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my goodness take a golden ticket from me! don't stop, I started reading yesterday and haven't been able to stop. great character development and world development too, love the scenes between him and dona too! keep it up author cause you deserve this 5 star approval!
This is the best harem novel I have read as of date. Characters: Mc is an average person who is slowly becoming an elite at what he does. Side characters are definitely deep with their own paths for them too, and I am incredibly vibing with the femal3 characters in there. God do I love Dona. And the fun thing is, it is not even the greatest thing about the book and I generally read to see different characters more than anything. World Building: This here, this is what completely blew my mind. The world is super vast and main part of the novel itself is about world hopping. Love it a lot. The magic systems are also incredibly convincing, and the powers themselves are also amazing. This also made battles really enjoyable. There is more to say but I wont spoil it for you. Plot: Its been years since I actually saw a great Plot Twist. This novel has that, too. Unbelievable for a webnovel. Last time i felt something like that was in Reverend Insanity. Finally, the cherry on top: It has a system but the system is not a crutch for the mc to deal with everything. Its just there as mostly a tone setter and it doesnt even ruin other magic systems in the story. And its the first time I actually felt that the system itself has some deep story behind it and mysteries that are to be delved into. And I honestly want to know too. This is everything I want crystallized into novel form.
It was promising at first but quickly turned to shit, I was so disappointed since I thought I actually found something worthwhile so I made this review out of pure spite
AUTHOR Masterpiece ! But I do have a suggestion at the end I was planning to read this for a while and didnt because I thought it wouldnt be good or some useless control womens mind and make a harem but surprisingly great writing MC is ruthless, and he grows to have ambitions MC also makes mistakes but slowly Reolran helps and corrects him I mean he learns, grows and it a good journey You can see mc growing with time, getting better through fights and not becoming op day 1. I like the struggle and this reminded me on martial world cultivation novel. MC in there also fought for chances, took risks to grow, gained experience through fights Suggestion- Like Reaolran best and I agree dona/yuri are a little annoying I mean she sacrificed a lot for MC, and is a major part of why he is surviving with clowns circus, saving him from angels, training him, evoling etc Now yes Dona did help him in the start (but thats only because he used heart input on her) but she just feels like an annoying needy useless person. So she wasnt in an equals position with mc, and neither was yuri she was weaker. I feel Reolran should get some more attention because imagine giving your true name, your ability clowns circus, helping someone evolve, training etc and then having the person you do it for giving more attention to others Realoran did something for him, was sealed for hundreds of years to protect/help him etc and she is not getting enough attention. I would atleast like where others understand she is Queen of the harem. I mean she has done way more for him then others but others and him are not really giving her the due she deserves with all she has done.
i am really confused about the resistances.it makes two characters with equal power unable to decide a winner in a brawl because both of their phy resistance cancels each other's attack
I’ve read this novel before but dropped it before I pick it back up question for the author, have you dropped this or will you start releasing again soon?
So good.🫶 The story is full of tense moments and interesting plot points. The characters are very likeable and unique, especially Mark. (the mc) Mark has a constant knife hanging above his head in the form of the first suffering, which keeps the story engaging and (relatively) fast-paced. Mark is also a perfect combination of op and weak. He is stronger than most demons of his tier but meets a of enemies who are stronger than him, requiring him to scheme and trick to overcome them. The worldbuilding is top-notch and very original, making you want to learn more about it. The occasional philosophy is quite thought-provoking and inspiring. The battle scenes are just so good😩 10/10, I wholeheartedly recommend this piece of art👍
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I have read 40 chapters and I am captivated by the story. Sadly I can not justify paying over 50 dollars for an unfinished novel, so this is the end of my journey with the story. From what I have read world building and writing seems to be of high quality with only semi-occasional grammatical errors.
I overall really liked the novel, I have read about 100 chapters. The only thing a bit annoying is the Chinese woman that came somewhere around ch 90's. Apart from that Dona as of now is a great character so is the scientist and the mc. Character development is generally great in the novel.
5 stars for being a stand-up author that doesn’t make a r*pe wishfufillment novel. I wish there were more authors like you!
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If Marcus has a million fans, then I am one of them. If Marcus has ten fans, then I am one of them. If Marcus has only one fan then that is me. If Marcus has no fans, then I am dead. If the world is against Marcus, then I am against the world.
Interesting concept. I liked it so far. Currently I just read 35 chapters. I liked the idea of a demon and the embodiment of soul devouring and all the other demon aspects. I loved the abilities and the whole concept of the story. What I didn't like were that the story had the harem built so early on and that it was a core trait of the story. It just makes the story shallow. MC went through two points where he went into self discovery and a tangent about where he is in the world and how he sees himself and where he aspires to reach. He even went into another self assessment about how he wouldn't care about killing and that his previous life being human wouldn't affect his decisions and goals. But in the end, he goes on about how he still favors humanity and that he didn't get over his human side. Sigh, what was all that self discovery and assessment about if he would go right back to square one. Also, The most recent developments are not to my liking, the whole scientist thing just seems to be a plot for acquiring a harem member, and author just added other points for convenience (like her knowing how demons evolve). Here's what I was hoping for: OP demon with remarkable intellect that tempts people in return for consuming their souls and all those around them. His path is mind manipulation and domination and with ruthless decisions to have as much enjoyment in life while reaching the top. Girls are for his conquest on the side, not the main point. He's a despicable demon, not a harem members hunter. If he liked someone then so be it, but not every beautiful female should be part of his harem. I wouldn't care if he just uses them then discards them. He's a demon for devils's sake, why humanize him when he himself decided to embrace being a demon? I'll read again after the novel stacks more chapters, and hopefully It'll be top tier. But currently the developments are subpar. Still, I'm rooting for you author! I hope you utilize your story to it's full potential.
good book I really enjoyed the power system but the chapters were too long and 2 fast passes for 1 chap is not worth it for me
It started off with a really interesting and original plot, but it became very boring once they came into the world of modern Humans.
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such a story! 💯man Having so many Good scenes very interesting World building and also a great character developments is such a Piece for a Great Novel Great job! I think this will be the first fragment of my new Reading list The 'Webnovel Great treasure'
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My second review here, I have to say it’s great the story I mean :), the only problem so far it’s that I want more chapters!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The dynamic it’s a bit different(there’s a lot monologue), but the more you read the more in to it become, the story just keep getting better. I decreed that you shall read it to. :)
Lol....didn't mind me. Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
Sera la primera novela que gastare en monedas. ..........................................................................................................
Chapter 25 made me lose any enthusiasm to continue reading. It just felt so contrived how everything was against him killing Shiden and gaining a powerful ability. From numerous random circumstances to Shiden's apparent immunity to his mind powers and the foreshadowing of his great mistake by leaving them alive made for an incredibly frustrating and demoralizing read. Instead of feeling realistic, it felt unrealistically against the MC. His momentum was killed, he was unable to obtain a skill that was actually interesting, and now we have to watch as those hunters he could have killed otherwise become stronger than him. Talk about demoralizing, and then you have to pay for chapters. And the story and power system are very uninteresting.
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it kind of reminds me of soul of negary, i was genuinely disappointed when i ran out of readable chapters..
ok so, First I thought it me be some random copy of CMDK but as I progressed further i can say that it is one of the best novels i have ever read. i am on chapter 89 and some weird plot twists have made it more interesting . Keep it up author i think this story has a great potential
As of chapter 65 I’ve thoroughly enjoyed the novel. The mc does have a couple things given to him but I mean what doesn’t have that let’s be real. The character plots so far have been pretty good. Mark hasn’t been using his abilities to the fullest but I mean I can get pretty creative. Just my thoughts. Dr. Genus got reincarnated as Yuri and no one else has brought it up so I will. Side note I’m keeping them in first place till either I quit using the app or you quit updating the book. Good luck stopping me. If I have to I’ll start alting. This is a war now author. You won’t win. (lol just thought it would be funny ngl so that’s what’s gonna happen from now on.)
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Novel is a recommend to read, features simple and intresting types of powers and abilities and how they work. Smut in this has something unique compared to other novels on this app (imo). Characters in this don't get sideline so far (will change review if that is case). Quality of story is good, but might need more background on demon world and the upcoming heaven world later on.
I think this is a wonderful fresh take on demonic MC stories. The progression has so far made sense and nothing has felt forced/pushed/plothole. Still early as I can see this being an ok length novel. Keep at it and lets see where Mark leads us to!
Okay, here we are. This is a Harem novel, but there will be a nice underlying plot and story that I won't sacrifice in the name of chasing cardboard harem members. Characters will be fleshed out, power system would also be rather unique and crunchy. As for Yuri and NTR? My friend, I hate NTR to the marrow of my demonic bones, so no NTR. And Yuri is also not my taste when I do read, so no Yuri either. And color your face surprised, no R*pe either. A Mind control novel with no R*PE? Yep. MC, Mark doesn't need to use such disgusting tactics to get women. Of course, Harem will be quite extensive, and I don't plan to stop it with Demonic Characters; I plan to involve Angels, Humans and much more. WITHOUT making them cardboard trash on the gutter. So if you are not reading yet, it's time to sit back, relax, and give the novel a read. So cultured men, drop your support and here is to nothing, LETS MAKE THIS THE BEST NOVEL IN WEBNOVEL. HAHAH! Have questions? Ask away.
my goodness take a golden ticket from me! don't stop, I started reading yesterday and haven't been able to stop. great character development and world development too, love the scenes between him and dona too! keep it up author cause you deserve this 5 star approval!
This is the best harem novel I have read as of date. Characters: Mc is an average person who is slowly becoming an elite at what he does. Side characters are definitely deep with their own paths for them too, and I am incredibly vibing with the femal3 characters in there. God do I love Dona. And the fun thing is, it is not even the greatest thing about the book and I generally read to see different characters more than anything. World Building: This here, this is what completely blew my mind. The world is super vast and main part of the novel itself is about world hopping. Love it a lot. The magic systems are also incredibly convincing, and the powers themselves are also amazing. This also made battles really enjoyable. There is more to say but I wont spoil it for you. Plot: Its been years since I actually saw a great Plot Twist. This novel has that, too. Unbelievable for a webnovel. Last time i felt something like that was in Reverend Insanity. Finally, the cherry on top: It has a system but the system is not a crutch for the mc to deal with everything. Its just there as mostly a tone setter and it doesnt even ruin other magic systems in the story. And its the first time I actually felt that the system itself has some deep story behind it and mysteries that are to be delved into. And I honestly want to know too. This is everything I want crystallized into novel form.
It was promising at first but quickly turned to shit, I was so disappointed since I thought I actually found something worthwhile so I made this review out of pure spite
AUTHOR Masterpiece ! But I do have a suggestion at the end I was planning to read this for a while and didnt because I thought it wouldnt be good or some useless control womens mind and make a harem but surprisingly great writing MC is ruthless, and he grows to have ambitions MC also makes mistakes but slowly Reolran helps and corrects him I mean he learns, grows and it a good journey You can see mc growing with time, getting better through fights and not becoming op day 1. I like the struggle and this reminded me on martial world cultivation novel. MC in there also fought for chances, took risks to grow, gained experience through fights Suggestion- Like Reaolran best and I agree dona/yuri are a little annoying I mean she sacrificed a lot for MC, and is a major part of why he is surviving with clowns circus, saving him from angels, training him, evoling etc Now yes Dona did help him in the start (but thats only because he used heart input on her) but she just feels like an annoying needy useless person. So she wasnt in an equals position with mc, and neither was yuri she was weaker. I feel Reolran should get some more attention because imagine giving your true name, your ability clowns circus, helping someone evolve, training etc and then having the person you do it for giving more attention to others Realoran did something for him, was sealed for hundreds of years to protect/help him etc and she is not getting enough attention. I would atleast like where others understand she is Queen of the harem. I mean she has done way more for him then others but others and him are not really giving her the due she deserves with all she has done.
i am really confused about the resistances.it makes two characters with equal power unable to decide a winner in a brawl because both of their phy resistance cancels each other's attack
I’ve read this novel before but dropped it before I pick it back up question for the author, have you dropped this or will you start releasing again soon?
So good.🫶 The story is full of tense moments and interesting plot points. The characters are very likeable and unique, especially Mark. (the mc) Mark has a constant knife hanging above his head in the form of the first suffering, which keeps the story engaging and (relatively) fast-paced. Mark is also a perfect combination of op and weak. He is stronger than most demons of his tier but meets a of enemies who are stronger than him, requiring him to scheme and trick to overcome them. The worldbuilding is top-notch and very original, making you want to learn more about it. The occasional philosophy is quite thought-provoking and inspiring. The battle scenes are just so good😩 10/10, I wholeheartedly recommend this piece of art👍
Reveal Spoiler I have read 40 chapters and I am captivated by the story. Sadly I can not justify paying over 50 dollars for an unfinished novel, so this is the end of my journey with the story. From what I have read world building and writing seems to be of high quality with only semi-occasional grammatical errors.
I overall really liked the novel, I have read about 100 chapters. The only thing a bit annoying is the Chinese woman that came somewhere around ch 90's. Apart from that Dona as of now is a great character so is the scientist and the mc. Character development is generally great in the novel.
5 stars for being a stand-up author that doesn’t make a r*pe wishfufillment novel. I wish there were more authors like you!
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If Marcus has a million fans, then I am one of them. If Marcus has ten fans, then I am one of them. If Marcus has only one fan then that is me. If Marcus has no fans, then I am dead. If the world is against Marcus, then I am against the world.
Interesting concept. I liked it so far. Currently I just read 35 chapters. I liked the idea of a demon and the embodiment of soul devouring and all the other demon aspects. I loved the abilities and the whole concept of the story. What I didn't like were that the story had the harem built so early on and that it was a core trait of the story. It just makes the story shallow. MC went through two points where he went into self discovery and a tangent about where he is in the world and how he sees himself and where he aspires to reach. He even went into another self assessment about how he wouldn't care about killing and that his previous life being human wouldn't affect his decisions and goals. But in the end, he goes on about how he still favors humanity and that he didn't get over his human side. Sigh, what was all that self discovery and assessment about if he would go right back to square one. Also, The most recent developments are not to my liking, the whole scientist thing just seems to be a plot for acquiring a harem member, and author just added other points for convenience (like her knowing how demons evolve). Here's what I was hoping for: OP demon with remarkable intellect that tempts people in return for consuming their souls and all those around them. His path is mind manipulation and domination and with ruthless decisions to have as much enjoyment in life while reaching the top. Girls are for his conquest on the side, not the main point. He's a despicable demon, not a harem members hunter. If he liked someone then so be it, but not every beautiful female should be part of his harem. I wouldn't care if he just uses them then discards them. He's a demon for devils's sake, why humanize him when he himself decided to embrace being a demon? I'll read again after the novel stacks more chapters, and hopefully It'll be top tier. But currently the developments are subpar. Still, I'm rooting for you author! I hope you utilize your story to it's full potential.
good book I really enjoyed the power system but the chapters were too long and 2 fast passes for 1 chap is not worth it for me
It started off with a really interesting and original plot, but it became very boring once they came into the world of modern Humans.
Reveal Spoiler such a story! 💯man Having so many Good scenes very interesting World building and also a great character developments is such a Piece for a Great Novel Great job! I think this will be the first fragment of my new Reading list The 'Webnovel Great treasure'
Reveal Spoiler My second review here, I have to say it’s great the story I mean :), the only problem so far it’s that I want more chapters!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The dynamic it’s a bit different(there’s a lot monologue), but the more you read the more in to it become, the story just keep getting better. I decreed that you shall read it to. :)
Lol....didn't mind me. Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
Sera la primera novela que gastare en monedas. ..........................................................................................................
Chapter 25 made me lose any enthusiasm to continue reading. It just felt so contrived how everything was against him killing Shiden and gaining a powerful ability. From numerous random circumstances to Shiden's apparent immunity to his mind powers and the foreshadowing of his great mistake by leaving them alive made for an incredibly frustrating and demoralizing read. Instead of feeling realistic, it felt unrealistically against the MC. His momentum was killed, he was unable to obtain a skill that was actually interesting, and now we have to watch as those hunters he could have killed otherwise become stronger than him. Talk about demoralizing, and then you have to pay for chapters. And the story and power system are very uninteresting.
Reveal Spoiler it kind of reminds me of soul of negary, i was genuinely disappointed when i ran out of readable chapters..
ok so, First I thought it me be some random copy of CMDK but as I progressed further i can say that it is one of the best novels i have ever read. i am on chapter 89 and some weird plot twists have made it more interesting . Keep it up author i think this story has a great potential
As of chapter 65 I’ve thoroughly enjoyed the novel. The mc does have a couple things given to him but I mean what doesn’t have that let’s be real. The character plots so far have been pretty good. Mark hasn’t been using his abilities to the fullest but I mean I can get pretty creative. Just my thoughts. Dr. Genus got reincarnated as Yuri and no one else has brought it up so I will. Side note I’m keeping them in first place till either I quit using the app or you quit updating the book. Good luck stopping me. If I have to I’ll start alting. This is a war now author. You won’t win. (lol just thought it would be funny ngl so that’s what’s gonna happen from now on.)
Reveal Spoiler Novel is a recommend to read, features simple and intresting types of powers and abilities and how they work. Smut in this has something unique compared to other novels on this app (imo). Characters in this don't get sideline so far (will change review if that is case). Quality of story is good, but might need more background on demon world and the upcoming heaven world later on.
I think this is a wonderful fresh take on demonic MC stories. The progression has so far made sense and nothing has felt forced/pushed/plothole. Still early as I can see this being an ok length novel. Keep at it and lets see where Mark leads us to!
Okay, here we are. This is a Harem novel, but there will be a nice underlying plot and story that I won't sacrifice in the name of chasing cardboard harem members. Characters will be fleshed out, power system would also be rather unique and crunchy. As for Yuri and NTR? My friend, I hate NTR to the marrow of my demonic bones, so no NTR. And Yuri is also not my taste when I do read, so no Yuri either. And color your face surprised, no R*pe either. A Mind control novel with no R*PE? Yep. MC, Mark doesn't need to use such disgusting tactics to get women. Of course, Harem will be quite extensive, and I don't plan to stop it with Demonic Characters; I plan to involve Angels, Humans and much more. WITHOUT making them cardboard trash on the gutter. So if you are not reading yet, it's time to sit back, relax, and give the novel a read. So cultured men, drop your support and here is to nothing, LETS MAKE THIS THE BEST NOVEL IN WEBNOVEL. HAHAH! Have questions? Ask away.