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I am not gonna read paid chaps before being sure that its really will have a harem ending, i mean ik it will have, but it gives me the feeling of those types of kr novels where mc just choose only selective few from all the heroines who loves him. I am not really a fan of leaving heroines who obviously love mc, either author forget of them (labelled them as heroines who couldn't acquire their love (mc)) or just make them together with other male characters which basically feels ntr to me and pretty sure its the same for many here. Anyway it was good till i read and if any of you haven't taruma of those things i mentioned above then you can read without any worries
Honestly, as a fan of the harem genre, I like some of the heroines in the novel. But I agree with the comments that mention the MC is unlikable. I also feel that the heroines' love for the MC seems to be due to his charm magic, so it's feel forced. For example, many heroines feel their hearts race when they see the MC (especially evil woman due MC passive skill) . Even the original protagonist (male) feels that way towards both the female and male versions of the MC. Rose only sees colors through the MC, and Alice feels that the MC is her destined partner because she sees a pink color in the MC. I think only Snow is a character where the author successfully shows how she falls in love with the MC. However, it still feels a bit cheap because he saves Snow and claims that he is the only one who truly sees her for who she is. For now, the MC claims that he will marry all five women who love him: Seo, Alice, Snow, Liyana, and Rose. However, the author continues to introduce more heroines who fall in love with the MC. Will Janica become one of them? In the last chapter, she seemed to want to give up her feeling to the original protagonist, her childhood friend, because he don't cares about her too much and feels distant. Meanwhile, the MC has blatantly shown care and helped Janica many times, which makes her heart flutter with excitement. It's a classic trope: when the MC tries to make Janica and Luke, the male protagonist, a couple, does the MC not learn from his previous actions that led Snow to fall in love with the MC instead of Luke?
great story so far, and also i wanted to say thanks for not dropping this book so far and i hope you won't dropped it either and keep writing this book till the end with more fantastic storyline developmentš„š„
The work is well-written, and the settings are well-crafted. However, unfortunately, the MC hasnāt had good mental progression since the first chapter. Heās very dense, takes actions for certain situations but doesnāt follow through, which makes things quite complicated. Itās a love-hate battle with this workāI recommend reading it, but be prepared.
I'm on chapter 40 and I see the tag r18 can anyone whose further ahead in the story let me know if there is r18 romance or is the tag just because of the violence?
Hi. I think the story is kind of exiting. I like stories where MC has some character development and not too OP from the start. Unfortunately the relationship between him and the heroins are bit simp. This is a harem novel , we have the best girls so I don't understand why some readers are complaining about the harem route. That's why most of us are here. So dear Author, 3 is not enough and maybe this is my only complain. I know that Lucas is the Mc but Riley shouldn't entrust his fate to others. Keep up the good work
Honestly the storyās writing and even premise is quite good, but two glaring issues lowers this novels rating quite a bit in my eyes. 1) The MC is essentially a lovestruck fool at the start with no real backbone to speak of. He throws himself into a deadly situation and is only saved by system bullshit, not to mention the āloveā he feels is from when he saw those characters in the game. As in this guy legit fell in love with game characters to feel this way, and now, after being in their world, is almost fascilltating them being whisked away by the OG MC. The guys just kinda sad. 2) System punishes bim for not acting in certain ways, forces him to maintain the storyline. I hate those systems. Maybe the MC grows over time, but I really canāt bear to read someone like that for so long. Itās a shame cause the writings so good too.
honestly speaking I live how the transmigrated mc is so cooked cause he keeps attracting FLs while being married to a end game villainess. it's a spectacular story with very stable background and plot. can't wait for Riley to become stronger than the mc Lucas.
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one of the horrible starts to a novel i read... but picks up later on... doesn't draw u in completely as certain descriptions still make it feel like a game instead of reality.. but characters are improving.. and looking forward to the actual story and reasons behind his weird status
It a pretty good read. Though currently, I am super confused on the future of the story. Riley finished his first year, yet he isn't that powerful. Most of the main heroines can one shot him right now. Plus unlike Lucas his future potential is nonexistent. He already is level 100/150, yet he has no A ranked stat. By the time he reaches level 150, I doubt he would even have enough state points to make a single stat reach a S rank. So how in the world is he suppose to deal with Liyana in a year?The Mc really needs a major powerup, cuz he is weak with no future potential.
This novel is all I could ever ask for and some more. One of the rare A ones here. Btw author have you gotten a discord server? If yes then can I get an invite link?
The MC is highly submissive even if you don't like very aggressive characters, it's almost as if he has a secret c**kold fetish. It's almost a headache to seem through when a heroine is even ready to kiss the MC but he won't a take step cause fears a change in narrative of the story (which clearly already happened dude) and wishes that the heroine gets stolen by some other guy. Just take some responsibility of your actions and atleast respect their feelings as the original storyline is already screwed.
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Chapter 73: I don't know how to describe it... But the dialogue are super sticky and incongruent? They are unnatural, I don't know how to describe it, for examples "Ah, such fire in your words, my dear Snow. You've grown stronger since our last encounter, haven't you?" or "I've said this to you back at the airship, but you have grown beautiful, my child. You look more and more like your mother as time goes on..."Ā I forgot some... They sounded super awkward when you read them loud. The writing style is also similarly unnatural, author used accessible prose, but he wrote it in a way that is extremely incongruent and disjointed because of the structure itself. Overall, the narrator don't sound human, neither does the character. Writing quality is 3/5 story developemnt 4/5 The story is 3/5 Character are 4/5 Dialogue 2/5 and overall 3/5
this novel was awfully similar and mixed of some villain kr novel. to the point when mc also become women for short time. i forgot the name. was it fated to be love by villain or other novel but damn i got the de javu reading this shit. (i belive the author will deleted this coment)
The MC is still too weak and Iām completely caught up. The author must change this. On the other hand I hear the WN admins are cracking down heavy on AI, especially if its used for more than editing. If only I had photo evidenceā¦
One of the best books I've read in awhile. everything about it is amazing it has a nice variety in the heroines and the story just sucks you in and before you know it you've caught up to the most recent chapter
Iāll post another update on this review, but so far Iām 10 chapters in and itās a struggle to continue. MC is boring, weak, and stupid. An honestly really unlikeable character, Iām really hoping there is a lot of character development because I wonāt be able to continue if nothing changes. The world building and heroines seem interesting and thatās the only thing thatās kept my attention. If you look through any of the earlier chapter comments itās only people talking shit about the MC, I was honestly suprised I saw so many 5 star reviews. Saying all that though Iām still gonna keep reading and give this book an honest chance. Iām really hoping this book turns out to be worth the effort it is to read it currently š
Very interesting. I just hope that author won't drop this halfway like the other novel...
Clearly, a very Korean inspired novel, especially with the whole academy and extra thing going on Author isn't even being very subtle about that fact lol, MC is a bit annoying but certainly understandable a pretty good and enjoyable read if you like Korean academy novels.
This novel, in my opinion, is just copied from the Korean novel the weakest demon hunter in the academy, live with it.......Oh, it's disappointing
It's a great read; I'm liking it pro now, even though it didn't take many chapters. I have a question, though, author: did your other novel abandon it? It's a novel I liked, "My Family In The Novel?"
Yes. The novel deserves 5 star. I like how author helps the reader to immerse themselves in the plot or any situation, and also I know how challenging it is write a harem genre with yanderes. Unlike other novel, this one actually portrays the girls yandere tendencies in detail - which is another plus. Anyways, I hope the author will not drop this in middle like other novel. Keep up the good work and good luck.
Consider this review as the Q&A section. Chapters will come out daily from now on, there's no specific time frame for the releases. Do tell me your guys' thoughts.
I am not gonna read paid chaps before being sure that its really will have a harem ending, i mean ik it will have, but it gives me the feeling of those types of kr novels where mc just choose only selective few from all the heroines who loves him. I am not really a fan of leaving heroines who obviously love mc, either author forget of them (labelled them as heroines who couldn't acquire their love (mc)) or just make them together with other male characters which basically feels ntr to me and pretty sure its the same for many here. Anyway it was good till i read and if any of you haven't taruma of those things i mentioned above then you can read without any worries
Honestly, as a fan of the harem genre, I like some of the heroines in the novel. But I agree with the comments that mention the MC is unlikable. I also feel that the heroines' love for the MC seems to be due to his charm magic, so it's feel forced. For example, many heroines feel their hearts race when they see the MC (especially evil woman due MC passive skill) . Even the original protagonist (male) feels that way towards both the female and male versions of the MC. Rose only sees colors through the MC, and Alice feels that the MC is her destined partner because she sees a pink color in the MC. I think only Snow is a character where the author successfully shows how she falls in love with the MC. However, it still feels a bit cheap because he saves Snow and claims that he is the only one who truly sees her for who she is. For now, the MC claims that he will marry all five women who love him: Seo, Alice, Snow, Liyana, and Rose. However, the author continues to introduce more heroines who fall in love with the MC. Will Janica become one of them? In the last chapter, she seemed to want to give up her feeling to the original protagonist, her childhood friend, because he don't cares about her too much and feels distant. Meanwhile, the MC has blatantly shown care and helped Janica many times, which makes her heart flutter with excitement. It's a classic trope: when the MC tries to make Janica and Luke, the male protagonist, a couple, does the MC not learn from his previous actions that led Snow to fall in love with the MC instead of Luke?
great story so far, and also i wanted to say thanks for not dropping this book so far and i hope you won't dropped it either and keep writing this book till the end with more fantastic storyline developmentš„š„
The work is well-written, and the settings are well-crafted. However, unfortunately, the MC hasnāt had good mental progression since the first chapter. Heās very dense, takes actions for certain situations but doesnāt follow through, which makes things quite complicated. Itās a love-hate battle with this workāI recommend reading it, but be prepared.
I'm on chapter 40 and I see the tag r18 can anyone whose further ahead in the story let me know if there is r18 romance or is the tag just because of the violence?
Hi. I think the story is kind of exiting. I like stories where MC has some character development and not too OP from the start. Unfortunately the relationship between him and the heroins are bit simp. This is a harem novel , we have the best girls so I don't understand why some readers are complaining about the harem route. That's why most of us are here. So dear Author, 3 is not enough and maybe this is my only complain. I know that Lucas is the Mc but Riley shouldn't entrust his fate to others. Keep up the good work
Honestly the storyās writing and even premise is quite good, but two glaring issues lowers this novels rating quite a bit in my eyes. 1) The MC is essentially a lovestruck fool at the start with no real backbone to speak of. He throws himself into a deadly situation and is only saved by system bullshit, not to mention the āloveā he feels is from when he saw those characters in the game. As in this guy legit fell in love with game characters to feel this way, and now, after being in their world, is almost fascilltating them being whisked away by the OG MC. The guys just kinda sad. 2) System punishes bim for not acting in certain ways, forces him to maintain the storyline. I hate those systems. Maybe the MC grows over time, but I really canāt bear to read someone like that for so long. Itās a shame cause the writings so good too.
honestly speaking I live how the transmigrated mc is so cooked cause he keeps attracting FLs while being married to a end game villainess. it's a spectacular story with very stable background and plot. can't wait for Riley to become stronger than the mc Lucas.
Reveal Spoiler one of the horrible starts to a novel i read... but picks up later on... doesn't draw u in completely as certain descriptions still make it feel like a game instead of reality.. but characters are improving.. and looking forward to the actual story and reasons behind his weird status
It a pretty good read. Though currently, I am super confused on the future of the story. Riley finished his first year, yet he isn't that powerful. Most of the main heroines can one shot him right now. Plus unlike Lucas his future potential is nonexistent. He already is level 100/150, yet he has no A ranked stat. By the time he reaches level 150, I doubt he would even have enough state points to make a single stat reach a S rank. So how in the world is he suppose to deal with Liyana in a year?The Mc really needs a major powerup, cuz he is weak with no future potential.
This novel is all I could ever ask for and some more. One of the rare A ones here. Btw author have you gotten a discord server? If yes then can I get an invite link?
The MC is highly submissive even if you don't like very aggressive characters, it's almost as if he has a secret c**kold fetish. It's almost a headache to seem through when a heroine is even ready to kiss the MC but he won't a take step cause fears a change in narrative of the story (which clearly already happened dude) and wishes that the heroine gets stolen by some other guy. Just take some responsibility of your actions and atleast respect their feelings as the original storyline is already screwed.
Reveal Spoiler Chapter 73: I don't know how to describe it... But the dialogue are super sticky and incongruent? They are unnatural, I don't know how to describe it, for examples "Ah, such fire in your words, my dear Snow. You've grown stronger since our last encounter, haven't you?" or "I've said this to you back at the airship, but you have grown beautiful, my child. You look more and more like your mother as time goes on..."Ā I forgot some... They sounded super awkward when you read them loud. The writing style is also similarly unnatural, author used accessible prose, but he wrote it in a way that is extremely incongruent and disjointed because of the structure itself. Overall, the narrator don't sound human, neither does the character. Writing quality is 3/5 story developemnt 4/5 The story is 3/5 Character are 4/5 Dialogue 2/5 and overall 3/5
this novel was awfully similar and mixed of some villain kr novel. to the point when mc also become women for short time. i forgot the name. was it fated to be love by villain or other novel but damn i got the de javu reading this shit. (i belive the author will deleted this coment)
The MC is still too weak and Iām completely caught up. The author must change this. On the other hand I hear the WN admins are cracking down heavy on AI, especially if its used for more than editing. If only I had photo evidenceā¦
One of the best books I've read in awhile. everything about it is amazing it has a nice variety in the heroines and the story just sucks you in and before you know it you've caught up to the most recent chapter
Iāll post another update on this review, but so far Iām 10 chapters in and itās a struggle to continue. MC is boring, weak, and stupid. An honestly really unlikeable character, Iām really hoping there is a lot of character development because I wonāt be able to continue if nothing changes. The world building and heroines seem interesting and thatās the only thing thatās kept my attention. If you look through any of the earlier chapter comments itās only people talking shit about the MC, I was honestly suprised I saw so many 5 star reviews. Saying all that though Iām still gonna keep reading and give this book an honest chance. Iām really hoping this book turns out to be worth the effort it is to read it currently š
Very interesting. I just hope that author won't drop this halfway like the other novel...
Clearly, a very Korean inspired novel, especially with the whole academy and extra thing going on Author isn't even being very subtle about that fact lol, MC is a bit annoying but certainly understandable a pretty good and enjoyable read if you like Korean academy novels.
This novel, in my opinion, is just copied from the Korean novel the weakest demon hunter in the academy, live with it.......Oh, it's disappointing
It's a great read; I'm liking it pro now, even though it didn't take many chapters. I have a question, though, author: did your other novel abandon it? It's a novel I liked, "My Family In The Novel?"
Yes. The novel deserves 5 star. I like how author helps the reader to immerse themselves in the plot or any situation, and also I know how challenging it is write a harem genre with yanderes. Unlike other novel, this one actually portrays the girls yandere tendencies in detail - which is another plus. Anyways, I hope the author will not drop this in middle like other novel. Keep up the good work and good luck.
Consider this review as the Q&A section. Chapters will come out daily from now on, there's no specific time frame for the releases. Do tell me your guys' thoughts.