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An absolute banger of a ff, it adds to the world building of naruto in an incredible way, the characters are fun and charming the plot has been excellent- honestly a part of me thinks it’s a shame that this is a fanfic and not a new product of its own.
This is such a unique and amazing concept (at least I haven’t seen it before). Writing is good, easy to understand. Plus you can feel the emotion from characters, and they feel life-like. Overall, a great read so far!
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This is really a great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. It's interesting, unique, and refreshing to see a new concept in Naruto fanfiction.. Where MC/Kaito not have chakra and become an Onmyoji.. It also interesting that in this story there so many demon alive, and summoning beast is a demon before.. I like MC/Kaito interactions with others.. His interaction to his nephews (Sasuke and Itachi) is so different, it's funny XD.. I also like his interaction with Yurei and Gurei.. I like how MC/Kaito destroy/defeat Danzo.. It's satisfying... I know that MC/Kaito is need to defeat Kaguya, so he try to become stronger.. But didn't he promise to teach Sasuke, he left Sasuke and Demon land/fortress for a long time now to exorcism The Box of Bliss, and others demons.. He should back soon to teach Sasuke.. Maybe have a time between demons to back to Oeyama to teach and meet Sasuke.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍
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Honestly, what a great addition to the Naruto ff world! The novel expands on the lore of the Naruto verse in a very unique way, taking existing inklings and hints of a deeper history of the manga/anime and gives it meaning and depth. The characters are full of depth and emotion, allowing for an effortless connection between the reader and novel. The MC is the cool uncle everyone deserves, the original characters are portrayed well, the story is unique, fun, funny, refreshing and most importantly interesting! Keep up the good work author!
is this your original or MTL if it's mtl then give me link or original title of this fic
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Really like this story. It's peaceful, without the emotional kidnapping most novels go towards. Yet, at the same time, there are plenty of plotlines to keep the interest in the MC path.
One of the better ones in the Naruto Fan Fic universe, would recommend every fan fic scourge to read it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Absolutely phenomenal translation, along with the actual Chinese story being heavenly. While there were some text repeats and 1 or 2 cases where I was confused about who was talking, everything else was easy to understand. For the book itself, how the story was portrayed and written was a great plus too. The story line was super fresh and I have never seen anything like it. To both the Translator and Author, please keep up the great work!
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can you give me the name of the raw one. ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Es una buena trama adoro este tipo de historias una de mis favoritas sin duda este personaje no me lo esperaba felicidades My buena trama y Sasuke reacciona muy bien no se siente oc me gusta
Wow dis right here was some good jit no cap. I’m glad someone with actual talent is writing ✍🏿. Can’t explain just how happy and impressed I am author you are indeed that GUY. Very good story your telling and I’m happy you chose to bless the world with your wolf greatly appreciated🙏🏿😁
4 star review because your other books are so well put together will write a new one when it gets to 10 chapters
Hi! I was honestly impressed by how visual your storytelling is, it’s rare to see writing that naturally paints such clear imagery. I’m a professional freelance comic artist and I’d love to discuss what a comic version of your story could look like. If you’re open to chatting, I’m on Discord (Bennet_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse).
An absolute banger of a ff, it adds to the world building of naruto in an incredible way, the characters are fun and charming the plot has been excellent- honestly a part of me thinks it’s a shame that this is a fanfic and not a new product of its own.
This is such a unique and amazing concept (at least I haven’t seen it before). Writing is good, easy to understand. Plus you can feel the emotion from characters, and they feel life-like. Overall, a great read so far!
[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Erzuzi What a lucky guy[img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=coins][img=coins]
This is really a great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. It's interesting, unique, and refreshing to see a new concept in Naruto fanfiction.. Where MC/Kaito not have chakra and become an Onmyoji.. It also interesting that in this story there so many demon alive, and summoning beast is a demon before.. I like MC/Kaito interactions with others.. His interaction to his nephews (Sasuke and Itachi) is so different, it's funny XD.. I also like his interaction with Yurei and Gurei.. I like how MC/Kaito destroy/defeat Danzo.. It's satisfying... I know that MC/Kaito is need to defeat Kaguya, so he try to become stronger.. But didn't he promise to teach Sasuke, he left Sasuke and Demon land/fortress for a long time now to exorcism The Box of Bliss, and others demons.. He should back soon to teach Sasuke.. Maybe have a time between demons to back to Oeyama to teach and meet Sasuke.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍
Reveal Spoiler Honestly, what a great addition to the Naruto ff world! The novel expands on the lore of the Naruto verse in a very unique way, taking existing inklings and hints of a deeper history of the manga/anime and gives it meaning and depth. The characters are full of depth and emotion, allowing for an effortless connection between the reader and novel. The MC is the cool uncle everyone deserves, the original characters are portrayed well, the story is unique, fun, funny, refreshing and most importantly interesting! Keep up the good work author!
is this your original or MTL if it's mtl then give me link or original title of this fic
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Mad][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Really like this story. It's peaceful, without the emotional kidnapping most novels go towards. Yet, at the same time, there are plenty of plotlines to keep the interest in the MC path.
One of the better ones in the Naruto Fan Fic universe, would recommend every fan fic scourge to read it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Absolutely phenomenal translation, along with the actual Chinese story being heavenly. While there were some text repeats and 1 or 2 cases where I was confused about who was talking, everything else was easy to understand. For the book itself, how the story was portrayed and written was a great plus too. The story line was super fresh and I have never seen anything like it. To both the Translator and Author, please keep up the great work!
BOM gostei muito legal demais ótima história Jsjjsjsjsjsjsjs Jaajajjajssjsjjss Ususjsjsjsjsjsjsjskskskskskksskskskskskskskskskisisiskskwksksisisisiisejejjejsj
can you give me the name of the raw one. ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Es una buena trama adoro este tipo de historias una de mis favoritas sin duda este personaje no me lo esperaba felicidades My buena trama y Sasuke reacciona muy bien no se siente oc me gusta
Wow dis right here was some good jit no cap. I’m glad someone with actual talent is writing ✍🏿. Can’t explain just how happy and impressed I am author you are indeed that GUY. Very good story your telling and I’m happy you chose to bless the world with your wolf greatly appreciated🙏🏿😁
4 star review because your other books are so well put together will write a new one when it gets to 10 chapters
Hi! I was honestly impressed by how visual your storytelling is, it’s rare to see writing that naturally paints such clear imagery. I’m a professional freelance comic artist and I’d love to discuss what a comic version of your story could look like. If you’re open to chatting, I’m on Discord (Bennet_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse).