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Not a Chinese translation. Therefore 5 stars. Good time travel story. Nice OCs.
For some reason my review didnt get submitted 2 times in a row, anyways. I dont know how this fanfic escaped my radar, its absolutely amazing. The first 5 chapters were obviously way more planned and well written compared to authors tenten fanfic, deserves 5 star review because im bias since i liked tenten and naruko fanfic.
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This is a good story. It is rare to see original character time-travel fanfic. So this is a new concept. I was bored after reading so much si-oc.
Good story so far. I am okay with action. But I hope to get more. It's a unique idea. And your writing style is also good. Although there are a few grammatical errors, overall it's a five star
AUTHORS LOVE YOUR NOVELS BUT WE NEED A EPIC MASS-EFFECT NOVEL CENTERED AROUND LIARA TZONI BECAUSE THEIR NOT MANY NOVELS ABOUT MASS EFFECTS.story plot a mass effect fan reincarnated inside Liara Tsoni body with technology system her goal united the galaxy against the reapers. WE NEED MORE MASS-EFFECT NOVELS. THANK YOU FOR THIS AWESOME NOVEL.
AUTHOR is a fan of your work.LOVE your UZUMAKI NARUKO novel I HOPE you don`t drop that novel and this one. THIS NOVEL WAS AWESOME LOVE TO SEE BOA HANCOCK GET HER NOVEL, she is my second favorite character of One Piece. YAMATO IS MINE FIRST.I hope you make a novel of Yamato too..thank you for this novel love it
Great story but you should fix your grammar and double check it. I hope you don't drop this fanfic🤩♥️
No one is giving it a review, so I decided to become shameless about it. This Fanfic is a planned out fanfic. So don't worry about Update stability. Give it a try. And if you like it give me a few power stones.
I like it. I am going to guess it will take time to Hancock to meet Luffy but so far I liked it
nice work love 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 ps will her devilfruirt Show up the same way like by nika (she is Dead) or normal ?
Reveal Spoiler I read all 90 chapters, they were good and excellent, I liked this work[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Not a Chinese translation. Therefore 5 stars. Good time travel story. Nice OCs.
For some reason my review didnt get submitted 2 times in a row, anyways. I dont know how this fanfic escaped my radar, its absolutely amazing. The first 5 chapters were obviously way more planned and well written compared to authors tenten fanfic, deserves 5 star review because im bias since i liked tenten and naruko fanfic.
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters
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This is a good story. It is rare to see original character time-travel fanfic. So this is a new concept. I was bored after reading so much si-oc.
Good story so far. I am okay with action. But I hope to get more. It's a unique idea. And your writing style is also good. Although there are a few grammatical errors, overall it's a five star
AUTHORS LOVE YOUR NOVELS BUT WE NEED A EPIC MASS-EFFECT NOVEL CENTERED AROUND LIARA TZONI BECAUSE THEIR NOT MANY NOVELS ABOUT MASS EFFECTS.story plot a mass effect fan reincarnated inside Liara Tsoni body with technology system her goal united the galaxy against the reapers. WE NEED MORE MASS-EFFECT NOVELS. THANK YOU FOR THIS AWESOME NOVEL.
AUTHOR is a fan of your work.LOVE your UZUMAKI NARUKO novel I HOPE you don`t drop that novel and this one. THIS NOVEL WAS AWESOME LOVE TO SEE BOA HANCOCK GET HER NOVEL, she is my second favorite character of One Piece. YAMATO IS MINE FIRST.I hope you make a novel of Yamato too..thank you for this novel love it
Great story but you should fix your grammar and double check it. I hope you don't drop this fanfic🤩♥️
No one is giving it a review, so I decided to become shameless about it. This Fanfic is a planned out fanfic. So don't worry about Update stability. Give it a try. And if you like it give me a few power stones.
I like it. I am going to guess it will take time to Hancock to meet Luffy but so far I liked it
nice work love 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 ps will her devilfruirt Show up the same way like by nika (she is Dead) or normal ?
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