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Eric_Bodewig

Translation, updates, character design and world background are good. I mean, its a fanfic, if these four are bad it means that the author shoved in tons of useless OC's or knew nothing about the original works the fanfic is based on. Everything is good but the writing is bad, the story reads like a broken record and the author desperately tries to add foreshadowing into their work... It didn't really hold well. Props to the author, the story was planned out and doesn't involve the classic endless face slapping tropes but events are too disjointed and lack real story telling. Nearl 100 chaps in and all I read were out of sync short stories that came about without reason. There is no direction for the story, an MC who is a side character could work IF the fic has a goal but! Thw goals of the MC are not really clear, he shuffles between 2 worlds and has different goals for each. His motivations are all over the place which ia what allows him to act various roles but with no clear personality the MC just turns into a deus ex machina. If something crazy occured, its because of the MC, how? Next chap will be a full explanation of how it happened. What irks me is the author writes about trying to improve his writing but he follows the same formula continously. Though since this has 4k chapters, I'll stick to it and see, maybe his writing will get better but if it doesn't I'll write a comment about it.

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Zeikfried

I don't see any locked chapters, but then again I'm only at around chapter 1000 out of 4000. I can't imagine reaching the locked chapters without getting sick of the story first. You can binge the first few hundred chapters like a single novel, but after that it's episodic and definitely not good for reading in large batches. Don't trust anyone who says this is terrible because the protagonist isn't behaving the way they want. They want a traditional gary-stu. Schiller is a mentally ill gary-stu, which is a very loudly broadcasted motif in the early chapters. This makes the story better. Not worse. The fact the DC world and the Marvel world is slowly improving compared to their canon isn't because of some deus-ex-machina protag who saves everybody, but rather because Schiller forces everyone to address their mental issues even if it's on a more superficial level sometimes. And thus the author takes liberal interpretations of the characters' motivations (which is par for the course for canonical movie makers, cartoonists, and comic writers of DC/Marvel). 100% you're going to run into an episode you don't like as a result. Either because you don't agree with the tone the author uses in contrast to the canon material or the underlying origins of canonical plot-devices. For me it's symbiotes and Alfred, but I still say this is the best DC/Marvel fanfic I've ever read.

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LesendeTaube

Seriously? You sell chapters of a TRANSLATED FANFICTION?

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But
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Locked chapters in a fanfic is down bad. Locked chapters in a fanfic you don’t even own is just criminal.

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zeruel

Really? lock the chapter in a fanfic??? a fanfic!!!?????

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Darith_Sky

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Mr_Shaboinky

Messiest fanfiction i have read. The story is all over the place.

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shioriyaksha

La mejor historia que he leído aquí, si hay otros parecidos, recomiéndame

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Soothingkiwi

It was really great at first 200-300 chapters, but the communism propaganda began to show up sporadically until it started showing up in your face. I tried to deal with it, but man it was too annoying. If you can deal with communism content, this story is great, well thought out, with organic characters that you can see growth in etc.

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hikigaya4103

Who's the female lead? I read upto 50 chapter and I can only say it is good, now my only question is who is the female lead?

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Mob9_Neam

one of the best fan fic I have ever read, the ree a lot of changes to backstory of superheroes leaning toward soviet or Chinese interest. also some changes made to age of characters or world history of marvel lore. But reading this novel is like reading the joker, the mc is mystery even after 1700 chapters. the layers added is nonsensical yet too much fun. There's comedy, gore, no harem, no romance, but so many twists

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Juanjosefr

Lock chapters in a fanfic, tf? The hell is going on here?

3mth
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n0_cl0ut

Great read. I just want to know if there will be any romance with any of the characters?

3mth
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zakaria_wildan

I just don't understand why we were in DC and Marvel and then moved to the boys. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=Smug][img=disgusted]

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Lakshya_Agrawal_6088

you know i have read the older translation which was dropped and it was my biggest disappointment that it was dropped but now I got to know that someone is translating it again and have already done more than 1000 chapters I'm very happy ..... THANK YOU[img=update][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

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Zelrien_Walker

I love it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Xander_Paz

es buena premisa, pero el desarrollo meh. mala traducción mucha prisa al sacar capitulos, creo que quedaría bien con un buena edición y adaptación creando algo nuevo en base a esta historia

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zxxxx00

The storylines is so messy in batman arc, so many incorrect names such as Kopolt,Steven Strange,Sherer, In marvel arc the ancient one become Mage king, Supreme Magician.Damn are we in black clover, Clearly the author didn't even research about batman series. And translator did not even bother fixing every mistake in some chapters.

3mth
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Jati_Pradja

copy paste + google translate = profit .

3mth
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Humbuub

Locked chapters on fanfic section? With almost 4k chapters at that?

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MrJust

How is this legal? it's fanfiction but it has all the chapters after the 40th one locked

4mth
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Yu3i
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I’ve almost breached the 2,000 chapters mark! The plot is captivating and the character development is amazing! Schiller’s character is so interesting! You can tell that his character wasn’t made up of parts that were added later on, as everything is explained well and consistent. It’s there for a reason, and the story flows smoothly. The only thing that bothers me is that sometimes the characters’ gender gets mixed up. Although it doesn’t happen as often in the later chapters-from what I can infer it’s progressively getting better- it still happens sometimes, which cause me to freeze up and be stuck on reading one paragraph for a few minutes. Overall, it’s a captivating novel that garners and entraps my attention. I love the plot twists, schemes, and coincidences in this novel. Great work Author-nim! (I want to use an honorific, but I get very frustrated with genders so I just used a gender-neutral one I knew… I could also use -san but, eh?)

6mth
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Jimmy_Kibble

This book is actually the best book on here okay maybe the 4th and I’ve read a lot of books on here

6mth
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To_m1
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best time I had reading a fanfic, up there with reading SCOG and suicide hunter. It has it's emotional, humourous, and deep moments, definitely worth the read, every arc is interesting and introduced lots of new things and interactions.

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Carlos_2757

Así imagino al protagonista, no se si tienen mejores :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Joaoterminus3110

It's good I read 200 chapters. but in this part of the story the protagonist seems like an extra and almost never appears.............................

9mth
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Ocoz
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I don't give reviews at all really but this story is phenomenal. One thing I can happily say is I'm glad I found this story when it is 1000+ chapters. I binged read 200 in a day and definitely of rarer quality on for the fanfiction section. I suggest giving this story a chance because it would be a regret not to.

9mth
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7rox
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Someone has already translated like 200+ chapters of this novel. It was pretty good, and I think it was called ‘In marvel and dc with a chat group’ or something. The novel is pretty chill.

9mth
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Mayuri_026

It seems I am the first to review. The story and translation is good enough for leisure reading. So many updates in just one hour, author-sab were you stockpiling all the chapters. Anyways I cant check your profile.

10mth
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Eric_Bodewig

Translation, updates, character design and world background are good. I mean, its a fanfic, if these four are bad it means that the author shoved in tons of useless OC's or knew nothing about the original works the fanfic is based on. Everything is good but the writing is bad, the story reads like a broken record and the author desperately tries to add foreshadowing into their work... It didn't really hold well. Props to the author, the story was planned out and doesn't involve the classic endless face slapping tropes but events are too disjointed and lack real story telling. Nearl 100 chaps in and all I read were out of sync short stories that came about without reason. There is no direction for the story, an MC who is a side character could work IF the fic has a goal but! Thw goals of the MC are not really clear, he shuffles between 2 worlds and has different goals for each. His motivations are all over the place which ia what allows him to act various roles but with no clear personality the MC just turns into a deus ex machina. If something crazy occured, its because of the MC, how? Next chap will be a full explanation of how it happened. What irks me is the author writes about trying to improve his writing but he follows the same formula continously. Though since this has 4k chapters, I'll stick to it and see, maybe his writing will get better but if it doesn't I'll write a comment about it.

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Zeikfried

I don't see any locked chapters, but then again I'm only at around chapter 1000 out of 4000. I can't imagine reaching the locked chapters without getting sick of the story first. You can binge the first few hundred chapters like a single novel, but after that it's episodic and definitely not good for reading in large batches. Don't trust anyone who says this is terrible because the protagonist isn't behaving the way they want. They want a traditional gary-stu. Schiller is a mentally ill gary-stu, which is a very loudly broadcasted motif in the early chapters. This makes the story better. Not worse. The fact the DC world and the Marvel world is slowly improving compared to their canon isn't because of some deus-ex-machina protag who saves everybody, but rather because Schiller forces everyone to address their mental issues even if it's on a more superficial level sometimes. And thus the author takes liberal interpretations of the characters' motivations (which is par for the course for canonical movie makers, cartoonists, and comic writers of DC/Marvel). 100% you're going to run into an episode you don't like as a result. Either because you don't agree with the tone the author uses in contrast to the canon material or the underlying origins of canonical plot-devices. For me it's symbiotes and Alfred, but I still say this is the best DC/Marvel fanfic I've ever read.

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LesendeTaube

Seriously? You sell chapters of a TRANSLATED FANFICTION?

18d
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But
LV 14 Badge

Locked chapters in a fanfic is down bad. Locked chapters in a fanfic you don’t even own is just criminal.

1mth
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zeruel

Really? lock the chapter in a fanfic??? a fanfic!!!?????

1mth
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Darith_Sky

[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

1mth
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Mr_Shaboinky

Messiest fanfiction i have read. The story is all over the place.

2mth
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shioriyaksha

La mejor historia que he leído aquí, si hay otros parecidos, recomiéndame

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2mth
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Soothingkiwi

It was really great at first 200-300 chapters, but the communism propaganda began to show up sporadically until it started showing up in your face. I tried to deal with it, but man it was too annoying. If you can deal with communism content, this story is great, well thought out, with organic characters that you can see growth in etc.

2mth
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hikigaya4103

Who's the female lead? I read upto 50 chapter and I can only say it is good, now my only question is who is the female lead?

2mth
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Mob9_Neam

one of the best fan fic I have ever read, the ree a lot of changes to backstory of superheroes leaning toward soviet or Chinese interest. also some changes made to age of characters or world history of marvel lore. But reading this novel is like reading the joker, the mc is mystery even after 1700 chapters. the layers added is nonsensical yet too much fun. There's comedy, gore, no harem, no romance, but so many twists

2mth
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Juanjosefr

Lock chapters in a fanfic, tf? The hell is going on here?

3mth
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n0_cl0ut

Great read. I just want to know if there will be any romance with any of the characters?

3mth
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zakaria_wildan

I just don't understand why we were in DC and Marvel and then moved to the boys. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=Smug][img=disgusted]

3mth
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Lakshya_Agrawal_6088

you know i have read the older translation which was dropped and it was my biggest disappointment that it was dropped but now I got to know that someone is translating it again and have already done more than 1000 chapters I'm very happy ..... THANK YOU[img=update][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

3mth
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Zelrien_Walker

I love it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Xander_Paz

es buena premisa, pero el desarrollo meh. mala traducción mucha prisa al sacar capitulos, creo que quedaría bien con un buena edición y adaptación creando algo nuevo en base a esta historia

3mth
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zxxxx00

The storylines is so messy in batman arc, so many incorrect names such as Kopolt,Steven Strange,Sherer, In marvel arc the ancient one become Mage king, Supreme Magician.Damn are we in black clover, Clearly the author didn't even research about batman series. And translator did not even bother fixing every mistake in some chapters.

3mth
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Jati_Pradja

copy paste + google translate = profit .

3mth
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Humbuub

Locked chapters on fanfic section? With almost 4k chapters at that?

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4mth
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MrJust

How is this legal? it's fanfiction but it has all the chapters after the 40th one locked

4mth
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Yu3i
LV 14 Badge

I’ve almost breached the 2,000 chapters mark! The plot is captivating and the character development is amazing! Schiller’s character is so interesting! You can tell that his character wasn’t made up of parts that were added later on, as everything is explained well and consistent. It’s there for a reason, and the story flows smoothly. The only thing that bothers me is that sometimes the characters’ gender gets mixed up. Although it doesn’t happen as often in the later chapters-from what I can infer it’s progressively getting better- it still happens sometimes, which cause me to freeze up and be stuck on reading one paragraph for a few minutes. Overall, it’s a captivating novel that garners and entraps my attention. I love the plot twists, schemes, and coincidences in this novel. Great work Author-nim! (I want to use an honorific, but I get very frustrated with genders so I just used a gender-neutral one I knew… I could also use -san but, eh?)

6mth
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Jimmy_Kibble

This book is actually the best book on here okay maybe the 4th and I’ve read a lot of books on here

6mth
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To_m1
LV 4 Badge

best time I had reading a fanfic, up there with reading SCOG and suicide hunter. It has it's emotional, humourous, and deep moments, definitely worth the read, every arc is interesting and introduced lots of new things and interactions.

8mth
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Carlos_2757

Así imagino al protagonista, no se si tienen mejores :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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8mth
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Joaoterminus3110

It's good I read 200 chapters. but in this part of the story the protagonist seems like an extra and almost never appears.............................

9mth
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Ocoz
LV 14 Badge

I don't give reviews at all really but this story is phenomenal. One thing I can happily say is I'm glad I found this story when it is 1000+ chapters. I binged read 200 in a day and definitely of rarer quality on for the fanfiction section. I suggest giving this story a chance because it would be a regret not to.

9mth
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7rox
LV 4 Badge

Someone has already translated like 200+ chapters of this novel. It was pretty good, and I think it was called ‘In marvel and dc with a chat group’ or something. The novel is pretty chill.

9mth
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Mayuri_026

It seems I am the first to review. The story and translation is good enough for leisure reading. So many updates in just one hour, author-sab were you stockpiling all the chapters. Anyways I cant check your profile.

10mth
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