is kinda pointless other than f**king hope since plot remains the same(ish), no creativity. i short, if you have nothing to read, this fic wont be the last thing on the list, but, don't expect much (which i did seeing the lack of some other flaws, 1 star reviews or just the effort author put in writing words.) while on that note, author doesn't proofread enough to remove the redundancy in his words/sentences.
What do Talia's fangs look like? I want an image so I can really imagine what they look like.
awesome in every way, just, why "daddy" and not "mommy"? I don´t know why but for me personally it would make more sense. Also please MORE smut. MORE and also more chapter please
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Love the new cover picture! Also for those reading that as a review, this is one of my favorite authors, highly recommend!
Can’t lie I am a big fan of your writing.........................Not just here but also in wattpad So, best of luck🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 This story is the best......Love it and hope you update soon☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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It seems interesting, sadly I don't know anything about the first two worlds he visits, I will read it when they find more chapters of DANMACHI
The book is great author . I would however appreciate it if you would stop neglecting it and start updating regularly like old times.I know you have been focusing more on Gwen than Talia but we like Talia more so pliz more updates
I think you r doing a wonderful job with this fanfic always leaves me wanting the next chapter I do hope to learn more about mcs background like is there a reason she has the last name of the devil
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not my cup of tee mc is a futa milly alcock, the plot is not realy like the name of the novel leads on the uniqueness is the futa part the travel part comes first after 55 chapters and the worlds are not realy interesting to me more for female/they,them audience TVD legacys and shadowhunters
It was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more please for both stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??!!!!!!!100!
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I will preface this by saying this is a good story! If you are looking at reviews to see if you should read this or not then yes read it especially if you like an OP MC. Despite this being a good story I do have some issues with the story telling. Spoilers ahead. It annoys me how much the author keeps emphasizing how much they hate Landon. I get it!! You dont need to mention it so much especially when you make EVERY interaction with the character as toxic as possible. If I could offer any piece of advice towards this then I would say that the author missed a huge opportunity here. If you hated the character so much why not change it? Who says you have to do EVERYTHING as it happens in the show? You even have the convenient excuse of butterfly effects of a new character being thrown into mix. You could have written the character in a way that made you and your audience happy. The constant persecution of the character just feels like the story was written to spite him instead of telling the story of your OC. The story is great. And while I want to offer more constructive feedback on other aspects of the story like the pace at which the MC's relationships escalate. The MC is cool with whoever you like most from the story and barely acknowledges anyone else. She doesnt feel like she is part of their story at all. She feels like an outsider who just came to bang Hope. But I feel like it was done in a way where the MC had to get in there before Landon. Again, it just feels like since his name was mentioned in the story everything just became about keeping good things away from him.
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I like your story. pick a dragon from dnd and turn it in to a dragon girl in dc u
great story but can I suggest an idea for your next book if you ever make one? what about reincarnated as Gwen 10
I really love this Fanfic Novel of yours, every single minute I keep on thinking as to when ur next update will come! I really can't wait for the updates for this one! once again I REALLY LOVE U AND UR THIS FF! THX
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pretty meh, but for a legacies/tvd/originals fanfic, its an okay read. but like them, ut has glaring flaws, too much bashing (landon's to be exact, especially when their is no point to, because writers wrote him to be hope's elena and he did surpass her in terms of usability/character.) breaking the world power structure by introducing too much bs. it should have been like instead of becoming op, she needed to get points by changing/not changing the story and when she completes the world, then she can jump, not by being a wish fullfillment wannabe. its not as bad as introducing lucifer in tvd, lie what the hell, writer should just say it out loud he is trying to compensate for his nonexistent d**k. another problem is fmc's existence is kinda pointless other than f**king hope since plot remains the same(ish), no creativity. i short, if you have nothing to read, this fic wont be the last thing on the list, but, don't expect much (which i did seeing the lack of some other flaws, 1 star reviews or just the effort author put in writing words.) while on that note, author doesn't proofread enough to remove the redundancy in his words/sentences.
What do Talia's fangs look like? I want an image so I can really imagine what they look like.
awesome in every way, just, why "daddy" and not "mommy"? I don´t know why but for me personally it would make more sense. Also please MORE smut. MORE and also more chapter please
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Reveal Spoiler Love the new cover picture! Also for those reading that as a review, this is one of my favorite authors, highly recommend!
Can’t lie I am a big fan of your writing.........................Not just here but also in wattpad So, best of luck🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 This story is the best......Love it and hope you update soon☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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It seems interesting, sadly I don't know anything about the first two worlds he visits, I will read it when they find more chapters of DANMACHI
The book is great author . I would however appreciate it if you would stop neglecting it and start updating regularly like old times.I know you have been focusing more on Gwen than Talia but we like Talia more so pliz more updates
I think you r doing a wonderful job with this fanfic always leaves me wanting the next chapter I do hope to learn more about mcs background like is there a reason she has the last name of the devil
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not my cup of tee mc is a futa milly alcock, the plot is not realy like the name of the novel leads on the uniqueness is the futa part the travel part comes first after 55 chapters and the worlds are not realy interesting to me more for female/they,them audience TVD legacys and shadowhunters
It was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more please for both stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??!!!!!!!100!
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I will preface this by saying this is a good story! If you are looking at reviews to see if you should read this or not then yes read it especially if you like an OP MC. Despite this being a good story I do have some issues with the story telling. Spoilers ahead. It annoys me how much the author keeps emphasizing how much they hate Landon. I get it!! You dont need to mention it so much especially when you make EVERY interaction with the character as toxic as possible. If I could offer any piece of advice towards this then I would say that the author missed a huge opportunity here. If you hated the character so much why not change it? Who says you have to do EVERYTHING as it happens in the show? You even have the convenient excuse of butterfly effects of a new character being thrown into mix. You could have written the character in a way that made you and your audience happy. The constant persecution of the character just feels like the story was written to spite him instead of telling the story of your OC. The story is great. And while I want to offer more constructive feedback on other aspects of the story like the pace at which the MC's relationships escalate. The MC is cool with whoever you like most from the story and barely acknowledges anyone else. She doesnt feel like she is part of their story at all. She feels like an outsider who just came to bang Hope. But I feel like it was done in a way where the MC had to get in there before Landon. Again, it just feels like since his name was mentioned in the story everything just became about keeping good things away from him.
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I like your story. pick a dragon from dnd and turn it in to a dragon girl in dc u
great story but can I suggest an idea for your next book if you ever make one? what about reincarnated as Gwen 10
I really love this Fanfic Novel of yours, every single minute I keep on thinking as to when ur next update will come! I really can't wait for the updates for this one! once again I REALLY LOVE U AND UR THIS FF! THX