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I can't stand this, I just don't like the way the characters are and their interactions. They seem to me to be very forced and unnatural actions for the context surrounding the time and place. Writing Quality (3★), Stability of Updates (4★), Story Development (2★), Character Design (2★), World Background (3★).
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A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
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There haven't been tons of chapters so there isn't enough to properly review but at the minute it's looking promising and I think if the author doesn't drop it and continues with the direction he is going in it could be quite a good novel. The MC is a bit childish which I think makes sense and doesn't act like a murder hobo trying to kill everyone and everything for the slightest inconvenience which is great.
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.
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I can't stand this, I just don't like the way the characters are and their interactions. They seem to me to be very forced and unnatural actions for the context surrounding the time and place. Writing Quality (3★), Stability of Updates (4★), Story Development (2★), Character Design (2★), World Background (3★).
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Shonen mamamamamamamamamamamamamamamamemamamamammemamamamananna I don't know, it reminds me of those Naruto fics in 2017 but it's not bad and just my taste I got a bit stale from it You know, a sad past, everyone feels sorry, blah, blah, blah, the protagonist is a very pure person, basically a Naruto script and it's cool but too rancid But I don't know how over time the protagonist can mature and such.
A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
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There haven't been tons of chapters so there isn't enough to properly review but at the minute it's looking promising and I think if the author doesn't drop it and continues with the direction he is going in it could be quite a good novel. The MC is a bit childish which I think makes sense and doesn't act like a murder hobo trying to kill everyone and everything for the slightest inconvenience which is great.
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.