Reviews of Naval Gacha System: It's Time To Monopolize The Seven Seas! by Mister_Archon - Webnovel

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4.54

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Miya_sei

i freaking love this story you will not be bored at every chapter i really recommend it guys its a hidden (DRAGON HEART)🥰 . . . This novel really captured my Heart guys I Hope Author Won't Drop this MASTER PIECE

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Kevin_Bester

Really enjoying this work. to bring a modern, advanced navy to a different world is a breath of fresh air

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Thumidu_Shenuka

It is not realistic to think that human even in the united navy will think equally about animal looking people. And the character development of the mc is unrealistic. In the war of liberation the team led by Campbell killed the war master one time but somehow he magically resurrected. And especially mc shouldn't teach people who living in this world their military knowledge(mc is dumb for doing that). They could realistically turn against him one day so he should have more cards up his sleeve. And what man doesn't like harem(bulls#it).

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Daotianshen

First time reading this kind of book....

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Rank_10_Magus_God

I wonder if this a high level magus where there gods and demons with countless planes and dimensions of countless races and those mortal level navy ships will be wiped out by a singe rank 1 magi or some low level magi world where they will be destroyed and conquered by mere mortals ships

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Zerokuem

very good novel, and I highly recommend it to my fellow crayon eating bro's. would've been better if 2 chaps get dropped like every day or two. also, chapter 112 is :

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DaoistLeIg1u

I absolutely love this story only downside is not enough chapters to read keep up the amazing work

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Luis_Juarez_1149

excelente 👌 libro me gustó su trama desde el inicio hasta el final

3mth
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CelestailStar

I’ve seen some of these novel but not many developed of these type of books. The concept is very interesting and entertaining love the book so far. Keep up the work Author and hopefully we have a much faster release of chapter!!!

3mth
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LLagier

Read about 30 chapters, everything is great except a freakin dragoness being introduced and the mc treating her like a princess while he could’ve easily dodged the storm by SIMPLY saying Nah and ignoring the imprisoned DANGEROUS dragoness. In united navy, unity exists. bro just ignored that and unleashed a dragon into his navy that can destroy his navy and should have done that if you use logic but meh.

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JackNantis

This is the second review i wrote, and the writer just keeps his level. Very nice, I say . The only thing me and probably some other readers dislike may be the length and the quantity of the chapters, but if you keep the quality and good story connection up, nobody would like to change things cause creation is hard. PS: If this story still has me reading and waiting for the next chapter till chapter 110 I think I would like to make a translated version of the bock. Of course not, Google translated course they are very bad, no I would translate the story to German if that's OK for the writer .

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Doverow
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Great to see an original author that sticks to the 40-chapter paywall, can't wait to see what's after this point, and for my fellow readers, I'd like to say so far this has been a pretty good light read and has quite a lot of juicy info filled in it as well.

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Ablack_Cat

Now i'm not typically sure if the chapters are too short since I am new to reading webnovels, BUT I am enjoying it like cool millitary navy in a fantasy world that's sick asf and I do certainly enjoy the interactions between mc and the miss dragon lady (hopefully the ship is real) and I look forward to reading

3mth
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JackNantis

The story until Chap.82 was a nice read. The MC is a military commander, and the setting just clicks together, so I hope the writer doesn't drop this work. Till now, a solid 4.3.

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XBVoid
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Based off of the current 81 chapters that have been released it seems to be going in a really nice direction with good potential for mixing technology + magic in a world setting that seems similar to 1500ish on a parallel Earth. Good writing quality overall. I think I've only seen 1 mistake mixing alpha/elder up. The background and characters seem to be developing pretty well. it looks like it will be no harem as well, so that's a plus. At the moment I'm thinking it might be a translation novel based on the author really overplaying the freedom/democracy joke with military missiles/equipment and the alpha/elder mix up. So if there's a raw that anyone finds lmk

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Iseeyou
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Just reading the useless summary made me frown. I mean come on.

3mth
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Josh_graves

its says there r 56 chapters but I only see 54 where r the last 2?

4mth
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MrDraXuz

Fairly well written. as the number of errors over the course of 55 chapters is within the single digits. However, there are several spots where things could have been worded differently to make better sense or flow. The characters are fairly different and the change in POV between them gives a better idea of just how confused terrified people from an earlier era would be when faced with any modern military. There is a part of me that can't help but compare it to Nihonkoku Shoukan(Summoned Japan) as it's one of my favorite primitive smack down stories. Don't get me wrong, the story so far has been great and very engaging, but there are many nuances that, when done right, can send a shiver up a military nerds spine. Radio communications etiquette, callsigns, and brevity are a big part of that as well as individual/group placement within a formation. These are just thing I would like to used more for the professional soldiers as this is their career and something they would be doing all the time. I'll end it here with "I'm not a scali-"......

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CephalonCoda

Oooooh boy... as a huge military nutcase, i gotta review this one. Alright, let's start with writing quality. Honestly, in terms of word choice and descriptions, it's fine. There is nothing to write home about there but also not many obvious issues, and only some mild feelings that things are described a bit too similarly between the ships, and sometimes it feels a bit repetitive with how the issues have been solved up to this point, seemingly just throwing weapons at enemies until they all explode, when Id personally like to see some more creative use of modern technology coming into play, but I also am not docking any points for that since the story has barely started, and that feels like the possible next direction the author is going in. Now for the plot so far. Honestly, im super impressed. The pacing specifically feels VERY enjoyable to read, and the timeskips are well implemented and dont remove my immersion much, I love to see it. Characters... honestly, at the time of writing this review, im at a bit of an odd spot with the characters, as I want to like them and root for them, but at times, I feel as though his "stern and cold" act used as a shield to kind of gloss over the lack of personal growth ive seen in the MC. Again, its early in the story so this may end up fixed later on and I dont want him to totally change but he seemingly is making the perfect decisions at every turn despite being super new to this and thus doesnt really learn or change much. I do actually love this kind of "system" character as it lets the mc sneak in info and stuff readers need while not taking the attention off the actual supporting cast. The last major topic I'll cover is world building. I am extremely happy with how the world is being built. Things up to this point make a lot of sense and seem thought out in advance. It feels like a very small world at this point so far, but again, with the pacing this book has, that is already more than most books I've read at this point. Lastly, a couple of final thoughts just from me. The book is off to a great start and can go very far and has a ton of potential. I was trying to be mostly unbiased, but personally, I love this large-scale military summoning books, so to compensate, I was probably a little too harsh in the actual reviewing part. As of now, the book has 56 chapters released, and im looking forward to more. I do worry somewhat about the story being too focused on small-scale issues for my taste later on, but im hoping it remains where it is, a very large-scale type of book, hopefully with large scale politics and wars and strategy being the focus. I've seen a lot of these stories start strong and then kinda divulge into "We had 100 but they had 10,000, but we won bc main character". I seriously hope that this story focuses on the strategy and goes more in-depth on that and less just throwing enough bigger weapons until it dies, lol. Overall, these last thoughts have been about other authors and not this one, so it's all groundless fears for now. with how well the author has done with worldbuilding the areas we have been to at this point, I am happy to give benefit of the doubt to someone who obviously has a lot of passion for this project, and im happy to join you on your voyage, Author. Fair seas and following winds! 07

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Jacob_Johnson_3750

this book is really well done it has really good action in it cant wait for more

4mth
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manpapper

I really enjoyed those 50 chapter. The only negative point is that the chapter feels too short, I reached the last chapter in a jiff Can't wait for more :) Great job so far authoer keep up the good work

4mth
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Sean_Morabito

This novel is really awesome with a very interesting and entertaining premise with amazing characters. I absolutely love the interactions between the admiral and the female dragon. The part where he fantasized being stepped on and insulted by her, a gigantic dragon, made me absolutly die of laugher so much that I had to immediately give a 5 star review. I hope the Admiral gets his wish haha. You already have me hooked so keep up the good work. I'll be supporting with reading past the free chapters and wish you goodluck on writing.

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DaoistTsuLing

this is such a good premise the storyline is very engaging and well put together iIhope the author keeps up the updates iIeven had to make a new category in my collections for this one as it is such a promising system novel

4mth
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ASM_132226

Really nice story and development till now, hope the author will keep updating and keep up with the great work.

5mth
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Brayan_C2

I Recommend. It is very interesting 🤨 🚢🛥️⛴️🛳️

5mth
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Nomand_

Amei essa obra, espero que traga mais capítulos e por favor não abandone essa maravilha. Cuide de sua saúde e traga mais capítulos, eu imploro.

5mth
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WasUp_IKnowYou

This novel has a promising story with great potential. I just hope the author would not drop this.

6mth
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Miya_sei

i freaking love this story you will not be bored at every chapter i really recommend it guys its a hidden (DRAGON HEART)🥰 . . . This novel really captured my Heart guys I Hope Author Won't Drop this MASTER PIECE

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Kevin_Bester

Really enjoying this work. to bring a modern, advanced navy to a different world is a breath of fresh air

24d
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Thumidu_Shenuka

It is not realistic to think that human even in the united navy will think equally about animal looking people. And the character development of the mc is unrealistic. In the war of liberation the team led by Campbell killed the war master one time but somehow he magically resurrected. And especially mc shouldn't teach people who living in this world their military knowledge(mc is dumb for doing that). They could realistically turn against him one day so he should have more cards up his sleeve. And what man doesn't like harem(bulls#it).

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1mth
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Daotianshen

First time reading this kind of book....

2mth
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Rank_10_Magus_God

I wonder if this a high level magus where there gods and demons with countless planes and dimensions of countless races and those mortal level navy ships will be wiped out by a singe rank 1 magi or some low level magi world where they will be destroyed and conquered by mere mortals ships

2mth
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Zerokuem

very good novel, and I highly recommend it to my fellow crayon eating bro's. would've been better if 2 chaps get dropped like every day or two. also, chapter 112 is :

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2mth
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DaoistLeIg1u

I absolutely love this story only downside is not enough chapters to read keep up the amazing work

2mth
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Luis_Juarez_1149

excelente 👌 libro me gustó su trama desde el inicio hasta el final

3mth
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CelestailStar

I’ve seen some of these novel but not many developed of these type of books. The concept is very interesting and entertaining love the book so far. Keep up the work Author and hopefully we have a much faster release of chapter!!!

3mth
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William_Rodriguez_1225

At last, a reliable and effective service I can rely on! I can only imagine how many people are struggling with crypto-related issues and are likely also unsure of their ability to find practical solutions. This is where Space Spy Recovery rightfully enters the picture as the best provider of the service, and their success is clearly demonstrated by the fact that they were able to help me recover 550,000 EUROS that I had lost to online cryptocurrency theft. Get in touch for free: Email addresses: info@spacespyrecovery.pro and soacespy@hackermail.com. Telegram: @spacespy65; Skype: live: cid.2b75b0cf1ce9bf69; WhatsApp: +1 (657) 543-6038; YouTube: https://youtu.be/m8DDfVwc_lE, Website:  https://spacespyrecovery.pro/  

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LLagier

Read about 30 chapters, everything is great except a freakin dragoness being introduced and the mc treating her like a princess while he could’ve easily dodged the storm by SIMPLY saying Nah and ignoring the imprisoned DANGEROUS dragoness. In united navy, unity exists. bro just ignored that and unleashed a dragon into his navy that can destroy his navy and should have done that if you use logic but meh.

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3mth
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JackNantis

This is the second review i wrote, and the writer just keeps his level. Very nice, I say . The only thing me and probably some other readers dislike may be the length and the quantity of the chapters, but if you keep the quality and good story connection up, nobody would like to change things cause creation is hard. PS: If this story still has me reading and waiting for the next chapter till chapter 110 I think I would like to make a translated version of the bock. Of course not, Google translated course they are very bad, no I would translate the story to German if that's OK for the writer .

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3mth
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Doverow
LV 14 Badge

Great to see an original author that sticks to the 40-chapter paywall, can't wait to see what's after this point, and for my fellow readers, I'd like to say so far this has been a pretty good light read and has quite a lot of juicy info filled in it as well.

3mth
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Ablack_Cat

Now i'm not typically sure if the chapters are too short since I am new to reading webnovels, BUT I am enjoying it like cool millitary navy in a fantasy world that's sick asf and I do certainly enjoy the interactions between mc and the miss dragon lady (hopefully the ship is real) and I look forward to reading

3mth
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JackNantis

The story until Chap.82 was a nice read. The MC is a military commander, and the setting just clicks together, so I hope the writer doesn't drop this work. Till now, a solid 4.3.

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XBVoid
LV 15 Badge

Based off of the current 81 chapters that have been released it seems to be going in a really nice direction with good potential for mixing technology + magic in a world setting that seems similar to 1500ish on a parallel Earth. Good writing quality overall. I think I've only seen 1 mistake mixing alpha/elder up. The background and characters seem to be developing pretty well. it looks like it will be no harem as well, so that's a plus. At the moment I'm thinking it might be a translation novel based on the author really overplaying the freedom/democracy joke with military missiles/equipment and the alpha/elder mix up. So if there's a raw that anyone finds lmk

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3mth
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Iseeyou
LV 15 Badge

Just reading the useless summary made me frown. I mean come on.

3mth
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Josh_graves

its says there r 56 chapters but I only see 54 where r the last 2?

4mth
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MrDraXuz

Fairly well written. as the number of errors over the course of 55 chapters is within the single digits. However, there are several spots where things could have been worded differently to make better sense or flow. The characters are fairly different and the change in POV between them gives a better idea of just how confused terrified people from an earlier era would be when faced with any modern military. There is a part of me that can't help but compare it to Nihonkoku Shoukan(Summoned Japan) as it's one of my favorite primitive smack down stories. Don't get me wrong, the story so far has been great and very engaging, but there are many nuances that, when done right, can send a shiver up a military nerds spine. Radio communications etiquette, callsigns, and brevity are a big part of that as well as individual/group placement within a formation. These are just thing I would like to used more for the professional soldiers as this is their career and something they would be doing all the time. I'll end it here with "I'm not a scali-"......

4mth
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CephalonCoda

Oooooh boy... as a huge military nutcase, i gotta review this one. Alright, let's start with writing quality. Honestly, in terms of word choice and descriptions, it's fine. There is nothing to write home about there but also not many obvious issues, and only some mild feelings that things are described a bit too similarly between the ships, and sometimes it feels a bit repetitive with how the issues have been solved up to this point, seemingly just throwing weapons at enemies until they all explode, when Id personally like to see some more creative use of modern technology coming into play, but I also am not docking any points for that since the story has barely started, and that feels like the possible next direction the author is going in. Now for the plot so far. Honestly, im super impressed. The pacing specifically feels VERY enjoyable to read, and the timeskips are well implemented and dont remove my immersion much, I love to see it. Characters... honestly, at the time of writing this review, im at a bit of an odd spot with the characters, as I want to like them and root for them, but at times, I feel as though his "stern and cold" act used as a shield to kind of gloss over the lack of personal growth ive seen in the MC. Again, its early in the story so this may end up fixed later on and I dont want him to totally change but he seemingly is making the perfect decisions at every turn despite being super new to this and thus doesnt really learn or change much. I do actually love this kind of "system" character as it lets the mc sneak in info and stuff readers need while not taking the attention off the actual supporting cast. The last major topic I'll cover is world building. I am extremely happy with how the world is being built. Things up to this point make a lot of sense and seem thought out in advance. It feels like a very small world at this point so far, but again, with the pacing this book has, that is already more than most books I've read at this point. Lastly, a couple of final thoughts just from me. The book is off to a great start and can go very far and has a ton of potential. I was trying to be mostly unbiased, but personally, I love this large-scale military summoning books, so to compensate, I was probably a little too harsh in the actual reviewing part. As of now, the book has 56 chapters released, and im looking forward to more. I do worry somewhat about the story being too focused on small-scale issues for my taste later on, but im hoping it remains where it is, a very large-scale type of book, hopefully with large scale politics and wars and strategy being the focus. I've seen a lot of these stories start strong and then kinda divulge into "We had 100 but they had 10,000, but we won bc main character". I seriously hope that this story focuses on the strategy and goes more in-depth on that and less just throwing enough bigger weapons until it dies, lol. Overall, these last thoughts have been about other authors and not this one, so it's all groundless fears for now. with how well the author has done with worldbuilding the areas we have been to at this point, I am happy to give benefit of the doubt to someone who obviously has a lot of passion for this project, and im happy to join you on your voyage, Author. Fair seas and following winds! 07

4mth
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Jacob_Johnson_3750

this book is really well done it has really good action in it cant wait for more

4mth
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manpapper

I really enjoyed those 50 chapter. The only negative point is that the chapter feels too short, I reached the last chapter in a jiff Can't wait for more :) Great job so far authoer keep up the good work

4mth
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Sean_Morabito

This novel is really awesome with a very interesting and entertaining premise with amazing characters. I absolutely love the interactions between the admiral and the female dragon. The part where he fantasized being stepped on and insulted by her, a gigantic dragon, made me absolutly die of laugher so much that I had to immediately give a 5 star review. I hope the Admiral gets his wish haha. You already have me hooked so keep up the good work. I'll be supporting with reading past the free chapters and wish you goodluck on writing.

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DaoistTsuLing

this is such a good premise the storyline is very engaging and well put together iIhope the author keeps up the updates iIeven had to make a new category in my collections for this one as it is such a promising system novel

4mth
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ASM_132226

Really nice story and development till now, hope the author will keep updating and keep up with the great work.

5mth
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Brayan_C2

I Recommend. It is very interesting 🤨 🚢🛥️⛴️🛳️

5mth
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Nomand_

Amei essa obra, espero que traga mais capítulos e por favor não abandone essa maravilha. Cuide de sua saúde e traga mais capítulos, eu imploro.

5mth
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WasUp_IKnowYou

This novel has a promising story with great potential. I just hope the author would not drop this.

6mth
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