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novelmeister

I’m changing my previous review of 3 stars to five after reading every chapter available so far. This is quite a good story, and the writing draws you in at every angle. I must admit, the beginning chapters were lackluster, but as time went on the quality improved exponentially. For those who are skeptical on whether or not to read this, be patient. The story gets better. Congratulations author, I’m a difficult person to please. Your novel is a work of art.

6mth
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Gp_Vaa

One of the best fast pacing story. The beginning of the story seem lagging and naive MC is not my taste. But I’m really surprised by how author turned the plot and developed MC. Definitely worthy of time.

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Debbie_Combs_8467

This story is very enjoyable to me. I like the descriptions and the differences between most of the characters (good guys and bad). The world building seems pretty solid as well, so far. I am more than a third of the way in and I still get surprised in a good way on the growth and back story for the MC. I have read many novels here and this one is easily in my top 5.

2mth
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Breckie_Smith

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

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MOTIVATION_BOOSTER

Too much cringey ..... I feel goosebumps at authors's cringeness ... Sigh typical Young Master Face Slapping others... Its too embarassing .. Sigh... dear Author I read first few chaps and honestly I fell face hard from top of mountain to the ground... 😔👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

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WOODD
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There are better books, but this isn't a bad book either................................................................................................

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zxmc_7
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rating for the first 52 ch, I will continue reading when I get some coins and then rereviwe.

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GooseOverlord

Haven’t written one of these in awhile, but Author asked. Chapter release seems stable, but I only started reading the series earlier this month. The story seems to be progressing at a steady pace and shouldn’t be offensive to anyone. Writing quality is generally decent but could use some editing, it’s unfortunate because some plot points get lost in part because the reader second guesses the authors intent at times, for example, a familial relation. The world background could be more robust. Here are the biggest issues, character design is uneven, which is par for the course in Harem stories. Why do these characters like the MC, who are they outside the MC? These questions are answered for some to a certain degree, but not all. I enjoy [Face Slapping] this is the reason I’ve been reading this story, so far it’s been fun. I’m looking forward to the next slap. In short if you enjoy the standard harem and like face slapping then you’ll likely enjoy this book.

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Alex_Booker_5216

this is a very good book I'm liking all the chapters that I have read so far

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aaaninja

I can't say enough good things about this story. It's a great read and a fun story. I had seen this book several times initially, and I hadn't picked it up, but I am glad I did. Nothing more to say than give it a try!

1mth
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unBoludoMas

author in the end thea becomes the mc's wife?

1mth
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Harishankar_KR

it's a nice one to read ... i God some curiosity throughout the noval

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Mav_eriks

A good read with a nice character development. Really like the pace at which the MC's mentality is changed from the naive boy at the beginning to becoming more mature. Keep up the good work and looking forward to more chaps

2mth
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kallams21

Perfect fantasy story to take reader into different worlds with imagination

2mth
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Agbaje_Rukayat_1550

the storyline is so good and funny 🤣 I love the MC his development and mentality is great. thanks to writer for bringing the MC to live and making my day more enjoyable 😄😌

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Arktear
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So, I’ve been following this one for a while now and I honestly really like it. I have a hard time keeping interest with my ADHD, yet this one I am always looking forward to the next chapter. The main character isn’t the typical (hide my strength forever) he uses his cards wisely when needed, and will put you in your place if it benefits him. Definitely try this piece of art, it deserves your time.

4mth
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Kirito_Asuna_0279

Haven’t read it yet so I can’t comment on quality, but the name seems pretty similar to “supreme magus”

5mth
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Samuel_Omata

I love the story so far (ch100) though i still don't get how the MC couldn't get a beast storage bag seeing that Lucy's own could hold his beast. that's a bit inconsistent considering how Rich he is I'm very surprised he didn't buy one. i hope the author pays attention to those minor inconsistencies

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Saune_Sunsword

The world building is pretty typical for a cultivation novel. Far too many authors notes for my taste, explaining things that should be done through story telling. A plethora of grammar, missing punctuation, and errant word usage. All of which break emersion and distract the reader from the story. That said This is one of the most entertaining cultivation stories I have read to date. The characters seem to have depth, and interact with each other in a believable manner. The plot so far is moving at a decent pace. The writing quality has improved through the course of the story. Also the author doesn't use the character's "cultivation" as cheep page filler, and many writers of this kind of story bore the reader to sleep with it. I for one am looking forward to reading more of the story.

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kkkkkkkk_kkk

discord link? ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

7mth
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Yajin3004

Like the other novels of this Author, this novel is also really good. You will find action, adventure, fantasy, love, Harem, Magic, Cultivation, character development. The other thing that make me like this novel very much is that Author has mentioned references of various mythologies and he is using various languages like Latin, Sanskrit, Tamil etc. for naming the various Magic spells. I will recommend everyone to read this novel.

7mth
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PeterPan

Hello everyone, I hope you guys enjoy the book. As a reader I know the pain of chapter updates. But I promise you i will regularly update the book. *Bonus chapter will be awarded for reaching Power Stones target and Gifts. *No NTR, *Plenty of face-slapping, funking beautiful girls.

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novelmeister

I’m changing my previous review of 3 stars to five after reading every chapter available so far. This is quite a good story, and the writing draws you in at every angle. I must admit, the beginning chapters were lackluster, but as time went on the quality improved exponentially. For those who are skeptical on whether or not to read this, be patient. The story gets better. Congratulations author, I’m a difficult person to please. Your novel is a work of art.

6mth
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Gp_Vaa

One of the best fast pacing story. The beginning of the story seem lagging and naive MC is not my taste. But I’m really surprised by how author turned the plot and developed MC. Definitely worthy of time.

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5mth
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Debbie_Combs_8467

This story is very enjoyable to me. I like the descriptions and the differences between most of the characters (good guys and bad). The world building seems pretty solid as well, so far. I am more than a third of the way in and I still get surprised in a good way on the growth and back story for the MC. I have read many novels here and this one is easily in my top 5.

2mth
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Breckie_Smith

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

2d
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MOTIVATION_BOOSTER

Too much cringey ..... I feel goosebumps at authors's cringeness ... Sigh typical Young Master Face Slapping others... Its too embarassing .. Sigh... dear Author I read first few chaps and honestly I fell face hard from top of mountain to the ground... 😔👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

12d
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WOODD
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There are better books, but this isn't a bad book either................................................................................................

21d
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zxmc_7
LV 11 Badge

rating for the first 52 ch, I will continue reading when I get some coins and then rereviwe.

24d
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GooseOverlord

Haven’t written one of these in awhile, but Author asked. Chapter release seems stable, but I only started reading the series earlier this month. The story seems to be progressing at a steady pace and shouldn’t be offensive to anyone. Writing quality is generally decent but could use some editing, it’s unfortunate because some plot points get lost in part because the reader second guesses the authors intent at times, for example, a familial relation. The world background could be more robust. Here are the biggest issues, character design is uneven, which is par for the course in Harem stories. Why do these characters like the MC, who are they outside the MC? These questions are answered for some to a certain degree, but not all. I enjoy [Face Slapping] this is the reason I’ve been reading this story, so far it’s been fun. I’m looking forward to the next slap. In short if you enjoy the standard harem and like face slapping then you’ll likely enjoy this book.

24d
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Alex_Booker_5216

this is a very good book I'm liking all the chapters that I have read so far

24d
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aaaninja

I can't say enough good things about this story. It's a great read and a fun story. I had seen this book several times initially, and I hadn't picked it up, but I am glad I did. Nothing more to say than give it a try!

1mth
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unBoludoMas

author in the end thea becomes the mc's wife?

1mth
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Harishankar_KR

it's a nice one to read ... i God some curiosity throughout the noval

Reveal Spoiler
1mth
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Mav_eriks

A good read with a nice character development. Really like the pace at which the MC's mentality is changed from the naive boy at the beginning to becoming more mature. Keep up the good work and looking forward to more chaps

2mth
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kallams21

Perfect fantasy story to take reader into different worlds with imagination

2mth
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Agbaje_Rukayat_1550

the storyline is so good and funny 🤣 I love the MC his development and mentality is great. thanks to writer for bringing the MC to live and making my day more enjoyable 😄😌

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4mth
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Arktear
LV 14 Badge

So, I’ve been following this one for a while now and I honestly really like it. I have a hard time keeping interest with my ADHD, yet this one I am always looking forward to the next chapter. The main character isn’t the typical (hide my strength forever) he uses his cards wisely when needed, and will put you in your place if it benefits him. Definitely try this piece of art, it deserves your time.

4mth
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Kirito_Asuna_0279

Haven’t read it yet so I can’t comment on quality, but the name seems pretty similar to “supreme magus”

5mth
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Samuel_Omata

I love the story so far (ch100) though i still don't get how the MC couldn't get a beast storage bag seeing that Lucy's own could hold his beast. that's a bit inconsistent considering how Rich he is I'm very surprised he didn't buy one. i hope the author pays attention to those minor inconsistencies

Reveal Spoiler
5mth
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Saune_Sunsword

The world building is pretty typical for a cultivation novel. Far too many authors notes for my taste, explaining things that should be done through story telling. A plethora of grammar, missing punctuation, and errant word usage. All of which break emersion and distract the reader from the story. That said This is one of the most entertaining cultivation stories I have read to date. The characters seem to have depth, and interact with each other in a believable manner. The plot so far is moving at a decent pace. The writing quality has improved through the course of the story. Also the author doesn't use the character's "cultivation" as cheep page filler, and many writers of this kind of story bore the reader to sleep with it. I for one am looking forward to reading more of the story.

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7mth
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kkkkkkkk_kkk

discord link? ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

7mth
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Yajin3004

Like the other novels of this Author, this novel is also really good. You will find action, adventure, fantasy, love, Harem, Magic, Cultivation, character development. The other thing that make me like this novel very much is that Author has mentioned references of various mythologies and he is using various languages like Latin, Sanskrit, Tamil etc. for naming the various Magic spells. I will recommend everyone to read this novel.

7mth
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PeterPan

Hello everyone, I hope you guys enjoy the book. As a reader I know the pain of chapter updates. But I promise you i will regularly update the book. *Bonus chapter will be awarded for reaching Power Stones target and Gifts. *No NTR, *Plenty of face-slapping, funking beautiful girls.

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9mth
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