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A typical Chinese translation fanfic where the MC has no ambition and just goes with the flow. The grammar was actually quite well without many mistakes that I could spot. The story itself was progressing very slowly that it was agonizing. I stopped after a few chapters since I just wasn't feeling like the MC has a personality, he simply goes after the protagonist of the story as his chaperone.
it's been an excellent story all along every part of the story seems right there to me.
1700 chapters in 8 days...?seems this guy just wants to archive the novel here or something.anyways let's give it a go
So, about a thousand chapters have been written; i have stopped at 800 because, while the first arc was good about Soul Land 1, the second one went too much on the description of the continent war with a hundred chapters just to finish with a handshake and peaceful ties. The thing that made me leave was the third world, which wasn't even from Douluo Dalu but from a cultivation novel. A good start, a weakening middle, and a worse ending may continue when the third part ends, but we'll see.
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fanfic jelek, ga konsisten sama ga detail berapa tahun soul ring nya sama soul bone juga ga ada penjelasan berapa tahun
this is a translation of a fanfiction why is it uploaded as an original work?
A typical Chinese translation fanfic where the MC has no ambition and just goes with the flow. The grammar was actually quite well without many mistakes that I could spot. The story itself was progressing very slowly that it was agonizing. I stopped after a few chapters since I just wasn't feeling like the MC has a personality, he simply goes after the protagonist of the story as his chaperone.
it's been an excellent story all along every part of the story seems right there to me.
1700 chapters in 8 days...?seems this guy just wants to archive the novel here or something.anyways let's give it a go
So, about a thousand chapters have been written; i have stopped at 800 because, while the first arc was good about Soul Land 1, the second one went too much on the description of the continent war with a hundred chapters just to finish with a handshake and peaceful ties. The thing that made me leave was the third world, which wasn't even from Douluo Dalu but from a cultivation novel. A good start, a weakening middle, and a worse ending may continue when the third part ends, but we'll see.
Reveal Spoiler fanfic jelek, ga konsisten sama ga detail berapa tahun soul ring nya sama soul bone juga ga ada penjelasan berapa tahun
this is a translation of a fanfiction why is it uploaded as an original work?
Wow this shit makes my eyes bleed.